rate_review Reviews

LOL, All the little new notes have me jumping around and re-reading all the things I like, classic example - the very first line of chapter 13: Naruto woke up with Sasuke’s finger in his ass. LOL XD. It's like 6_6 , 9_9 :scratch head: "Huh!?" XD hehehe. Okay real review -

Oooh... Iruka you meanie XD Muahahaha! God how I love the soothing - does medicated lube really exist? It's such a good idea - it probably does. Same as lube with peppermint oil or pepper should exist - ooh the tingly XD... Okay getting distracted.

Oh my that little twist at the end loved it, Kakashi fucking Iruka up against the door :nosebleed: and the little tip about the neighbours XD LOL :heart: If you can't beat 'em - Join 'Em XD.

That certainly was worth the wait!

so omg im in love with this story more again. i love gaara watching them on the monitors, (and how itachi asked him to keep recording >_<) and trying to understand them. i can see total gaa/naru coming, and i can imagine sasuke's jealous face right now (adorable) and the claim/make up sex (HOTT). i also love that sai is there, because i love sai, he's awesome, and i love that there's ita/sai in the future (i can smell it ^.^) because ita/sai is an awesome awesome pairing that doesn't get enough love. anyways, continued fic luff ^.^

...I like you. :)

I think i love you. Words cannot express how much I'm loving this fic.

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*suppresses urge to mash keyboard*

mk...you say there is art..but where actually is the link??..it's no good working us up, and then not having the link..

Just wanted to mention how great this story is again. It makes me so delightfully happy that you update so fast and with some form of regularity! I wish I could do the same!

Things I am looking foward to:
Can't wait to see the shopping trip and the attempts on Sasuke's person by Naruto. Ooh! Naruto's sub session as well should be exciting... (*insert possible figging suggestion here* Just cause it's awesomely hot :P ) Am rather excited at the mention of Uchihacest (my favorite...) The Itachi sub chapter should be nice and tasty :P (personally I like your Itachi - the chapter when he met Naruto for the first time and was all like DOM! was exceptional and very sexy...) I also look foward to more Neji (he is the god of my idolitry...and... well.. Sasuke as well :P...oh and Itachi ...oh... /shakes head i'm hopeless sometimes)

I really liked your take on Gaara in this last chapter. I would like to see someone with him, possibly teaching him from the bottom, what it's all about, being gentle and all that and that it doesn't have to be all about pain and being hardcore ALL the time (although that is very nice too :P). That would be rather sweet and nice to see. He needs some love :S I feel, even watching the anime or reading the manga, that he is a decent person, just...lost. Unable to find that critical little thing that he's been deprived of all his life. The thing that causes laughter, finds friendship, creates love where there was none before... (forgive me, i ramble.../cough )

This is the ONLY story i have EVER had on my bookmarks...THE ONLY ONE in the long 3 years i have been reading fanfiction.

Take from that what you will...

Forgive me for the horrendouly long review but...things to say just kept coming up :P

Keep up the awesome, amazing, intriguing work!

<3 Hella

Good chapter! I am quite intrigued by the idea of a DP chapter - I've been thinking about writing one of those, so I've been doing some 'research' (hmm hm hm -I think I was Jiraiya in a past life) and I'd be very interested to see someone else - whose writing I enjoy - tackle that daunting task. But you've been doing so well with all these other potentially squicky things, so - I can't wait!

I absolutely loved that look into Gaara's mixed up head. That was just awesome. His confusion is so - creepy, and somehow endearing at the same time. Naruto is silly in the morning. Funny!

And Kakashi's gonna get it, hmmm? Mwah ha ha ha! *rubs hands together* Looking forward to it! ...And, images of Ibiki and Itachi are now permanently burned into my brain. Thank you. I mean it.

I did have one question - you mentioned a three week relationship, I think in the scene with Itachi and Kisame. I wasn't very clear on who the relationship was with. Was it Itachi and a sub, or Kisame and a sub?

Keep up the good work! Ten stars!

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! i love gaara. and i love more that he is obsessed with naruto. oh and you make sasuke and naruto so cute! i love it!

I love your story!!!!!! It's hott!! can't wait for the next Chappie!