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for D/s Naruto

by Hestia

person Anon
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was the most sexiest sex scene i have ever read keep doing a shagg worthy job of this story.
person Zrina
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
/is dead
/is speechless
/is one helluva happy camper
/is loving every freakin line of this story
person Allys
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Once again - I adore you. Hello my little cream pies and Oh my God Kisame so would be a big black man, just how I like them. Oh my oh my. I love that little twist, who knew that love would be the secret behind it all.

LOL, big bad Zabuza running from Iruka - Priceless. I also love the little bits of insight to the dynamics of the club and the world. Oh and is everyone in this - Fucking A+++

Muahahaha! XD. Oh MY! It's Definitely a Blue Moon. So Hott!!! Oh man, I'm all keyed up now, I can't sleep now, is that it for tonight?? :whimpers: I know I'm a bastard, who would ever complain, you wrote 9 chapters in one day - Lady you, sighs... you're like drugs. Yeah LOL, D/s Naruto Yaoi, my drug of choice XD.
person yaoigurl91
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! For once in my life im speechless.
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have seen this story listed occasionally but never read it because I am not into BDSM. But tonight I was really bored and saw nothing else that was recent and looked interesting. On a whim I tried this story and I am sold.
It is funny, emotional and just sheer interesting. As a writer you rock! Can't wait for more updates.
person danielle
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love you so much! this is my dream fic!
person Sekre
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I adore it!
person HumanInfiltrator
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW. What can I say?

Update soon!?!?!?
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...

I have never quite enjoyed a story as much as i'm enjoying this one! Most people writing about a D/s scene or incorportaing it into their stories have no idea what they are doing. Its refreshing to find someone who does...

>.>

Just one tiny tiny request...if you feel the need to grant it...

I would adore you forever if you would possibly add some Neji/shikamaru... I saw the pairing mentioned and just went 'wow...that would be unbearably hot...' Neji as a Dom... *drifts off into subspace* LOL!
person puccachu
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW
sorrie i didn't get to read this before~
but i finally got to read it!
as u can see hehe
it's tense man! lol
i love it!
there are real emotions in the writing~
even making me teary lol
yet again! LOVE IT!