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for D/s Naruto

by Hestia

person cynaga
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Goddess, I've missed your writing! I've been rereading some of the older chapters. Welcome back! :D
person Dicey
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Welcome Back!!!! Very happy to hear that things are better (slightly) with the computer. Jerks. Idiots. May Karma have mercy on their souls whoever committed such a horrible heinous crime! *glares* Hiashi and Kimi not my fave pairing but dang that was a really hot scene ^_^ go Nubby Dildoes! X3 Can't wait to read more DS!!!!
person llyoung
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Glad your'e back - we missed you. Hope none of the fires in CA are near your home.

Loved the beginning were Kimi was just thinking and taking in his surroundings and his new life and being unsure if it was all real. Kimi's masturbation sequence was fantastic and it was great when Hiashi brought his fantasy to life. Thanks for the chapter.
person katsuyo
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hestia!

It's good to see that you've got some PC access back! It's wonderful that you posted another chapter....I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

sincerely,

katsuyo
person Allys
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well if that wasn't the sweetest thing on life I'll be damned. Hello, Lady love you're back :).
That makes me happy.
I've missed your beautiful brand of romance sorely. You write Love. Pure unadulterated Love.
The kind that makes life worth living.
How could I not be enthralled. I loved the description of the room 'like the inside of a rose petal'.
And I love the entire idea of Hiashi and Kimmimaro. But the part of this that I loved the most was when Hiashi said
"You'd love anyone, slut! But not anymore--that heart of yours, that pretty body is mine now!"
It was so true, he'd have loved anyone that gave him a chance and treated him well. But the best part is the -
but not anymore.
I love the idea that he'll make it now so that he can love only him.
It's like he was a blank slate and he'll teach him his true worth, LOL, maybe I'm just a terribly hopeless romantic.
But LOL, I read your work and I like to think that I'm not the only one.
I missed you. Thank you so much for the update. It was beautiful. I'm glad you're felling better. *loves u*
person burr
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You don't know how incredibly happy I am :)
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Unfuckingbelievable. I almost pissed myself when I saw a new chapter. It was great. I glad to see that your writing again. Thank you so much for sharing.
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It is wonderful to have you back! I dream of your stories. Yay now my dreams have come true ^_^
person Mademoisellle_LaCroix
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...AWWWWWW YOU´RE BACK!!!..I MISSED YOU SO MUCH......^_________________________________^
person JaeFire
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
::SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEjumpEEupEEEandEEEdownEEEEEE:: You're back you're back you're back!!! ::dances:: I'm SO HAPPY!!!