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by Hestia

person Sayuri
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good to see new chapters from you, they're awesome as always and I'm waiting for more ^^
person maggiepyro101
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so cute ^^ i'm glad your laptop is working. i love how you write everything and you tell us who's in the chap. before we read it <3 i hope you finish it, even if it takes a year or 2 cuz of work and personal life (and the fact that it's really long 0.o)lol
well i'll let you get back to your life now
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mistress. Oooh. You will just have to imagine the awed half sigh I utter those two words in. That was beautiful. Each time you take them just a little bit deeper, a little bit further. No matter that it already seemed as though they have connected as much as possible. Thank you.
person Dicey
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah my second favourite couple!!! It's soooooo wonderful to see you come back with a vengence!! Thank you! You're so good to us readers!!! Gaara and Shika's mum fight it out! Haha that's so cute! And Shikaku is so whipped! Hahaha! Role-reversal! Sweet!!! Can't wait to see another certain role reversal XDXD Loved the aftercare at the start of the chapter. Just that bit added to all the awfully painful hot sex.... XDXD Love this fic soooooo much!
person Oakie
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! The parents. I look forward to their interaction w/ Gaara and Shika and learning about Shika's childhood. I know Shika said what he'd like to do w/ Gaara while visiting his home and I know that you've had a brief chase scene w/ Sai and Neji, but I'm really hoping for a chase scene w/ Gaara and Shika and what better place to do that than in the woods! Anyway, forgive my selfishness. I'm glad that you were able to pick yourself up and dust off your computer trauma; believe me we were all suffering right along w/ you if not directly. I'm eager to see how everyone progresses, HiaKim, IbiRaiGen, KisIta, SaiNeji, IruKak, and of course NaruSasu!! Thanks for your hard work and dedication to the continuation of this "The best D/s fic ever!" m(_ _)m
person Aleasha
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!
OMG I dont think I will ever get bored of reading it
Even if I read it all the time
I think it would still make me hot....
LIKE WOW!!!
person szulik
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay you updated!
Ace as usual.
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have a feeling I'm going to either really love or really hate Shika's mom. I can't wait for that.
person cynaga
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gaara and Shika - still the best. thank you thank you thank you
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gaara vs Shikamaru's mom is just SO MUCH WIN, geezus. XDD I love that she's a femdom, it's utterly perfect. Poor Shikaku... and no wonder Shikamaru looked at him with so much worship after he hung up on his mom. *laughing*

Gaara and Shika are just so... innocently sweet, and PRETTY. I love the way to use Shikamaru's voice to describe Gaara's eyes... they're beautiful, but they're REALLY beautiful because Shika loves them so. Cuddling and pampering... and then Shika topping. Vulnerable Gaara is so sexy, and pretty, and sweet, because he's so badass the rest of the time.

Thank you for updating! ♥