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for D/s Naruto

by Hestia

person llyoung
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a lovely chapter. Naruto's suit and Sasuke's new clothes both sound wonderful. Loved the sex in the dressing room and that Naruto can put Sasuke into subspace so nicely. Kakashi and Iruka's clothes sounded very nice too. Loved the flowers and the proposal and everyone's reaction to both couples when they entered the restuarant as well as the reactions to the proposal (especially Kotetsu's and Izumo's reactions). Thanks for another fantastic chapter.
person Allys
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Well hott dang the world has gone mad!! *GLOPMS U* I can't believe your hard drive got taken!! *Hugs u*
You've been on my mind for a while now, but I'm ashamed to say I've been busy and haven't had time to check up,
and then to hear that. I feel like a shitty friend. I'm so sorry love. And you lost chapters!! *noes* I absolutely commend
you for rebounding so well. It was a lovely chapter, lots of befuddling going on XD. And pda's all around.
LOL, I'm pretty sure Emilio creamed his pants off all those sales, not to mention getting to dress Sasuke up like a dolly.
And Naruto "Hey, he's got his cock pierced 4 times today, I need to check, so could you get out?"
Lmao!! Naruto's speech though *dies of sweetness and love*.
And Kakashi and Iruka :D, it's well deserved, they really were a walking sensation. In white and cream (and black and red)
LOL, Naruto and Sasuke totally tried to steal the show!! What's wrong with Kotetsu!!?? He needs huggling. *loves u*
Thank you for writing, Thank you for being back and wonderful. I missed u ♥
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GODDAMMMIT! Where the hell is my whip! That thieving son of a bitch/stupid cunt! I hope that Jesus is watching that fucker right now and decides to SMITE them! *pats you on the back as a gesture of sympathy and comfort for the loss of your computer* Anyway, beautiful chapter, of course it's wonderful as always. I loved the ending, so much emotion! *runs off and cries because her work pales in comparison*
person Bree
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is by far the single most amazing thing I have ever read. And I'm dying for an update - it's been far too long D:
person tataliny
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fanfiction. My favorite pairings are ****Gaara/Shikamaru****, ***Ibiki/Raidou/Genma*** Neji/Sai, and Kimimaru and Hiashi. I love all the other pairings, but I especially love those pairings. Please update soon. Thanks for the wonderful story that provides so much entertainment.
tata
person Tsuki
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update soon! its been too long since a new chapter!!!
person Lychee
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah man! You haven't updated in forever! Please say you haven't given up on this fic?
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi!!!! I absolutely love this story...I have found some mistakes but I can't remember where they were...I got too involved in the story...I can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~.~
person Aleasha
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok you have probably gotten so many of these but...
PLEASE UPDATE! ITS KILLING ME!!!
PRETTY PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
person Aleasha
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok just forget my previous comments
cause im oblivious like that
oops