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May 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD. WHERE HAS THIS STORY BEEN!!! I always love D/s
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January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was so great :) so long and enjoyable, I literally couldn't get rid of this story until I didn't read it until its final chapter.
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October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First : sorry for my weird english. I'm french but I try to do a correct review even if it's difficult for me.
Ok.
I loved your story. Really. I was very surprised because it seems to be a... hot/sex story but it's a love story !! It's a really beautiful love story. I'm impressed.
I'm a NaruSasu fan so... I must be honest and tell you I didn't really read all the parts about the other characters (and of course because it's difficult for me to read a so long story in english) : in french we say that I flew over some parts, I don't know if it is the good expression in english. But I was surprised by falling in love for your GaaraShika specially : the feelings are so beautiful. This sentence for example : "They love each other because when you are in love, just taking or giving alone isn't enough, you want to do both." (and this is all that I love in the switch). Another example, when Ibiki think about what he see "beneath the scarred surface of Raidou." This is so beautifull... A few people can write so well about love and you do it in this story.
And your NaruSasu is fabulous ! Sweet, sexy, hot, funny too (beanpole ! You made me laugh so hard with this ! and a "friendly hello". I love that part) and... Oh, yes : this is a love story. I like stories with sex/lemon but it can't be enough for making a good story for me. Feelings and psychology are the most important and your story is a very good story.
About sex : I loved the "let's fuck together" relations (hmm.. ok : I dont know how to say it) : the relation between all the characters and the couples. For example, the conversations they have at Uchiwa's or at the Red Fox or the scene with the "double lotus" or at Neji's... ("Double lotus"... that make me really laugh too !).
And the characters are very well respected. Your Naruto is perfect ! Really perfect.
One word about the D/s because this is a point important for me.
I dont like D/s. So, why am I reading your story ? The answer is : curiosity.
Actually, I can see some BDSM fanfics published in french fandom, this is new and I wonder why. So, I wonder, I search...
I never understood something about BDSM before, even if I am curious : why this type of relations, of sexuality and... I didn't think I'll understand this by reading a fanfiction ! (and I'm thirty years old).
For the first time, I can understand it and it's because you're explaining very well the D/s relation... It is very interesting even if I know that fanfiction is something and reality is another thing. Maybe it is something that will rest in my brain for life... Hmm... I'm sorry. I can't explain it correctly, I dont speak as well english (damn !).
Oh, and of course, there are a lot of things I didn't like, that are too much for me. Too hard relations, too much pain, parts with enemas or pee for example... ow... But, because you explain very well the D/s relation it's ok. It doesn't seems to be only too hard or dirty scenes but something to explain the relation between the characters. This isn't something that made your story less good (OMG, my poor english make me affraid...).
I hope my text isn't too difficult to understand.
So, thanks a lot for this amazing story !
Ok.
I loved your story. Really. I was very surprised because it seems to be a... hot/sex story but it's a love story !! It's a really beautiful love story. I'm impressed.
I'm a NaruSasu fan so... I must be honest and tell you I didn't really read all the parts about the other characters (and of course because it's difficult for me to read a so long story in english) : in french we say that I flew over some parts, I don't know if it is the good expression in english. But I was surprised by falling in love for your GaaraShika specially : the feelings are so beautiful. This sentence for example : "They love each other because when you are in love, just taking or giving alone isn't enough, you want to do both." (and this is all that I love in the switch). Another example, when Ibiki think about what he see "beneath the scarred surface of Raidou." This is so beautifull... A few people can write so well about love and you do it in this story.
And your NaruSasu is fabulous ! Sweet, sexy, hot, funny too (beanpole ! You made me laugh so hard with this ! and a "friendly hello". I love that part) and... Oh, yes : this is a love story. I like stories with sex/lemon but it can't be enough for making a good story for me. Feelings and psychology are the most important and your story is a very good story.
About sex : I loved the "let's fuck together" relations (hmm.. ok : I dont know how to say it) : the relation between all the characters and the couples. For example, the conversations they have at Uchiwa's or at the Red Fox or the scene with the "double lotus" or at Neji's... ("Double lotus"... that make me really laugh too !).
And the characters are very well respected. Your Naruto is perfect ! Really perfect.
One word about the D/s because this is a point important for me.
I dont like D/s. So, why am I reading your story ? The answer is : curiosity.
Actually, I can see some BDSM fanfics published in french fandom, this is new and I wonder why. So, I wonder, I search...
I never understood something about BDSM before, even if I am curious : why this type of relations, of sexuality and... I didn't think I'll understand this by reading a fanfiction ! (and I'm thirty years old).
For the first time, I can understand it and it's because you're explaining very well the D/s relation... It is very interesting even if I know that fanfiction is something and reality is another thing. Maybe it is something that will rest in my brain for life... Hmm... I'm sorry. I can't explain it correctly, I dont speak as well english (damn !).
Oh, and of course, there are a lot of things I didn't like, that are too much for me. Too hard relations, too much pain, parts with enemas or pee for example... ow... But, because you explain very well the D/s relation it's ok. It doesn't seems to be only too hard or dirty scenes but something to explain the relation between the characters. This isn't something that made your story less good (OMG, my poor english make me affraid...).
I hope my text isn't too difficult to understand.
So, thanks a lot for this amazing story !
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October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i can tell that there are more chapters and i can hardly wait to read them as im sure they will be as good as the others thank you for making my weekend (when i started this) and it took me a week to read it couse i kept going back to make sure i missed nothing
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October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The end of this chapter was so ridiculously cute.
Gaara opened up!!!
Gah, I love a good sappy section thrown in with all this brutal rapery.
You're my secret favorite author that no one in the real world can know about.
<3<3<3
Gaara opened up!!!
Gah, I love a good sappy section thrown in with all this brutal rapery.
You're my secret favorite author that no one in the real world can know about.
<3<3<3
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August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
0_O
Ok... what can i say Mistress Hestia.. i'm almost done i sweat, i have spent the last three weeks of my life (well the free time) reading this... and i'm almost done, and i can't explain to you how amazing this is and how freaking hot!!! (i'm dying)
Please... please i really want more...
I beg you (what a slut XD)
I hope you update again.
Kisses
Ok... what can i say Mistress Hestia.. i'm almost done i sweat, i have spent the last three weeks of my life (well the free time) reading this... and i'm almost done, and i can't explain to you how amazing this is and how freaking hot!!! (i'm dying)
Please... please i really want more...
I beg you (what a slut XD)
I hope you update again.
Kisses
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August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Madame Hestia, I must say that this is the most LUSCIOUS Naruto story I have ever read. It made me come so hard so many times! Me and My Boyfriend Jose really love it. Please, if you need anything, idea help, writers block breakers... anything, hit us up. I would love to be of assistance to my hero!!!<3
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July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well that was extremely entertaining :D
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July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm already reading chapter 60 as I type, and I figured, I haven't reviewed once, so just letting you know what I think up to now :D
I like that library idea, cause in a library you have to be quiet and that would be a sexy thing, naruto bringing sasuke to the edge; but sasuke isn't allowed to make a sound :D
the gaara and shikamaru thing is hot too :D
but I liked the Itachi and Kisame thing when they were lovers in the control room better than slave Itachi..Although, to be fair, it's only been like 4 story's of that and it's still hot:D But less loving :S
I nearly cried at the almost Iruka and Kakashi break up, but thank god they're still together, scared me there, you did :D
It was a very cute make up story too :D Me like :D
Oh well, gotta keep reading, so addicted :D Chapter 60 is the next one, and I've only started reading like 3 days ago:D
And I really gotta stop writing, cause I'm gonna be laughed at for typing so much crap :D
xxx Marissa xxx
I like that library idea, cause in a library you have to be quiet and that would be a sexy thing, naruto bringing sasuke to the edge; but sasuke isn't allowed to make a sound :D
the gaara and shikamaru thing is hot too :D
but I liked the Itachi and Kisame thing when they were lovers in the control room better than slave Itachi..Although, to be fair, it's only been like 4 story's of that and it's still hot:D But less loving :S
I nearly cried at the almost Iruka and Kakashi break up, but thank god they're still together, scared me there, you did :D
It was a very cute make up story too :D Me like :D
Oh well, gotta keep reading, so addicted :D Chapter 60 is the next one, and I've only started reading like 3 days ago:D
And I really gotta stop writing, cause I'm gonna be laughed at for typing so much crap :D
xxx Marissa xxx
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June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
interesting.