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for D/s Naruto

by Hestia

schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woooohhhh. Two chapters at once.... yay! I was starting to worry about Naruto there for a minute. (Even so, I thought it was really hot when Naruto came on his face...) I'm glad he started to get it together. He just had to get the edge off, ne? Loved how Sasuke went from bitchy-sub to sucking, moaning, cumming sub. The image of him *just barely* poking his tongue out to lick Itachi's boot was... *shiver*.

Broken Sasuke! Hooray!

Two more awesome, sexy chapters. Looking forward to more. ^_^
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woooow...that was hot and kinky. Not my usual cup of tea but it was definitely spicy and left me with a craving for more. I'm keeping this one under my favorite tab to check on every once in a while. Please keep updating! I would love to find out what happens next.
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoa. i don't think i ever read something so S&M before, but I like it. this is also the first iruka/kakashi i read. interesting how you seemed to have "switched" the roles. keep up the good work.
person animehead
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. *hugs you* You have no idea how much I love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.

You're amazing...still speechless...
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great fic, I love when Naruto is the dom in the fics. I hope you up date soon >.< I would like to keep reading your story.
person Sama
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy...christ..O___O Thats all I can say after reading your latest update and DANNNNNNNNNNGGG! OMG! LOVED IT!! UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN!! AHHHH!!! Ttul! ^^
person jinx
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Will three words be enough for a review?It doesn't matter I'll say it anyway.MORE!UPDATE SOON!
person tovah
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so good! I have never really read anything like this before. I am so in love with it. It is super hot! I love how Sasuke starts off rebelling but submits to Naruto when he starts to enjoy it. I think you are brilliant for writhing this. Please, Master Keep up the good work and update soon.
person Allys
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! HESTIA!!! SQUEEE I'm SO Freaking HAPPY right now :Glomps you, Rolls you around on the ground and Gropes you: LOL, I haven't even read it yet XD, but I LOVE YOU ALREADY!!! I just read the fucking summary and the fucking warnings :Happy dancing: I need to calm down XD, I'll leave a real review after I read it! And 6 chapters!!! Oh God woman you really are my goddess, falls to my knees in worship. Hold the presses you are so getting art for this!!!
person Zrina
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, just when I thought it couldn't get any better!! OMG!!!!! more, more, more :D