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I'm tellin' ya!
I'm coo-dependent of this fic!
I promise this is the last review for tonight, only if you don't post anything soon though!

Can we get an update on Hiashi and Kimimaru? Sai and Neji? Kankoru and Shino? Or with Naruto and Sasuke? Their new nameless foundation?

PLEASE!!

Ok, I'll stop now.

TC!
`dragon

1000!!!!

Congratulations. ^___^ Your fic really deserves it.

But i wonder, will you involve shikaku somehow? I know, i know, there are soo many chars already. ^^´

Mistress, thank you. Your writing has allowed me to escape my own problems as well. As always you have found the perfect solution to the problem and I'm sure these three will be very happy together. I'm still concerned for Sai though, there is still the dark cloud of his past hanging over him and Neji. I'm looking forward to seeing how you will resolve this. Again thank you and please keep on writing.

Thanks for another chapter of Ibi/Gen/Rai. Wonderful emotional break
throughs for all three of the characters. The bed scene was written
beautifully. I really do enjoy reading about these three. Look forward
to more of them in the future and the other chapters you mentioned.

Wonderful like always. Gen's thought pattern breaks my heart and yet gives me so much hope. I'm eager to read the next part with these three, but also torn at wanting to get to the dinner scene!

You also have a typo in the scene where Ibiki is telling them what to/not to shave. "when I leave, stop staving everything from the waist to the collarbone." staving through me for a loop, then i realized it was 'shaving', lol.

Hello!
Nice emotional chapter. I'm glad that Genma finally was able to let go of his past.
I was wow'ed at the end with what Ibiki was thinking. Makes you wonder about his past as well.
I thought the kick that Raidou gave Genma was a bit much, and you didn't warn us about the peeing.
I was grossed out, I was so happy that I didn't have anything in my stomach or was eating for that matter.
But on the overall of this chapter it was wonderful. Just let Genma be claimed!
I'm looking forward to the dinner that you will have and see Naruto's reaction. Will his father make an appearance? Maybe give Naruto a few million dollars for his foundation as well as a few more for Naruto himself, so then he could get the collar for Sasuke?? What will Sasuke say anyway? I can't wait for what comes next whatever it is!!
Take care!!
`dragon

Can seem to keep track of things I want to say and have to keep review to say the things I forgot to say in my last review. Did that make sense??
Was that warning at the beginning or did I just imagined that wasn't there?? I can't remember.
Sorry if it was there and didn't see it. Must have faith in you!!
I also am looking forward to some Hiashi/Kimimaru, but more focus on them rather than the past. As well for Sai/Neji.

But what I really want to read is what you are going to do to Kankoru and Shino!!
Gosh I love this fic.
TC.
`dragon

I've hated every person that has ever touched me in any way, and so it is hard for me to understand the concept of D/s, and while you do a great job of describing the concepts of what makes a Dom, a sub, and a switch very clear, I still don't understand why a person would subject themselves to this type of physical, mental, and emotional torture (sorry if I seem incompetent or offend people).

I just thought hearing from a person who doesn't understand this world of seemingly acceptable humiliation, degredation, and violence (I say these words with no ill will or negative connotation, simply what I believe to be the lingo of the D/s world) would be something good and different to hear. I truly like this story and its complexities and hope you continue to update so that one day I can understand this world of D/s.

Ooh wow you changed the chapters to include the pairings - thank you so much now I can find my favourite chapters easily. I've been loving this entire fic - I think that you've completely changed my opinions of D/s (not that I had a firm opinion to start with LOL). Keep up the excellent work.
Zoe

I've been such a bad fan when it comes to reviewing a story and I want to make it up. Your story is one of the two stories the that I read on a regular basis.( The other one is The Sound of Dreams.) Such creativity and imagination that you have boggles my mind. One of the reasons that you have captured my attention is to see what you do next with the characters when it comes to bondage or whatever kinky sex act. I feel so naughty when I read your stuff. I love it!
You have my deepest sympathies regarding you cat. I just lost one of my cats last March to a unknown kitty sickness.