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LOL, Well your sense of humour was in fine form for this chapter XD. It made it really hard for me to read (when I smile too much/hard my eyes crinkle up and everything gets blurry O.o). Although that wasn't a bad thing :D. I love your take on the cock naming ceremony (Oh God Beanpole! XD) and I loved it even more when Gaara wasn't sure if Naruto was serious or not XD, seriously I was LMAO!

This story is like a conglomeration of all the finer points of your other stories, It's nice, it makes everything come together. I love virginal, clueless Gaara, he's so freaking adorable, like a little pitbull puppy. He so would be a stalker/voyeur in a situation like his too.

I also really like the Uchiha club policies. It covers their ass quite sufficiently in a literally risky business.

Oh and I'm sorry I didn't mention it but Judo doesn't have katas in the same was that karate does. you don't need to change anything in the text cause, you can still have classes, but while karate katas can be done alone, to do a judo kata you need a partner. O.o I'm not explaining this well - Okay - kata means form. In Karate they string the forms together, almost like a dance that you can practice. In judo the forms are kept separate and mainly consist of grappling techniques and throws, ways of arresting and directing another's movements. Did that make sense? This might help http://www.judoinfo.com/katamenu.htm

Oh and Ibiki/Itachi goodness O.O :holds nose and runs for tissues: XD

Last thing - is there a link to view the art? Cause I'd really like to see it.

Oh and I have art for you too, it's no where near as cool as Aida's I found the link in the reviews, but it's cute. I still have to gear up the courage to try drawing my first actual sex scene O.o, but between you, Animehead and Zrina, I'm getting there really quickly. But I'm not sure where to post the pic that's open to public viewing :(, I guess could get a livejournal account specifically for that, but in the meantime it's up in deviant art and y!Gallery.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/53379248/

http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/view/281278/

yay! newe chapter! i'm a feind.... hehheheh i love itachi's reaction. damn man...i swear you are the freakin best.

THAT IS SO NOT ITACHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HOW CAN YOU DO THAT TO MY BABY!!!

Wow! You posted fast! I go visit the parents for one weekend and come back to THIS! (read: all sorts of drool-worthy goodies.) I'm glad you decided to go longer with this. It's very intriguing to see what feels like to me as an accurate portrayal of the BDSM scene. I think writing it in such a way that doesn't squick the normal populace is very impressive (can I consider myself normal...probably not anymore T_T). The plot is also very fascinating. I think it fitting that Itachi is the catalyst to the conflicts. I'm very fascinated by this piece and I hope you keep on writing!

Thanks for recommending ffpanda's Depravity and Depravity 1.0. I've never read any Gravitation but I still enjoyed both stories. If you have anymore recommendations, please send them our way.

Thanks for also updating your story again. I like the interaction between Itachi and Kisame in the last chapter (11) and also the introduction of Sai. I kind of like the idea of Itachi and Sai together - thanks to a certain story by I believe the author is Animehead.

Yay! You've decided to continue. Great work! I absolutely love this story, and you, of course. lol.
I like the mentalities of Sasuke and Itachi. I don't know; it seems so like them. And the little one-sided Uchihacest is incredibly hot, even though it's such an evil little tease. Could Itachi and Sasuke f*** at least once before the Collaring Ceremony? oh pleeeaaase?

but I like the story the way it is, and whatever you plan to do with it, I'll love that, too. keep up the great work!!

I bow down b4 skill. i love the story not to mention your writing style. i've read the traveling pussy, virgin kiss and your loveless story. love them all.
I wanted to know if we will get a glimpse of orochimarus s&m club. if so is it possible that you put a little temari/hinata action in there. i's my fav pairing that's really hard to find. also i'd love to see how you'd interperate that all of your stories throw me for a loop something akin to shock with massive waves of pleasure.
well i cant wait for the next part and wish you well


Gaara/Neji 4 evah!
DeathjunkE

Nice twist, I like how Itachi's all conflicted on the NaruSasu issue, it's a lot more realistic than most portrayals of their relationship, although I do so love hardcore Uchihacest. And hn, I see Sai has made an appeareance XD. ItaSai hotness ;D, Loving it. So Itachi is the great white whale huh, the undeniable obsession, no matter the cost to health and happiness. Very interesting, it's a beautiful analogy really. I love the direction this story is taking, it's a very broad scope for you, but you are managing it beautifully as expected.

i find garra calling someone elsee insane so damn hilarious its funny. iruka's psyco... *giggles stpidly* i enjoyed it.