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O.o I really miss Narusasunaru... Any chance you could give them more screen time? Exclusive screen time for a couple of chapters even? Or KisameItachi or GaaraShika. I think the dive into other charas lives, romance, effing hot sex is good. Its interesting to see them too. But I'm missing the main charas. Kiriban number, well since your the only one who can see what review number is what *as reviewers we can sorta guess i suppose* you could sorta set a number and whoever reaches it gets a request. IbikiGenmaRaido triangle is fun.. lol what they do is fun. But still. Main characters?? Dwayne??

You are...a GODDESS amongst writers!!

One would think that after so many chapters that your "pen" would run out of "ink," so to say, but you still write such a vivid and enthralling world that one can't help but be in awe of your superior story telling. I completely teared up reading Raidou's heartfelt rant to Genma. (ch82) Absolute perfection. I just can't express how impressed and how much I loved that chapter. They are definitely a hot threesome I hope to see more of in the future.

Keep up the excellent work!

Thank you Mistress.

I always love naru/sasu unless it is badly written but never liked anything involving the other jounin and chunin. I really like the way you write Raido, Genma, and Ibiki, you took the time to develope their characters and now when I watch the anime I see a personality developed by you that Kishimoto never focused on

These past few chapters have been real roller coaster rides. Everything had started off so well with Genma and
Raidou becoming Ibiki’s subs. But then Genma’s discipline came. I wasn’t surprised when Ibiki bitch-slapped
the shit out of Genma – I kinda saw that one coming. But Raidou’s boot to Genma’s face – wow, didn’t see that
coming, and I’m sure Genma didn’t either! And that “pee-pee thing”! Whew! It’s a good thing they’re friends (???)
I’m so glad that in the end Genma understood his mistakes and everything turned out well. Although I
admit, Ibiki gives new meaning to “carrot or stick”.

Is this any way to run a multibillion-dollar corporation? God, I was laughing at the shear glee Neji was feeling
to the point of celebration, which in a way is sad because it reflects just how much suffering Neji really has
gone through. And I’m always laughing at how much these characters are into fetishes, yet underneath the humor
there are some real pains that each of them try to work out. But sometimes you just can’t help but laugh! And
I can also see that Sai and Neji are putting themselves up as contenders for Choji’s ass-cake.

But Miriam, “Sister Cougar” sounds like a she’s a fetish all unto herself! I can see her now, hunting down poor
Kouji’s “fresh, young meat” and pouncing all over his ass from behind, when he least expects it. Snarl! Bite!
Scratch!

Cookie~

Hestia Goddess. Remind me NEVER to read this story in public again.
O.O, I was laughing and blushing horribly the entire time, and LOL, it took me like an hour to read the chapter.
Oh God. I was dying!! Especially when Sai came in and everybody was still there on the phone, hanging around!!
I have this whole PDA phobia. It freaks me out. I can manage the little things but the big things scare the bejeezus out of me.
*Glomps you and huggles* Although I have to say behind closed doors all's fair in love and war XD.
LOL, now that've explained my condition for the past hour I've got to say, LOL, that was lovely.
I was really scared for a minute with Neji freezing up and when Sai just bloody Blurted out that he had broken Hiashi's arm O.O
But I should have known that in the end it would all be alright XD. ZOMG and LOL,
the little bits of remembering the whole scene with Naruto and Sasuke O.o, LOL, almost died all over again XD.
These two are by far your biggest exhibitionists but it seems they won't be doing that anymore. I'm a little mixed up about that.
I love the idea that now they're all exclusive but goddess I can't lie, as much as it embarrassing the living daylights out of me, I'll miss the antics XD.
*Loves you dearly* thanks so much for the update love. Got my D/s fix for the night, can sleep well now ;)

Sweetest chapter yet!

I'm sorry about your cat. I hope he fares well.

Aahh! You don't know how happy it was for me to see another new chapter coming from you! *SQUEEEE* Thank you thank you! I was having a major drooling fest here. lol! I was hoping to read more of Shino.Kankuro since you converted me into loving this beautiful pairing, but I still enjoyed every single chapter that you're willing to give. *grovels*

I'm extremely sorry to hear about your poor cat. I hope all will be well. *sends love and hugs*

So beautiful again! Can't wait for more!

Aw that was sweet! Update soon.