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by Hestia

schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hestia, I'm so so SO pleased you're updating again! When I started reading this story I was blushing so hard I swear I was my own personal hot water bottle, LOL. I love your portrayals of the characters and how you seem to make the entire story mesh into one while giving each pair of men their due! It's a beautiful story of love that happens to involve chains, whips, and orgasm denial, and honestly, if it were possible, I wish you could publish this openly. It gives such a positive light to relationships in general and BDSM in particular that it can merely be seen as something two consenting adults wish to enjoy. Thank you for enlightening me in the world of sex mentalities, and I look forward to your next chapter!


person dragon
schedule June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just wrote a review and forgot to put the damn two words and hit enter and puff is gone!!
Oh well.... DX
You updated and I didn't know!!
SHAME ON ME!!!
You made my whole week!! HONEST!!
My inner perverted fan girl is "kya-ing" none stop!! XD
I love your in-control Sai and your perverted pain slot Neji!
I SHALL ALWAYS LOVE THIS FIC!!! <33
Please update and don't abandon this marvelous fic!!
person Sigart
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And here I had just lost all faith that this would ever be continued. Thank you! Thank you, thank you, thank you, for once again filling my head with wonderful and improper images.
person reck
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just sat down and read this entire thing. Took me about a week, but it was well worth it. This is a seriously good piece of fanfiction. I felt like I was in another world while reading it. And it was truly the little things that mattered. One of my favorite things, was in the very beginning when Kakashi got the broken blood vessel in his eye and one eye was red, one was normal. It was such a creative way to bring the manga/show into the story. Every time you did that I was really impressed. haha. But yeah, before I get too rambly, this was truly good, and I can't wait to read more.
person LadyWolf
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT Hestia!!! I had re read this fic and loved it the second time around....

I must say my favorites are of course Naruto/Sas/Naruto, Gaara/Shika, Sai/Neji/Sai...yep but my all time fave has got to be Gaara/Shika. I love it when Shika's mom called!!! I just love Gaara period, he's like the sexiest man next to Naruto!

Post soon!
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg!! finally!!
i have not enjoyed a story more than this one. and, slut that i am, i want more. pretty please, can mistress hestia give us more?! please!

i fell in love with the sai/neji and gaara/shikamaru was real kinky... is it hot in here or is it just me? >_>

please...give us more... im addicted to this... and i wont say any more cuz its a tad embarrassing.
but yes...
more!
*CHIBI Sango gives you cookies as bribe*
person mignonne422
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Goddess! That last chapter was soo much love! Said and Neji are so exceptionally sweet they defy logic <3 I adore the way you write them, truly. So lovely

Sorry this is such a short review, it's a bit hard typing on the phone, LOL. But know that I loved this and am so so so glad you're writing again XD

Muah!!
person asdf
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg, i'm so happy that you're continuing to update this fic! i always randomly check/ re-read fics even when i think they've been abandoned (and damn if this isn't one of the hottest fics around) and i'm really happy that you've updated! This fic is inspiring for its positive portrayal of bdsm, not to mention quite...hmm...sexy and hawt! i hope to see a new chapter every once in awhile, and in the meantime, re-reading will commence. Thank you, thank you!
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
okay...so im only up to chapter 47..but ive been reading like 10 chapters a day since i first...how do u say... "found" this story--though u updated recently. and i think its cuz its really late but when naruto asked sasuke for his safe word and sasuke said:

"Digeridoo! Dodo-bird! Give me a fucking clue!”

i laughed so hard my sister woke up and told me to shut up.
this is a really good story.... love every second of it..going back to reading the rest!

*CHIBI sango showers you with cookies*
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH JOY JOY JOY

I adore this so very much. This chapter was a nice reintroduction to the relationship between Kimi and Hiashi. Gods, I love the POV here. You really conveyed the awe, the sense of disbelief well. I will say that at times, your characterization of Kimi is borderline child-like, almost as if he's undeveloped. I wonder if that's on purpose? Just curious. It works for this setting.