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by Hestia

schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to thank you for this story, and apologize profoundly for the utter LACK of reviewing I have done, but I was coming to terms with a few things...like the fact that I find D/s exciting and arousing. I mean, men having sex with each other is hot enough, but men in LEATHER! Oh mama!

Also, I am SO sorry that you have lost your laptop! I am sure that despite the loss of those two scenes which you love(d), I know you will either be able to recreate them (they do reoccur to you sometimes) or make new that are as good or better than the ones you've written down. Either way, thank you for writing this story!

person limonata
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry to hear about your laptop! I never back up my files, either, but I have nothing worth saving- maybe Fed-ex will help you out since they delivered it badly? I hope you're able to get a new (better!) one, and if you have homeowner's insurance, see if they'll let you insure it through them- it was $100 bucks for me, and then I bricked my laptop with liquid yogurt smoothie- all costs covered for a new one. (That was a long sentence, but oh well).
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 84, hot and sweet, just like hot chocolate! ^____^ I've been craving another chapter of your mega-novel, and I've been rewarded! XD

I just wanted to give my condolences to your laptop, and I completely understand... I've had three hard drives die on me so far. Anyway, I look forward to more of your excellent writing, and thank you for this chapter!
person Hen
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hurray! A new chapter! It's great!

I can't believe someone stole your hard drive! That's low.

I'm glad to hear your cat is doing well. Sorry to hear about yours, llyoung. Mine went exactly the same way, only we think it was a stroke that did it.
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an emotionally complex chapter for me... smut, sex, and heat, with giggling delight and humor, and heart-melting sweetness... and the roller-coaster took a dive into somber and sad.

Speaking of sad, I'm so sorry about your laptop. I saw the post and went YAY, SHE IS BACK, CONGRA- oh. Oh, no.
It reminds me that I need to make another set of backups, since my last set were so out-of-date I destroyed them (can't throw such things away, no).
I'm very sorry for your loss- I remember you did share some reference links with us, in the author's notes of past chapters... that can't be more than a scratch on the surface, but it is something. I don't know what you had, so I can't begin to help tell you how to replace it. My last laptop died two years ago, so I feel your pain... and rebuilding your bookmarks is the longest and biggest pain in the ass (second only to re-ripping and re-downloading music, and that depending on the relative sizes between music and bookmarks). You'll get through it. It certainly isn't fun, poor thing... but I believe in you, and if we have to wait even longer?
I'm a patient person. ♥
person dragon
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!
I cried a river when I noticed and update!
I'm so happy. So sorry about what happened! Why do good stuff have to have some kind of tragedy??

I have to cut this short is late.
Love the chapter and come back!!

~dragon
person Dicey
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bah! To the jerk that took your hard drive! *weeps for the missing scenes* I'm so glad you're back! Was missing the regular updates. And thanks for two sweet scenes. Hehe Pliant Sasuke... Hope someone does fanart! I was rather looking forward to the chit chat at Dwaynes! Hope there'll be a flashback scene or smething. Those two couples are so sweet together! Can't wait for more Gaara/Shika!
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And just where have you been anyway? I feel like it's been ages since this was updated. I was jonesing for some of your wonderful D/s so bad that I re-read this whole fic at least twice. I hope everything has been okay.

Wonderful chapter. Looks like Sasuke is finally starting to submit to what he wants a little easier and a little more eagerly. Kakashi and Iruka make such a wonderful pair and I loved the scene at Dwayne's.
person hisoka
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so iruka and kakashi marrage on the way,whats with sasuke is he like on cloud nine or something? glad you updated hope you can again soon
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back! I'm so sorry your hard drive was stolen (WTF????). Yes, backups (DVD/CDs copies -- or if you really got serious Gigs of files, tape backups)
are such a blessing when crazy shit like that happens. And I'm going to go cry in a corner right with you over that Hiashi/Kimimaru story! I hope you can reconstruct it.

Kakashi & Iruka sound so cute! But I don't blame Naruto for being concerned about Sasuke. I hope Naruto makes it big because its gonna take a small fortune
just to keep Sasuke in the life-style he's so used to.

Cookie~