rate_review Reviews

I'm very glad you didn't make this the conclusion. I didn't even read the whole thing, because the portrayal's of Sasuke and Naruto didn't mesh with the rest of the story, at least it didn't feel like it. The way the Uchiha story was thrown out was slipshod, so I'm really glad you continued it instead. Bringing it out with Itachi was more poignant.

Awesome chapter!
I love the story line you have here; man...

I'd love to see more Saso/dei in here. I love the sound of it. Hell, add third person again because fuck that was incredible. XD

Awesome job hun~

Hello, I'm Stark. I've just discovered D/s Naruto through a friend in narutoyaoi at LJ. I'm loving the story so far, very nicely written, hawt, all that. It's great! I just wanted to review chapter 72... 72? I think so. Go Sai! That was awesome! I was wondering if you were going to bring in the confrontation with him and Neji's uncle. I have a soft spot in my heart for justifiable revenge. I will review more when I finish the story.

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hey there haven't reviewed in a while and im sorry. I just wanted to say in itachi's defence doing all that at once is hard! i should know..... :)

Oh my! I sure hope that you update this wonderful story soon.

Gods I love this story so very much...I mean I know these are just temporary chapters and don't really continue the story but I really do enjoy reading anything related to this fic! I really hope to see some new proper chapters up soon, I have been following this story from the very start (since chapter 1 first came up...I just haven't commented before because I forgot that I had an account here *feels like an idiot*) I've even gotten a few other people I know hooked on it as well lol.
You are so skilled in getting the characters so perfect and tweaking them so they still resemble the original characters but in this AU setting, the story is fantastic and the smut...oh kami the smut. That has to be some of the hottest stuff I've read in Naruto fiction, plus I really must give you props for continuing such a long running series which never gets dull!

I think I've read all the chapters about twenty times (so far). That's what this story does for me.

I can sum up D/s Naruto thusly: If it was Hestia's intent to take the slashy subtext of the Naruto universe to the extreme in her fanfic, well...she succeeds admirably.

I'll tell you what--it will be a while before I tire of the Naruto fandom, that's for sure.

Needless to tell you, this one makes my list of recommended reading.

I don't think that the Ita/Sas chapter was icky at all. I personally find Itachi x Sasuke more than tantalizing. Of course, this is a very interesting plot and I am loving the progression of it. So many stories running alongside each other. Very awesome and well written. I love the WAY you write. It keeps things moving and very interesting...never boring. In fact, I don't think there has been a lull since I started reading. I can't wait to see what happens between Naruto and Sasuke. I think Sasuke has become my favorite character in this whole story. I can't exactly put my finger on the reason why. He's just such a deeply intricate character struggling with so many emotions and feelings. You are a master. I think you should win some sort of Fanfiction Award for this! Are you planning to go to Yaoi-Con this year? I was thinking it would be a cool idea if all the writers/artists there would wear black tee shirts with their pen-name in white letters on the front and/or back so that their readers and admirers could recognize them and give a hug or a high five or whatever! Just an idea! I will explore it further when the time comes closer.

You have combined two of my favorite things naruto and kink. Kudos you get cookies thank you :)

ohh the smutty goodness. You captured my on going love hate relationship with the spanking bench. :)