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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on finding your hard drive. Being the greedy reader that I am, why don't you continue on with the new chapters and then, whenever you're finished, you can merge the two versions together.
I'm glad that you didn't stop at ch 5, that would have been horrible.... to think people would have missed out on so many more chapters!
update!
I'm glad that you didn't stop at ch 5, that would have been horrible.... to think people would have missed out on so many more chapters!
update!
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please I want to see more of the dom de dom Naruto.
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you brought back "The Old Epilogue". I really liked that chapter.
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I LOVE THIS STORY. I can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your awesome chapters are getting further spaced out. Pourquoi? Anyway, amazing chapter, once again. Loved it!
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November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, that's my Aff name. I'm just to lazy to sign in. Anyway, thought you could use some encouragement. So...I givest Thou the Eternal Flame of Reader Love...on behalf of all of your fans.
Also, in Chapter 75 Ibiki/Rai, 2nd paragraph, 2 or third sentence, I found a typo you might want to correct.
"The three of them had experimented together, sleep together, and done those other things young men do as friends—basketball, lifting weights, drinking, homework, clubbing."
It should be "slept together" HTH!
And...scuffs foot.. if you're interested I have mad beta skills. I have my advertisement or whatever on here in the betasection of naruto. I know a lot of the stuff you do I say I won't beta, but, (for you and only for you) I'll rewrite my will-beta list. You're the only one who makes any of it..palatable...lol. Anyway, thought I'd toss it out there. my email's flameofevernight@aol.com.
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Also, in Chapter 75 Ibiki/Rai, 2nd paragraph, 2 or third sentence, I found a typo you might want to correct.
"The three of them had experimented together, sleep together, and done those other things young men do as friends—basketball, lifting weights, drinking, homework, clubbing."
It should be "slept together" HTH!
And...scuffs foot.. if you're interested I have mad beta skills. I have my advertisement or whatever on here in the betasection of naruto. I know a lot of the stuff you do I say I won't beta, but, (for you and only for you) I'll rewrite my will-beta list. You're the only one who makes any of it..palatable...lol. Anyway, thought I'd toss it out there. my email's flameofevernight@aol.com.
Flame
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the latest Gaara/Shika/Gaara chapter. I love when Gaara gives aftercare. I'm also glad that Shika got to dom and he did it so well. I also liked the way Gaara spoke on the phone to Shika's mother. Thanks again for a great chapter.
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Simply wonderful!!!! I love love love the garrra/shika pairing. But i love you more ^_^
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness!! i have never ready anthing sooooo kinky and well writtena and suspensful!!!! i can't wait to read more!!!!!
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you weren't kidding when you said Shilamaru was a slut. I can't believe he was able to have sex with his parents listening in! Aren't your parents supposed to be the biggest turn-off there is?