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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh.... Oh. I just realized that, if I'm reading it right, you probably meant an Itachi+Sasuke DP. Ah ha ha ha. *Dies from happiness*
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woo-hoo! There's public sex - sex within the scene, within an atmosphere that encourages it - and then there's *public* sex - like in a public place, separated from strangers by only a thin curtain. Nice.
I loved Sasuke's thoughts in the last section - describing what it was about being a sub that he needed so much. A lot of sense was made, there. And those 'needing nothing/having nothing' lines - very good stuff.
Again, I look forward to your next update!
I loved Sasuke's thoughts in the last section - describing what it was about being a sub that he needed so much. A lot of sense was made, there. And those 'needing nothing/having nothing' lines - very good stuff.
Again, I look forward to your next update!
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thats right completely ignore neji and walk out. that boy has never been too great anyway.
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First off, I'm so happy you decided to contuine! I just love all the h o t stuff between Naruto and Sasuke. Please please keep it up. Hey glad you didn't wait till Thursday to post again:)You're the best!!!!!!!!
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm learning so much from this fic. i'm not really sure if i would be a dom or a sub if given the chance. i think i would enjoy being the sub more.
i love how naruto is w/ sasuke. 1 minute he's the naruto that we all know & love & the next he's the sexy & hot dom. i don't think i want to read about naruto submitting to sasuke. he's the perfect dom.
i absolutely love this fic. thank you for the chapter.
i love how naruto is w/ sasuke. 1 minute he's the naruto that we all know & love & the next he's the sexy & hot dom. i don't think i want to read about naruto submitting to sasuke. he's the perfect dom.
i absolutely love this fic. thank you for the chapter.
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story so much! :) i wait impatiently for every chapter, it's such a good thing you update quickly, i think that with my current level of addiction to the story i wouldn't be able to survive more than a week without an update! :) i love your creation of naruto and sasuke, as for itachi and the people complaining - heck, you're just original with him! when you look at him, he's not really a super alpha seme as some depict him, he's so short and fragile :D. hehe i also like the fact that neji is so mean - i hate the guy :).
anyway, please keep up the marvelous work - and update quickly :)!
kisses
anyway, please keep up the marvelous work - and update quickly :)!
kisses
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay i had to read it again. you know i didn't get the part about sasuke walking a little bit behind naruto at first. i thought it was to check his ass but after reading it again i get it.
i really want someone to walk in on them, preferably neji. that would be awesome.
i really want someone to walk in on them, preferably neji. that would be awesome.
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh and i'm also happy you got this many reviews, i guess it's a good thing for a writer. i don't remember any story getting over a hundred responses in less than a week :D!
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My god, you called your stuff tame compared to mine??? NO WAY! Hestia, your story is SO VERY VERY VERY much more intense than mine! You've gone everywhere I've chickened out on! LOL!! And you've done it SO WELL! Keep the masochism in your story ;-)
I'm TOTALLY honored that I inspired you :-D That is the GREATEST compliment! And I'm giving it back - you've inspired me to keep going on my own story. In the meantime, I'll drink in the perfection you've given us and will let it get me back in the mood for a little PUNISHMENT!
Lots of LOVE!!!!
I'm TOTALLY honored that I inspired you :-D That is the GREATEST compliment! And I'm giving it back - you've inspired me to keep going on my own story. In the meantime, I'll drink in the perfection you've given us and will let it get me back in the mood for a little PUNISHMENT!
Lots of LOVE!!!!
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh God, you horrible little tease!!! This is soooo hot. How am I supposed to get any sleep now?
Please mistress, be kind and let there be another chapter waiting when I wake up! *Blue eyes blink up begging under a sheen of unspilt tears*
Please mistress, be kind and let there be another chapter waiting when I wake up! *Blue eyes blink up begging under a sheen of unspilt tears*