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i was wondering could you make a harry potter version of this story that would be awesome.

Gyah.
I couldn't review the second Ibi/Rai/Gen chapter, because I LIKED it too much. The headspace was even better than the sex.

A few typos:
Raidou slithered out from under Raidou to stand behind him,
Out from under Genma?

he was sad been so happy that he’d not quite been there.
Sad he'd been so happy?

Wheeee... I like this threesome very, very much. ^_^

...The first two sentences of 84/83 had me laughing. Oh, Neji. XD Not that I'm any better- if someone who was (I thought) that big a bastard did something dumb like that, I'd be delighted too.

*laughing MORE* Oh, I like Miriam. XD I like the parallels between Neji thinking of where to fuck Sai, and Neji thinking of where Miriam was going to get Kouji!

....and then Neji goes "...wait. I'LL fuck Sai?" and there's that delighted cougar grin as he realizes no, sweet, SAI will fuck YOU. *delight, hearts*

...Oh, Neji. I'm happy he has Sai to shock and to cuddle him, he needs it so. Sai is a sexy, sexy predator, and Neji is so lucky to have him as his protector.

a few giggles for poor Kouji, who may have hemmorhaged from blushing so hard, and Miriam, who is there to "console" him. XD

One big, fuzzy "awww" for all the rest. Thanks.

What a lovely chapter. I really do like Sai and Neji. The
entire chapter was just fantastic. Thank you.

yeah you know how i said i was gonna wait until all was said and done before commenting? forget all that. first of all i love the pairings you chose in this fic! you matched everyone so well and it's based on personality and chemistry rather than the typical 'OMG i'm gonna pair X with X because, like, they'd be SOOO Hawtt together!!!!1' i love when a writer can take an unusual pairing or unusual subject and make it into believable and relatable (not that i didn't like S&M before, you've just turned my mild interest into rampant obsession)

i can't wait to read more about ibiki/raidou/genma, gaara/shika and especially hiashi/kimimaro and kankurou/shino. i find hiashi/kimi so endearing for some reason. and the kank/shino storyline is extremely well-written. i adore how you characterized them both. great peice of erotica girl! and now the mandatory "Update soon!"

Hestia love, Wow. That was, Genma was... and Raidou and fucking Ibiki... Damn. Sits at your feet and huggles your knees. It's been emotional XD, and the Keats, I love how you sneak up on me and drop culture and learning in my lap when I'm dazed from smut XD. WTF!? XD LOL, and I have to glomp you for suggesting Shakespearian boogies and ludicrous story lines, involving international stars XD. LOL, it'll be okay because all story lines involving international stars are ludicrous. The punishment so totally squicked me. I was like 'ihhhhhh' *shudders* LOL, but then it was a punishment, and holy hell did they make up for it. I almost died though when Raidou gave his speech and poor Genma, on the ground like so many fragments of shatters glass. I'm just... You've amazed me again. This is lovely threesome, and I can't wait for Ibiki to pwn Genma. Hello *nosebleed* Holy Crap. I'm just, just *Glomps U* ;_; XD. Overewhelmed, the word is overwhelmed. I'm so sorry about your cat ;_;. Thank you so much for posting and I'm sorry I took so long to get to it, but I've been in a drawing mood and it's been taking up all my time. LOL, between you and Zrina, Animehead and Pho, there was this overwhelming need to draw XD. To steal a phrase from another lovely lady *Loves on You* Thank you so much, I've forgotten what I'm thanking you for, everything I guess, I just feel grateful. All the stuff you have planned sounds wonderful ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Oh dear, this three way love could get really messy (in one way it already has *wink*). All of the things you talked about sound great. I can't wait for them. (But I really want more of these three. I just love them!)

"My pretty pets." I love when Ibiki says that. I was interested to see what Ibiki was thinking when Rai was totally punishing Gen. I bet he played it cool, just watching but was soooo turned on.


I must admit though...even though you did put a warning...i gagged a little at the whole drinking pee bit *gags again but tries to breathe slowly*

OH! Congratulations on 1000 reviews *throws glitter* Your story is so amazing.

*blushes* I have to go back a couple of chapters to see what the heck is going on though. I think I must of not undertood the whole Naruto's Father thing. I didn't understand that part and for some reason when I read your AN note at the end of the last chapter, I thought Kakashi was Naruto's father! That's not right is it?? Maybe I read that chapter about Naruto's father really late at night.


By the way on an edit note, when Gen was kissing Ibiki, you said Raidou sled under Raidou. i think you meant sled under Genma. LOL! That would be interesting though.

I was wondering if you had a favorite couple?? Also, it is Monday in D/s world. When does the club really start hopping? Probably the weekends most likely. Are there shows everynight like what Kakashi did with the eggs or what Naru/Sasu are going to do...or were. I have to re-read that chapter to. Are they still banned? Wait...Kakashi and Sasuke are both banned are they not, that is why they are having dinner somewhere else...

Hmmm...I should go back and re-read some chapters. I know what I'm going to do tonight *rubs hands and cackles* Whoot! Oh DANG it...I have to work early Saturday.

*shruggs* Meh...

Can't wait to see who the next lucky couple is. I say we all do a wager *waggles eyebrows*. I bet 2 D/s tokens it is a Naru/Sasu.

chpt 81&82: YAY... we finally figure out what is up with Raido and Genma! :) I really liked how you showed Ibiki to be vulnerable at the end of 82 that was a really nice touch! It is interesting to see how they will work out such a complex relationship and if Genma can get his feelings under control. I also *really really* appreciated the addition of pairings to the chapter titles :D that makes it so much easier to go back and reread favorite chapters!!!! :D horray!!

So happy to hear that more Sai, Kimimori and Gaara/Shika is on the way !!!!

(Eh, M' not loged in right now but know this is the real Skiler.)

I loved how you changed the chapter names! You don't know how hard it was for me to go to a sertain chapter to Reread it. Some times I like to go back to make sure I know whats going on or just go back and reread it because that happen to be one of my fav scean(sp). Now, all I have to do is look at the pairings. YAY! IT'A A SUCSESS!

Signed with so much happiness I could cry,
Skiler