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Again, I am left without words. Wunderbaar. Gaara is just described so perfectly.

Holy Shit :blink blink: huuuu.... oh my oh my oh my. How the hell do you this? I must have read like a hundred of your lemons, and every one - God Damn... :bows down low: Hell I'm scraping the floor here. You are UNbelievable - how many times have you rendered me speechless - Do you know how long it takes me to write a review for you? And fully half the amount of time is spend holding my head - breathing - and trying to drag coherent thought out of the mush you've made my brain into.

Okay - I think I'm ready now: First off - the description of the house, it threw me, I was so bewildered - this earthy, gorgeous, near destitute place, with the foliage - I could almost feel the air, heavy and fragrant - the entire description was the definition of Sultry - owned by Gaara. And then the mini freakout and the fight - Savage, but delicate? resulting of fear and desperation on Both parts. Amazing, everything, even Gaara's fucking cock, was symbolic - brilliant. How do you make smut brilliant O.o XD. You're unreal... it's wonderful.

the story's really good..

New Chapter 12... I don't even have words. I'll try: Absolutely arousing, and cathartic at the same time. And Chapter 15 - wow. Shika/Gaara? Never would have thought about it, even, but I love it! Lazy Shika's willing to put a lot of effort into that red-headed boy, eh? Awesome. Awesome, awesome, awesome.

LOVE this fic.

I don't know which one i want to try more, being dominated, or dominating. Gyah! You have them both written very very appelaingly. You're also quick to update, i love that! I love you! You make my day ^_^

I really liked the Shika and Gaara chapter. Good job.

ah, please continue! yay! Naruto will be the permanent dom, yes? Sasuke the Slut. Yes, that sounds about right.

Hey....

FABULOUS story. I'm a fan of Depravity too...good piece to learn about BDSM from. Anyways, I LOVE your frequent updates...LOVE them....esp. when there were multiples ones in a day...the best thing I've ever seen.

That said, I love where you are taking this story....I hope Shikamaru is the one to drop Neji (because he's being the worlds biggest asswipe) and go to Chouji, and that when Neji and Gaara meet/get involved, they "fix" each other (much like in the Virgin Kiss! shocker, I loved that one too!!). I also am a definite KisaIta fan in this one, never woulda thought of Kisame like that, but damn its perfect...you are awesome (not a fan of a blue shark myself...prefer the um...humans...so you rock for your creation in that regard). I also hope they end up together in the end, and that Itachi can accept Kisame truly and learn to live without Sasuke (though I do LOVE a good ItaSasu...yes indeed I do...) Hm...I want Naruto to shove it to Neji too...or at least blow the socks off him...why do I have this insane urge to torture Neji? Well, he is the worlds greatest asswipe (thusfar in this fic, I am a Neji fan, i swear!). I also like the idea of much more Naru:D Sasu:s primarily, with the occasional switch but where this way is the norm.

I'm also a bit curious about the IruKaka...I like that pairing in that way, but so far their relationship seems to be remaining a slight enigma to me (perhaps its just me?)...so I guess, I'm wondering (perhaps stupidly so) are they living together? and if they are, is every moment a D/s one, or are there just "normal" times between them? (realizing that kaka's character has that traumatic past and emotional deficienies etc, so perhaps they cant' ahve normal moments?) that sorta thing...

I also read the "Epilogue" you posted...it was great, and had you decided to end right then, it was perfect. But with more character developement (as will happen with more chapters) it might need to be changed...though I did love it... Also, I'm rather curious about Sasuke's past...from the beating incident to his brother to his current status in life (living on his own? Working? schooling? connection to family? parental issues? all that lovely jazz) though i'm sure most of that will be covered in the future...patience is sometimes not my forte O:-) esp when it comes to FABULOUS fanfics...like yours....why can't people be professional fan fic writers? *le sigh...

Anyways, love it, love it, love it, and please don't stop! And these were just my opinions, I hardly expect you to take them...just wanted to say em...

I know, I know, I'm finally getting to this story and I’ve only got up to chapter 6, but so far this is one effin’ hoot of an AU story! I liked the way you set up the story through the prologue. Something about Naruto as a recovering meth-addict only to become hooked on the whole D/s scene seems so …apropriate. I like the idea of Kakashi becoming Iruka’s ultimate slave. It says that they really gone through a lot together in their D/s relationship. Then the intro to Itachi as the Dom of the city running the most posche BDSM club -– oh, but of course! What else could he be! I loved the way you described the power of Itachi’s eyes and his unscrupulous ways of creating video for his “private collection”. Then moving onto Kakashi’s punishment, which was nothing compared to Naruto’s “retraining of Sasuke, where Naruto finally finds the perfect sub while Sasuke finds his most perfect Dom. And the story flows so tight! I definitely will be bookmarking this one. Back to the rest of the chapters to find out how Itachi is going to take this!

Thanks for inserting the Iruka and Kakashi chapter. I really enjoyed it.