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for D/s Naruto

by Hestia

person Anna
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn your fast... and good... and I can't say anything coherent right now!!!

Thank you! Thank you for this great story!
person meadowspeak
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Two words, "Damn Good!"

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person Anna
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, Itachi and Kisame? Lovers? But oh so fucking hot. It really gets better and better!!! And I'm off to bed now before another chapter keeps me awake ;P But I wouldn't mind a good morning read... ;DD
person jinx
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was good.I can't wait to read more!Update soon.
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DAMN! You are an evil Dom, aren't you.

I think I love you!
person ShadowofLight
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Three words come to mind right now: Holy, Fucking, Hell. Yeah not original but this, this is a first! I have never read a fic where Iruka was the seme and the whole D/s enviroment made it so much more! I am very clearly impressed. I cannot wait to read the rest for I know it will be jsut as good--if not better--than the previous chapters.
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yes. I love D/s, love BDSM. And Kakashi and Sasuke as subs? Delicious. I really like the way you've translated the characters from anime characters to more real-world people. Can't find the right words for that, but... like Kakashi's white-blond hair, and the blood vessel that burst in his eye, Iruka's mild-mannered softy personality that hides his Dom persona, 'foolish little brother'...

Kakashi's punishment scene is hot (hope there will be more of those) and I am *really* looking forward to Sasuke's sub session.
person ALD
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I can't even put into words how hot that was. Iruka/Kakashi is my fave pairing, and reading that last chapter was...wow. Totally speechless. I love coming home from a sucky day at work to find fiction like this. Really, really hope to see an update soon.
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
my god! *massive nosebleed* that was HOT as fuck! omg, seme naruto makes you wanna just cream in your pants. you've gained a fangirl for life with this fic. eagerly looking foward to your next update. god,
person animehead
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are a wicked person. You're a seme aren't you. LOL I just know you are!

Whew...a three chapters in one day. God! I am so happy and even more addicted. I could picture what Sasuke and Naruto were both wearing.

This is probably one of the hottest things I have read so far. I'm still loving you! I can't wait for the next one!