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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, the old epilogue goes after ch. 5? That can't be right...
Hmm...of the two old chapters, I like the original/lost/found 86 better ^^
Hmm...of the two old chapters, I like the original/lost/found 86 better ^^
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the story "as is" and believe everything happens for a reason.
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HI,
great that you got that hard drive back.
I prefer the chapters that you wrote at last not the ones you rediscovered. For one, I prefer the phone discussion of Gaara and Shika's Mom where Shika's dad calls back.
The epilogue was really cute though I thought Sasuke got his collar too hasty. It felt a little hurried to the end though that seems partly intended by the characters.
I just LOVE GaaShikaGaa
and all the other pairings!
Great story!
great that you got that hard drive back.
I prefer the chapters that you wrote at last not the ones you rediscovered. For one, I prefer the phone discussion of Gaara and Shika's Mom where Shika's dad calls back.
The epilogue was really cute though I thought Sasuke got his collar too hasty. It felt a little hurried to the end though that seems partly intended by the characters.
I just LOVE GaaShikaGaa
and all the other pairings!
Great story!
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. It's... wow.
I have no strong opinions on Naruto and Sasuke... skip forward a week or what. :3 I do want to see more of Ibiki, Genma, and Raidou, and Shikamaru's MOM still fills me with laughter. Dinner with the Sunas is looking to be another glorious trainwreck I'd like to see... and I spent my weekend rereading Iruka and Kakashi and Kisame and Itachi. Mmm.
On Naruto's dad... sometimes the simple things are the most WTF and hardest to deal with. I always thought he just... left. Just left, because martial arts was more important to him, and there wasn't a place in his life for a son instead of a student. It could be more sordid than that, that's just what I assumed had happened.
Hiashi/Kimimaro- my opinion is either to work it in or forget it... but leave it up in a "lost chapters" part in case anyone wants to see.
Gaara/Shikamaru- HEE HEE HEE HIS MOM! I love Shika's mom. I think the new version of his mom's initial answering machine is better.
XD Though Gaara getting her to hang up was pretty darn GREAT. Still, I don't think new-version!mom would have hung up like that... unless it was some sort of scream of rage before coming over there to bash some heads.
So... this was sweet, and I like it... though I like the other too. Ano... roll dice? ^^; 1,2 = replace, 3,4 = blend, 5,6 = ignore? But it's cute and sweet... Hm. ._. I'm no help, I'm afraid.
The exposition in the old epilogue is fascinating... but it also makes me smile. Yes, you did have a bit more to tell us...
“So this is the necklace of a supreme god? Hmmm, he knows me better than I thought.”
“The boyfriend?”
“Yeah,” said Naruto and a lovesick look crossed his face.
*bursts out laughing* Someone certainly has no problems with self-image.
Then Sasuke and Jiraiya vs. Naruto- FAITO! XD Geezus, that's excellent. This has to stay up SOMEWHERE, heeee. :D
I have no strong opinions on Naruto and Sasuke... skip forward a week or what. :3 I do want to see more of Ibiki, Genma, and Raidou, and Shikamaru's MOM still fills me with laughter. Dinner with the Sunas is looking to be another glorious trainwreck I'd like to see... and I spent my weekend rereading Iruka and Kakashi and Kisame and Itachi. Mmm.
On Naruto's dad... sometimes the simple things are the most WTF and hardest to deal with. I always thought he just... left. Just left, because martial arts was more important to him, and there wasn't a place in his life for a son instead of a student. It could be more sordid than that, that's just what I assumed had happened.
Hiashi/Kimimaro- my opinion is either to work it in or forget it... but leave it up in a "lost chapters" part in case anyone wants to see.
Gaara/Shikamaru- HEE HEE HEE HIS MOM! I love Shika's mom. I think the new version of his mom's initial answering machine is better.
XD Though Gaara getting her to hang up was pretty darn GREAT. Still, I don't think new-version!mom would have hung up like that... unless it was some sort of scream of rage before coming over there to bash some heads.
So... this was sweet, and I like it... though I like the other too. Ano... roll dice? ^^; 1,2 = replace, 3,4 = blend, 5,6 = ignore? But it's cute and sweet... Hm. ._. I'm no help, I'm afraid.
The exposition in the old epilogue is fascinating... but it also makes me smile. Yes, you did have a bit more to tell us...
“So this is the necklace of a supreme god? Hmmm, he knows me better than I thought.”
“The boyfriend?”
“Yeah,” said Naruto and a lovesick look crossed his face.
*bursts out laughing* Someone certainly has no problems with self-image.
Then Sasuke and Jiraiya vs. Naruto- FAITO! XD Geezus, that's excellent. This has to stay up SOMEWHERE, heeee. :D
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just reread chapter 86, and I have to say I like the new one better. The old rescued piece has some good parts, but nothing, NOTHING can beat Shikamaru's awed "I love you, Gaara" after having watched his Master hang up on his mom. XD
Keep the new 86 as is, and perhaps have the old, rescued piece up for curiosity and archival purposes. ^^
Keep the new 86 as is, and perhaps have the old, rescued piece up for curiosity and archival purposes. ^^
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHHA that epilogue was fucking hilarious!
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mistress. Congratulations on moving past the 100 000 views mark. Honestly I have to say that you reposting the "follow chapter 5" chapter is disconcerting. It almost gives the impression of wanting to quit. As to the two 'lost' chapters. I like the Hiashi/Kim bit, I think you can incorporate it with the last Hia/Kim chapter, maybe move from the undressing to falling asleep to Kimimaro playing with himself etc. I prefer the new chapter you wrote for Shika's mother's phone call. Please don't worry too much if the boys can't play much. We all know this isn't just about sex. There is the whole foundation aspect to explore as well. Ooooh a chappie showing Itachi being all dom and scaring all the subs, just to prove to himself that he still can. There are so many things that still has to happen. Please don't stop. Oh, sorry, YEAY for finding your harddrive!!!
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Lovey!! Sorry about the lateness, I'm rennovating my room and currently have no privacy,
and LOL, I know better than to read this story in public anymore XD.
*Hugs* I love that you posted the epilogue, it's fantastic and if I missed it I know a lot of other people did as well,
although, you may have scared some people, LOL, hell you scared me for a minute when I saw the word epilogue in the chapter descriptions, XD.
As for the found chapters, I like the new Hiashi/Kimimaro one better. This one has less of the warmth and fluffiness that the old one had,
not to mention the solo was hott as all XD. But I did like the little skit with the servants. Hmmn... maybe you could keep both.
Since the second one starts with reflection maybe you could keep it and just change the ordering around a little.
Um, LOL, that would probably be a lot of work though XD. So if I had to choose between the two I would pick the new one,
but it's up to you I'l love the story either way and there will lots more opportunities for stunned servants and proper Hiashi domination.
The Gaar/Shika/Gaar *snicker*, that still sounds like cheesy porno music to me XD. I Love it XD.
Anyway LOL, although Gaara describing Shika's state was hilaious and Shika in a pretty dress and pearls is a BIG FAT MUST,
I say keep the new one HANDS DOWN. Shika's mum as a dom is just too perfect, and mentions of a collaring have my heart thumping away merrily.
Not to mention him teasing Shika while he was on the phone XD God, made of win and love. That only better the second time around,
and the ending was priceless.
As for Sasuke and Naruto, please don't skip and don't make me wait *glomps and huggles* This is my favourite soap opera type story!!!
I mean look at the structure. There are all of these loosely related characters in complicated relationships that revolve around a buisness.
There are tragic back stories and beautiful beginnings and fairytale endings all over. It's moving at a day by day pace, there are an awesome
amount of chapters and LOL, there was a time when they used to come one a day and that's when the soap idea stuck in my head.
Not to mention that it's soooo terribly addictive!!!!! And in the grand tradition of soap opera's have Naruto go to Tsunade and
get some magical healing cream or some such shit, LOL. I mean it!! If people can die and come back to life, there can be vampires and
monkey nurses in soaps, and children can stay children until one day they magically turn into adults: then magic healing cream is a awesomely small thing.
LOL, I know I'm being a pain in the ass but please!!! LOL. I don't want to miss out on anything!! Or you could just have them do
adorable things together, like get to know each other and go on another date, set terms for themselves. Any of the above, I don't mind if
they're not fucking for a week, please just don't skip them or leave them out *puppy dog eyes*
and LOL, I know better than to read this story in public anymore XD.
*Hugs* I love that you posted the epilogue, it's fantastic and if I missed it I know a lot of other people did as well,
although, you may have scared some people, LOL, hell you scared me for a minute when I saw the word epilogue in the chapter descriptions, XD.
As for the found chapters, I like the new Hiashi/Kimimaro one better. This one has less of the warmth and fluffiness that the old one had,
not to mention the solo was hott as all XD. But I did like the little skit with the servants. Hmmn... maybe you could keep both.
Since the second one starts with reflection maybe you could keep it and just change the ordering around a little.
Um, LOL, that would probably be a lot of work though XD. So if I had to choose between the two I would pick the new one,
but it's up to you I'l love the story either way and there will lots more opportunities for stunned servants and proper Hiashi domination.
The Gaar/Shika/Gaar *snicker*, that still sounds like cheesy porno music to me XD. I Love it XD.
Anyway LOL, although Gaara describing Shika's state was hilaious and Shika in a pretty dress and pearls is a BIG FAT MUST,
I say keep the new one HANDS DOWN. Shika's mum as a dom is just too perfect, and mentions of a collaring have my heart thumping away merrily.
Not to mention him teasing Shika while he was on the phone XD God, made of win and love. That only better the second time around,
and the ending was priceless.
As for Sasuke and Naruto, please don't skip and don't make me wait *glomps and huggles* This is my favourite soap opera type story!!!
I mean look at the structure. There are all of these loosely related characters in complicated relationships that revolve around a buisness.
There are tragic back stories and beautiful beginnings and fairytale endings all over. It's moving at a day by day pace, there are an awesome
amount of chapters and LOL, there was a time when they used to come one a day and that's when the soap idea stuck in my head.
Not to mention that it's soooo terribly addictive!!!!! And in the grand tradition of soap opera's have Naruto go to Tsunade and
get some magical healing cream or some such shit, LOL. I mean it!! If people can die and come back to life, there can be vampires and
monkey nurses in soaps, and children can stay children until one day they magically turn into adults: then magic healing cream is a awesomely small thing.
LOL, I know I'm being a pain in the ass but please!!! LOL. I don't want to miss out on anything!! Or you could just have them do
adorable things together, like get to know each other and go on another date, set terms for themselves. Any of the above, I don't mind if
they're not fucking for a week, please just don't skip them or leave them out *puppy dog eyes*
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I'm so super happy for you, getting your harddrive back; what a journey it's been throug, eh? Anyhow, for what to do with the 'lost chapters' I think what you did was fine: just to post them as they were and tell your readers what they are, and then incorporate the parts of those chapters that you want into your new chapters.
As far as what to do with the story (i.e Sasuke)...*evil grin*
To cum, or not to cum, that is the question:
Whether 'tis nobler in the body to suffer
The deprivations of outrageous piercings,
Or to take arms (or hands, or mouths, or other body parts!) against a sea of hormones
And by opposing satiate them!
Errr, now that I've bastardized Shakespeare....I don't think you should ignore Naruto and Sasuke for the week; perhaps in this time they can get to know each other better, fall in love on a deeper level, learn about each other's past some more, (and this would be a great place to work in the part where Naruto gets the sapphire for Sasuke's collar) or whatever or maybe they will have to stay away from each other because they just can't keep their hands off each other and everything always devolves into hot and heavy sex or makeout sessions, or maybe they can try to stay away from each other only to have that plan backfire when all either of them is able to do while not together is have the other invade their thoughts and make them even more wild and horny. OR! maybe Naruto can give Sasuke to Iruka for some training/punishment for not being able to keep himself from being such a huge cock whore unable to restrain himself from trying to molest Naruto...but no, Kakashi and Iruka's relationship is in a state of flux, too much is changing right now and that might not be such a good idea. Plus, I'll bet the newly-engaged couple will want to celebrate this new development with LOTS OF HOT STEAMY MANSECKS (XD)...Anyway, just bouncing some thoughts around. Keep up the good work! *le sigh, I wish I could turn out more chapters for my fic, but the muses seem to be hating me right now!*
As far as what to do with the story (i.e Sasuke)...*evil grin*
To cum, or not to cum, that is the question:
Whether 'tis nobler in the body to suffer
The deprivations of outrageous piercings,
Or to take arms (or hands, or mouths, or other body parts!) against a sea of hormones
And by opposing satiate them!
Errr, now that I've bastardized Shakespeare....I don't think you should ignore Naruto and Sasuke for the week; perhaps in this time they can get to know each other better, fall in love on a deeper level, learn about each other's past some more, (and this would be a great place to work in the part where Naruto gets the sapphire for Sasuke's collar) or whatever or maybe they will have to stay away from each other because they just can't keep their hands off each other and everything always devolves into hot and heavy sex or makeout sessions, or maybe they can try to stay away from each other only to have that plan backfire when all either of them is able to do while not together is have the other invade their thoughts and make them even more wild and horny. OR! maybe Naruto can give Sasuke to Iruka for some training/punishment for not being able to keep himself from being such a huge cock whore unable to restrain himself from trying to molest Naruto...but no, Kakashi and Iruka's relationship is in a state of flux, too much is changing right now and that might not be such a good idea. Plus, I'll bet the newly-engaged couple will want to celebrate this new development with LOTS OF HOT STEAMY MANSECKS (XD)...Anyway, just bouncing some thoughts around. Keep up the good work! *le sigh, I wish I could turn out more chapters for my fic, but the muses seem to be hating me right now!*
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the chapters you currently have posted so I don't think you should replace them with the "lost chapters" -- though they were fun to read!! :)