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for D/s Naruto

by Hestia

person animehead
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jesus, Hestia! Are you trying to kill me! This is just too fucking much. I almost fell off of my bed reading this because I couldn't take my eyes off of my laptop for one second.

I feel so inadequate now. Like I can't write a lemon anymore. LOL God...this was by far the sexiest thing ever. *bows to you* My God...I'm speechless.
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the Iru/Kaka chapter, chapter 2? Good stuff. I don't know why, but Naruto's disappointing me. All I keep thinking is what the hell kinda Dom is he? Pull it fuckin' together!

Anyway, I'm a fan of D/s and/or BDSM fics. So I am particularly enjoying this fic. Looking forward to more.
person burr
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a narusasu story with great potential, what could make my day better? :) i really hope you'll update soon!
person mydarkerside
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's really twisted, but it's really honest and those two things together make me very curious...update?
person noface
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it, jaa. Continue, and sasuke is the perfect sub, he really is. I don't know why there isn't more uKe!sasuke, ja, well, CONTINUE please, I like you characterization of naruto, is very good, he'll do the damage needed to undo sasuke, MORE!
person Anon
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
if this is meant to be a oneshot it shouldnt be. there are not nearly enough good bdsm fics and yours so far is well written and compelling, i think you should continue...
person KariNeko
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wooow, I really hope you update this soon! It's already so good and I can't wait for Naruto and Sasuke to meet and have some fun! ;3
person jinx
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The beginning is great.I can't wait to read more.Update soon.
person animehead
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I...I...I think I love you.

OMG I am dying to read more of this. This was such a tease! I'm already addicted to this story.

Your descriptions are amazing and well the whole concept is hot as hell. God...I will TRY to wait patiently for you to update. Yeah right! I'll be sitting here going nuts until you do.

*feels like screaming and squealing*
person jonas
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
now i think i'll die waiting for an update! the story's so hot! :)