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Hm. interesting. though you started to mess up the dates at the beginning of chapters. after we got past sun the 17th it was mon the 18th and then sunday the 18th and you kept switching.

Though looking at it i think you over did the smut scenes. well not really. but timeline wise. I thinkg you needed to do less chapters per day. 86 chapters of sex for 3 days timeline? kinda of extreme.

if you are planning on doing anything with the plot. keep the smut scenes the same or however you plan them, just add a couple extra paragraphs to move the storyline along at the botom of future chapters. and you can spread out the experimenting different styles over separate days, (cause i doubt anyone could come up wiht that many ideas that you have a couple come up with in a day. it reminds me of the TV show 24 Hours. it takes longer then that to get everything moving.


Well goodluck on future fics. and does anyone know how to reply to reviews you recieve on stories? (i put my e-mail in profile so that i can be contacted) but it seems impossible to contact other members on here. Can't even use a profile to send a PM. (though i guess i could check out forums for that?)

*shudders*
i know this line is not exactly new, but i couldn't help flipping through your stories, i think i've read about every story you have posted on this site and this one, of course, took the longest to read. I LOVED IT!!!!
and btw... while there may have been a couple parts that on their own would have been squicky, the rest of the story created a balance and i couldn't help but read it to the end. and i'm happy that naruto and sasuke finally managed to "get together" somehow!!! *whines* too much hot stuff and wild sex and gorgeous bodies. too good!!!
*faints*

Aw, dude, you're amazing. It took me three days to read ALL of this (thus far...and with seemingly never ending objections) and you are AMAZING! I found this link in one of the stories i found on fanfiction.net and Dear lord, my thanks to you for gracing me with boredom, if not...I wouldn't have been able to read this. Dude thats horrible! Lol. Anyway, I loved it. The Hiashi(not quite sure how to spell that) Kimimaru(same with this one) freaked me out a little bit in the begining, but i got used to it I suppose; My favorites though are all the Shikamaru/Gaara scenes, provocative(sp?)innocent, and just so damn sweet! Thank you once again, and i'll be checking for more. Lol, in total, how many days have passed in this story?

I would just like to comment and say that I hope, whenever you decide to continue "D/s Naruto," that you keep the versions you wrote after your laptop was stolen, especially the Gaara/Shikamaru parts. I loved what you did with them, and I feel that those versions have a certain depth to them that the original ones lacked. They resonate more with a sense of love that is quieter, yet more powerful, with a stronger sense of who Gaara is, who Shikamaru is, separately, and how they're growing together as a couple, growing into a deeper understanding.

Oh, I really love the NarutoxSasuke scenes, especially when Sasuke is being so uncertain. Submissive Sasuke is so poignant. Even when Naruto subs, you write it so it's just a role for him to play, not what he really needs. But when Sasuke subs, he just throws his whole soul into it. More, more, more please!

Holy Fucking Shit Hestia!! I've read this story once already and I became addicted!!!! I've lost count of the times I've drooled on my keyboard!!! All I can say is, keep up the good(and unbelieviably sexy)work!!!!!!!!! <(^.^)>

please please pleeeaaasseeee write more!!! this is the best goddamned story i've EVER read, and that's saying somthing!!!! oh, and in case nebody asks i'm over the age of 18. which i'm not by 6 almost 5 years, but nobody else needs to know that!!!! XD neways, i loved ur story, it actually had a plot, not just sex, sex and more sex!! i congraduate you on that fabulous achievement!!!! hope you write more soon!!!
sincerely, your probably youngest fan,
Areata_Kaze

Sorry drugs are a big turn off, I love your stories but...I didn't get past the Meth

This is the best.

It has been a while but ... Ohhh!! I loved reading every single chapter, little by little!! You're such a fabulous writer!! I just got to chapter 83/82 of the Ibi/Rai/Gen and ... Oh My God!! - I just fell in love with the wonderful description you made of Genma's feelings. I baddly shivered!! The way he cries ... The way he begged ... The way he just submitted to the people he loves ... It's amazing!! It touches in a way that just doesn't make your hormones go nuts ... It makes you cry!! I did, cause it caught my heart in a blissfull way ... It's written in a way that's made to look realistic!! I can't believe how much thought you put into something so smutty and breathtaking!! It's amazing!! Tnak you for sharing every single chapter with us!! Thank you!! Thank you!! Beautiful!! Beautiful!! I really can't write a good review at the moment ... I'd love to, but my mind is working like mad and I can't really pick up the pieces. It's so amazing! I hope I used the right words!!

You put something amazing into this that makes my knees weak ... And it's not just because of the sex scenes - because I do admit they are beautifully written and smexy as hell!! But ... There is an amazing work behind it that envolves the heart, the body, the soul and the mind - The MIND!! God!! It's like ... A chocolate cheese cake!! I hope I got my words right!! Xd I love chocolate cheese cakes like I love this fanfiction ... And I will always keep saying that it takes you away!!

Please continue as soon as you can!! And keep up the beautiful work!!