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January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now this is because aff.net was beinga b**ch, and would not let me review this story anymore then once in a day. so here it is...
chapter 15
i must admit i was not so sure how i would feel about gaara being with shikamaru. however i have to say that i like this turn for the better. In a way i think that was exactly what Shika was looking for when he mentioned neji not leading him to his next level...not showing him what he is capable of. .....i like it. want to read more with the two of them.
16
I can not help but smile when they talk so raunchy to one another….makes me need to go have a liedown. Lol
17
I want that backyard….it’s my new goal in life…I wish I could see it. Gaara is so hot,
20-21
Iruka and kakashi are so beautiful together.
22
I love the fretting sasuke, it is so good. I really love how he went from sasuke to sasuke-slut over the phone in the blink of an eye.
23
That was a really horrable image of gaaras dead father. However it was really cute when I think of gaara taking care of shika….
24
I love the dinner scene, and its sad that naruto thinks sasuke would only agree to be his with a 2.5 million dollar collar
26
I love the part of them letting gaara show of at the party by wipping cigarettes out of ppls mouths.
29
Domestic shikamaru how cute.
30
I am so glad I stayed up so late reading this story, I think that THIS is now by favorite chapter. Sasuke went insane. You just cant go wrong with that.
38
Kisame finally got his itachi
48
Shika and gaara seem to like live in there own world.
51
I am like NO not kakashi and iruka. They belong together…but at least kakashi knows that and soon so will iruka.
53
Yay! I swear they are too sweet for words. I have to agree with shika, on how others must have wanted gaara but were to afraid to get near him. That fact that gaara is willing to wear a collar too is almost to perfect. BTW I think your Shikamaru is the hottest one I have ever had the privilage to read. The hair was just an added touch of hotness.
76
Lol lol….poor sasori, what a thing to miss.
84
Ooo that was hot Sasuke and Naruto, i wonder what sasuke will say about his clothing. Are Kakashi and Iruka going to find themselves out of the scene??? If they are going to get married. It makes me wonder how Iruka got into this type of life style. We know how a lot of the other characters got into it, found the appeal. But not Iruka.
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Gaara makes me wish i had a cock, just so i could have the hope of tapping that ass.....ah Shikamaru is one lucky sod. They make one hell of an attractive couple. I like shikamarus mom she runs her hope.
Well i hope this is alright as far a reviews go. I wish i could have done them one at a time, i most likely would have but more detail into them if i could have. but i think you get the idea of how much i enjoy this story.
chapter 15
i must admit i was not so sure how i would feel about gaara being with shikamaru. however i have to say that i like this turn for the better. In a way i think that was exactly what Shika was looking for when he mentioned neji not leading him to his next level...not showing him what he is capable of. .....i like it. want to read more with the two of them.
16
I can not help but smile when they talk so raunchy to one another….makes me need to go have a liedown. Lol
17
I want that backyard….it’s my new goal in life…I wish I could see it. Gaara is so hot,
20-21
Iruka and kakashi are so beautiful together.
22
I love the fretting sasuke, it is so good. I really love how he went from sasuke to sasuke-slut over the phone in the blink of an eye.
23
That was a really horrable image of gaaras dead father. However it was really cute when I think of gaara taking care of shika….
24
I love the dinner scene, and its sad that naruto thinks sasuke would only agree to be his with a 2.5 million dollar collar
26
I love the part of them letting gaara show of at the party by wipping cigarettes out of ppls mouths.
29
Domestic shikamaru how cute.
30
I am so glad I stayed up so late reading this story, I think that THIS is now by favorite chapter. Sasuke went insane. You just cant go wrong with that.
38
Kisame finally got his itachi
48
Shika and gaara seem to like live in there own world.
51
I am like NO not kakashi and iruka. They belong together…but at least kakashi knows that and soon so will iruka.
53
Yay! I swear they are too sweet for words. I have to agree with shika, on how others must have wanted gaara but were to afraid to get near him. That fact that gaara is willing to wear a collar too is almost to perfect. BTW I think your Shikamaru is the hottest one I have ever had the privilage to read. The hair was just an added touch of hotness.
76
Lol lol….poor sasori, what a thing to miss.
84
Ooo that was hot Sasuke and Naruto, i wonder what sasuke will say about his clothing. Are Kakashi and Iruka going to find themselves out of the scene??? If they are going to get married. It makes me wonder how Iruka got into this type of life style. We know how a lot of the other characters got into it, found the appeal. But not Iruka.
86
Gaara makes me wish i had a cock, just so i could have the hope of tapping that ass.....ah Shikamaru is one lucky sod. They make one hell of an attractive couple. I like shikamarus mom she runs her hope.
Well i hope this is alright as far a reviews go. I wish i could have done them one at a time, i most likely would have but more detail into them if i could have. but i think you get the idea of how much i enjoy this story.
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chapter 4
that was so hot. Naruto went crazy for a minute. i like how he filled Sasuke with his own spunk, never really thought of that one but i must admit i like it.
that was so hot. Naruto went crazy for a minute. i like how he filled Sasuke with his own spunk, never really thought of that one but i must admit i like it.
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chapter 5
this has to be my favorite one so far, sasuke breaking...beautiful. i wonder why itachi was like it was kind of wrong to have a tape of his brother in his collection, but he dominates sasuke? ah i don't really care...sorta.
this has to be my favorite one so far, sasuke breaking...beautiful. i wonder why itachi was like it was kind of wrong to have a tape of his brother in his collection, but he dominates sasuke? ah i don't really care...sorta.
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chapter 9
i bet itachi got a laugh off hearing iruka screw kakashi..over the same thing he yelled at him for.
i bet itachi got a laugh off hearing iruka screw kakashi..over the same thing he yelled at him for.
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!! Just reading it has a smile supperglued onto my face. A jealous sasuke and him fainting is really the best. The fact that they called him tamed....sorta....ah i am too happy to adequately express my gratitude towards you for sharing this with me.
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!! Just reading it has a smile supperglued onto my face. A jealous sasuke and him fainting is really the best. The fact that they called him tamed....sorta....ah i am too happy to adequately express my gratitude towards you for sharing this with me.
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
reading even the prologue was enticing!
I found a link of this on an author's homepage so im really looking forward to reading this
XD
yosh onto my next chapter!
I found a link of this on an author's homepage so im really looking forward to reading this
XD
yosh onto my next chapter!
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter/prologue
i have been intending on reading this....now i just started. i love it. i love the D/s, so drool worthy. i feel like naruto where is the sub of my dreams....:)
i have been intending on reading this....now i just started. i love it. i love the D/s, so drool worthy. i feel like naruto where is the sub of my dreams....:)
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you'll continue the story.
Please write more Naru/Sasu.
Please write more Naru/Sasu.
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hestia!! Are you okay?? Is the computer okay?? There hasn't been an update in ages (when they were daily) so just wondering what was up?? Not writer's block I hope? Something less hampering? RL perhaps?? Because that's not the ending umm right?? Naruto does still have to sub. And Sasuke's gotta be collared.. And there has to be some more Gaara/Shika in there somewhere.. I Know that there are all the characters in there now really but I'm happy if it's just the main pairings. Hope you're okay and that... There will be more chapters soon.. Take Care!!!
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January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the recreations better, especially the phone calls. I'd leave it as is, but that's just me.