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So sorry to hear about your laptop and the info you lost for your job (and the D/s work) but did you also loose the work you had been doing for your e-book? I really hope that some of your work can be saved from the hard drive. Good luck (and I hope Tommy is doing ok).

PLEASE UPDATE IM DYING HERE LIKE WOWW I CANT BREATHE

WOW!! I wanted to finish reading all the chapters before I left a review.
But is so late that I cant think of anything coherent to say. Just that was one of the most Amazing stories I have read.!!!! I have never been so completely suck in to such an erotic story. Please u must up date soon.

Truly you are doing such wonderful things with each of the characters! I'm not just talking about the sex. Characters that may have been originally flat have just exploded and are evoking a rainbow of sympathy from me the reader. Wow!

I just finished reading chapter 24 with Gaara and Shikamaru. this was by far my favorite chapter. I love the emotional intimacy and discovery that Gaara is experiencing. You really seemed to flesh out both of their personalities in a multi-dimensional way. These two seemed the most real in my imagination. I wasn't expecting these two to be my favorite pairing so far, but there you go!

Holly Shite!!
Was it only me or chapter 73/72 changed?
I don't remember reading Neiji at his office before the last chapter so far, which I thought it was 83/82 but now is 84/83...?
I'm confused. @.@;;
In any case I think it was just me. Good chapter anyway, as Sai said is only what Hiashi earned.
TC!
`dragon

"oh, and we need Mr. Akatsuki back. Can you call him and tell him that Mr. Neji will need something like what he did for Ms. Anko for his Sai..."
Who is Mr. Akatsuki and what did he do for Neji whic (I think it was) for Anko? Will we know soon?


`dragon

The best sai/neji chapter to date! It was both romantic and tragic at the same time. They melded into each other with such grace and ease it was hard to tell whether you should say 'awww' or cry. *bows before you* I am unworthy.

Very nice.
I hadn't read this chapter earlier because I was caught by a FMA fic and it wouldn't let me go until it was read.
I'm just really glad that you just had one new chapter so I wasn't that much behind.
I just have to say that I'm glad that Neji and Sai are going forward.
Also Sai is huge!! Ha! I couldn't help myself.
Please keep writing, take care.
`dragon

ps. Is Naruto's father going to make an appearance?

Hey, just like to say that this fanfic is awsome. Its seriously my fetish, its horrible, I think Ive read it probably 5 times all the way from beginning to end, nevermind reading my favorite parts over and over again. I really like ur sexy spin off of the Naruto characters, unlike most, its sexy to read AND its actually got a good plot behind the loads of smut (which I love). I gotta say my favorite couple are Gaara and Shikamaru, which is not a couple that are usually put together in a Naruto fanfic, but now I cant seem to be able to see those characters with anyone but eachother. I also really like your Neji/Sai couple, and I love how you've created a really dynamic Sai character, I love how he seems to change so much, because of Neji. All your characters are absolutely perfect, and they make the read so much more, even though all the smut makes it super by itself. So pretty much to sum this all up, I really love your fanfic, its a little obsession of mine. And so keep up the good work :D