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I LOVE this 3some! Its so fucking hot! Also Gaara and Shika, great great stuff! Hell what am I saying the whole story, every chapter has been wonderful! I love all the pairing you have done! Keep it up!

NJ

Hello!
How you doing?
I was re-reading some of the chapters and number 57/58 got my attention.
In it Naruto was trying to make love to Sasuke, but in the end Sasuke was too much of a slut to want it.
I just want to ask if they will ever do it in this fic, make love I mean. What with Sasuke saying that no-one has ever make love to him and such.
I repeat my questing will it happen?
One a side note...
Thanks for labeling the chapters with the pairings, it makes it a lot easier to find the chapters with the pairings I like the most.
Take care.
`dragon

One more thing!
Is Haku going to show some passion per say?
He is too passive.
I want to read how Zabuza reacts. Ha!

Going back to Naruto/Sasuke I went to chapter 58/59, and re-read that they start to make love, but then they go wild from there, so at this point I don't know any better.
Also could you explain a bit more about what Itachi feels or felt for Sasuke? I'm really confused in that aspect.
Does he desire Sasuke for what happened before or feels the only way to feel close to his brother is through physical contact? Or what?

Take care!!
`dragon

An ass cake huh....

The first thing I thought about was Kisame and Itachi. But the cake has to have like black frosting for the ass or something. Maybe you could make the frosting look like hair in the crack and then you could "shave it" before you rim it. OH! I actually saw a cake that had hairy balls (it really didn't have hair but chocolate shavings). It was fucking funny as hell. Yes to Gaara and Shika of course. Vanilla icing for the cheeks with red frosting across the cheeks to make it look like whip marks. There are so many possibilites it's frightening.

I really...REALLY...like Ibiki/RAi/Gen couple now. I think it is totally AWESOME how they move in sync like that. I was so...transfixed...just imagining them moving, talking...just doing everything together. WOW! Ibiki is so fucking lucky to find two boys like this. I bet he is secretly doing a happy dance in his mind. I hope they mirror each other more often. FUCKING...HOT!

Thanks for the date by the way. MONDAY in D/s world. SWEET!

I can't wait for the day Sasuke remembers that night with Itachi. *eeeK* I wonder how Naruto is going to take it. I also can't wait for everyone to get collars and when Naruto finds out what jewel he has on, and Kaka/Iru getting married and..and...and....GOD! There is so much going on...it is soooo exciting!

I fucking LOVE this story...

Can't wait for next chappie!

--ono---

Great story dearie! Do update soon! I would love to read more about Neji and Sai's relationship :)

XD I have only read the author's notes so far- the collar is beautiful, and seeing it reminded me that you must spend a lot of time looking at gemstones, or it's already a hobby of yours- which is fine! When I'm bored I research DUCKS of all things, and gemstones are much swankier than ducks. XD

The asscake thing makes me giggle and fills me with glee. I tend to agree with you- Sasori and Deidara didn't then, though I dunno if they'd get one NOW. Hm.
Poor Shino.... I kinda think he'd burst into tears if he got an asscake with Kankuro, and I kinda think he'd be sad if he didn't get one! But we'll see how it works out.

Gaara I adore- Gaara would probably blush and be the cutest thing EVER seeing his ass in cake form. Insecure!Gaara just makes me want to take him home and feed him something, nevermind that I might pull back a bloody stump. X3

*thinks of something, and then dies laughing*
...Sasuke and Naruto would have to fight over whose ass the cake was. XD!!

Wow.
Just, wow.
Better than anything I could write.
Completely mindblowing.
I fucking love your fic.

need...MORE.
*runs away and reads more*

the Crimson Eagle.
--better known as,

Orgy-of-Death.

heeeee. Okay, now that I've READ the chapter (I skipped down beforehand to see why the scrolling was off- it's the link, it's too long ;_; )...
I do commend the boys on shaving. I hate shaving ANYTHING between my waist and my knees- I prefer to wax, so there isn’t any itching or irritation or tenderness and no ingrown hairs when the hair grows back in… though I understand that a gentleman might be a bit LEERY of hot wax on his balls. XD Poor babies… but it’s not bad at all _just as long_ as the person doing the ripping doesn’t wuss out. Hesitation is what hurts. <3

Jesus—this weekend had been unfucking believable—Lee peeing in the hall, Kakashi with his face stuffed and taped, then Sasuke with the corset piercing, Kakashi shitting out those eggs, Gaara threatening to kill Neji, Shino showing off those bitchin’ tatts, Sai coming on command into a peanut bowl in the bar, then Sasuke and Naruto fighting—Naruto almost slicing open Sasori’s throat, Sasuke threatening to cut off Hidan’s nipple—Itachi wearing Kisame’s necklace and the wild speculation on that, Kakashi and Iruka’s fight, he himself almost getting the shit beat out of him by Kakashi for being in the wrong place at the wrong time, and to top it all off, Raidou, his Raidou claimed by the baddest dom of all, Ibiki. And Monday, fucking Monday night when the club was dead, he and Raidou were going to go stand in the bar in little thongs, shaved and prettied up like a pair of slaveboys about to be auctioned off.
HEE HEE HEE HEE. It just sounds so... sordid and over-the-top all summed up like this, AND I LIKE IT LIKE THE FILTHY SLUT I AM. XD

*snickering and headshaking from the shower scene onward* Oh, Genma, Genma.... SUCH a slut. But then, we already knew you were, and we all already knew you were unsubtle. X3 It sucks to be you, my dear.... but in the fun way. Struggle and fight, sweet, slutty Genma. ^-^ it makes it more fun for all us voyeurs.

“Yea, well, in an hour when I’m sitting down, you can do that again and make it up to me, you fucking asshole!”
*LAUGHing* ....I love how you write Genma, Hestia-sensei. I totally adore it. XD
“Raidou, if I’m going to be a boy toy, I’m going to eat all the sugar my daddy can give me,” said Genma. “Now let’s kneel and grovel in front of Sasori, so we can get some dinner. I can’t live off your cum, you know.”
*laughs, clapping her hands* THAT'S my snarky, slutty boy. Well, I suppose he isn't mine, is he? He's Ibiki's and Raidou's. *Smiles so wide* And Hestia-sensei's, who gives him and all the others to us, to watch. I must say though that Genma's lack of time on his knees shows. It's actually very easy to go up the stairs quickly on all fours- if you're allowed to use your feet as well as your hands and knees, you can go up even faster than you could if you _ran_ up the stairs. It's going DOWN stairs on all fours that's really hard, and _really_ makes me wish I had some sort of joint between my hips and knees. ^^;;;

It's really really realistic that Genma wouldn't know that, though, about going up the stairs- most adults don't make a habit of charging up the stairs on all fours. (mua ha ha ha ha, surprises the hell out of rugrats when I catch them with that trick, though, since they know that under other circumstances they're faster than I am. "WHOA YOU TELEPORTED!" >:P)

I like how Genma is just as wounded and insecure as Raidou, in his own way. It reveals a lot about Ibiki that he sees it too... though of course the Ibiki of Naruto canon knows every wrinkle of everyone's psyche anyway. Still. This Ibiki knows you can't just _expect_ things of this Genma. He's already tamed Raidou, now he has to tame Genma. It's appropriate that they wear dog collars, because just like when you take home dogs from the pound, Ibiki is getting the mistakes of everyone in Genma and Raidou's past.

Raidou... is just freaking adorable. Come on now. <3

Right now, at this point in the story, Genma, Raidou, and Ibiki would NOT get an asscake. They're still too new to each other. Hiashi and Kimimaro... I like them, they're sweet, but there was this fairy-tale quality to the chapters with them in it, and even if you never came back to that pair, it'd feel like their story was complete. There was practically a "happily ever after" worked into the subtext.

Neji and Sai wouldn't get a cake either, not yet. They might, in time... they probably would get one, in time, but there's still a little too much in the way for them. Of course, it's also possible they'd wind up the best of friends, but hey now. >:3 This is a story, and we love smut and sex and sluts and HAPPY ENDINGS hooray. <3

Shino and Kankurou... there's this little raw patch about Kankurou. Like he's been wanting love as badly as his brother, but instead of not knowing how to get it, like Gaara, he went through the good old American way of trying to find it- DATING! And the D/s equivalent. I think they'd get a cake, but not until Shino let go of the last of his grief about his dog. Not that the loss of his dog isn't ever going to hurt, because yeah, that sort of loss ALWAYS hurts, forever... but you're done grieving when you're not lonely any more, and when thinking about the person when they were happy makes you happy, instead of sad. When Shino gets to that point, THEN there will be cake in the shape of ass. ^_^

...the mechanics of an ass cake, whatever you're thinking of, are certainly doable and not really that hard. I saw someone make Discworld, turtle, Disc, elephants, mountains and all, in cake form. Compared to a quartet of asteroid-pocked elephants made out of marzipan, an ASS should be pretty easy. XD

To just have an ass in the middle of a platter, like someone was bending over and sticking their butt through a hole in the table, you just make layer cakes, stack ‘em to the right height (or even a single layer: it’s hard to get cake to bake evenly in a layer thicker than three inches, but I figure Chouji could do it) and carve them to the right shape. Carve a tube out where the asshole would be, fill it, and put a layer of marzipan over it to close it off. Ice them, glaze them (like a donut, it’s a sturdier cover than fluffy icing), drape it in marzipan, enrobe it in chocolate. There are even more substances you can coat a cake with, and some of them you can sculpt, but I don’t know what they are or what they’re called. You could even make the asshole puckered and lifelike, with some marzipan and an airbrush. Airbrushing frosting or marzipan is easy! You just load the airbrush reservoir with a mixture of food coloring and water or alcohol (if the frosting would melt with water), and use patience, and away you go.

Hooray for thinking of the ass cake! The idea of whipping a cake seems ridiculous to me (strangely enough, FUCKING a cake doesn’t!)… the crop would just DESTROY it if you put any effort into the swing at all. Maybe a candy crop, of marzipan or Red Vines? XD

[moar riveew 4 u, since most of it never made it]
----Jesus—this weekend had been unfucking believable—Lee peeing in the hall, Kakashi with his face stuffed and taped, then Sasuke with the corset piercing, Kakashi shitting out those eggs, Gaara threatening to kill Neji, Shino showing off those bitchin’ tatts, Sai coming on command into a peanut bowl in the bar, then Sasuke and Naruto fighting—Naruto almost slicing open Sasori’s throat, Sasuke threatening to cut off Hidan’s nipple—Itachi wearing Kisame’s necklace and the wild speculation on that, Kakashi and Iruka’s fight, he himself almost getting the shit beat out of him by Kakashi for being in the wrong place at the wrong time, and to top it all off, Raidou, his Raidou claimed by the baddest dom of all, Ibiki. And Monday, fucking Monday night when the club was dead, he and Raidou were going to go stand in the bar in little thongs, shaved and prettied up like a pair of slaveboys about to be auctioned off.----
HEE HEE HEE HEE. It just sounds so... sordid and over-the-top all summed up like this, AND I LIKE IT LIKE THE FILTHY SLUT I AM. XD

*snickering and headshaking from the shower scene onward* Oh, Genma, Genma.... SUCH a slut. But then, we already knew you were, and we all already knew you were unsubtle. X3 It sucks to be you, my dear.... but in the fun way. Struggle and fight, sweet, slutty Genma. ^-^ it makes it more fun for all us voyeurs.

----“Yea, well, in an hour when I’m sitting down, you can do that again and make it up to me, you fucking asshole!”----

*LAUGHing* ....I love how you write Genma, Hestia-sensei. I totally adore it. XD
“Raidou, if I’m going to be a boy toy, I’m going to eat all the sugar my daddy can give me,” said Genma. “Now let’s kneel and grovel in front of Sasori, so we can get some dinner. I can’t live off your cum, you know.”
*laughs, clapping her hands* THAT'S my snarky, slutty boy. Well, I suppose he isn't mine, is he? He's Ibiki's and Raidou's. *Smiles so wide* And Hestia-sensei's, who gives him and all the others to us, to watch. I must say though that Genma's lack of time on his knees shows. It's actually very easy to go up the stairs quickly on all fours- if you're allowed to use your feet as well as your hands and knees, you can go up even faster than you could if you _ran_ up the stairs. It's going DOWN stairs on all fours that's really hard, and _really_ makes me wish I had some sort of joint between my hips and knees. ^^;;;

It's really really realistic that Genma wouldn't know that, though, about going up the stairs- most adults don't make a habit of charging up the stairs on all fours. (mua ha ha ha ha, surprises the hell out of rugrats when I catch them with that trick, though, since they know that under other circumstances they're faster than I am. "WHOA YOU TELEPORTED!" >:P)

Right now, at this point in the story, Genma, Raidou, and Ibiki would NOT get an asscake. They're still too new to each other. Hiashi and Kimimaro... I like them, they're sweet, but there was this fairy-tale quality to the chapters with them in it, and even if you never came back to that pair, it'd feel like their story was complete. There was practically a "happily ever after" worked into the subtext.

Neji and Sai wouldn't get a cake either, not yet. They might, in time... they probably would get one, in time, but there's still a little too much in the way for them. Of course, it's also possible they'd wind up the best of friends, but hey now. >:3 This is a story, and we love smut and sex and sluts and HAPPY ENDINGS hooray. <3

Shino and Kankurou... there's this little raw patch about Kankurou. Like he's been wanting love as badly as his brother, but instead of not knowing how to get it, like Gaara, he went through the good old American way of trying to find it- DATING! And the D/s equivalent. I think they'd get a cake, but not until Shino let go of the last of his grief about his dog. Not that the loss of his dog isn't ever going to hurt, because yeah, that sort of loss ALWAYS hurts, forever... but you're done grieving when you're not lonely any more, and when thinking about the person when they were happy makes you happy, instead of sad. When Shino gets to that point, THEN there will be cake in the shape of ass. ^_^

...the mechanics of an ass cake, whatever you're thinking of, are certainly doable and not really that hard. I saw someone make Discworld, turtle, Disc, elephants, mountains and all, in cake form. Compared to a quartet of asteroid-pocked elephants made out of marzipan, an ASS should be pretty easy. XD

To just have an ass in the middle of a platter, like someone was bending over and sticking their butt through a hole in the table, you just make layer cakes, stack ‘em to the right height (or even a single layer: it’s hard to get cake to bake evenly in a layer thicker than three inches, but I figure Chouji could do it) and carve them to the right shape. Carve a tube out where the asshole would be, fill it, and put a layer of marzipan over it to close it off. Ice them, glaze them (like a donut, it’s a sturdier cover than fluffy icing), drape it in marzipan, enrobe it in chocolate. There are even more substances you can coat a cake with, and some of them you can sculpt, but I don’t know what they are or what they’re called. You could even make the asshole puckered and lifelike, with some marzipan and an airbrush. Airbrushing frosting or marzipan is easy! You just load the airbrush reservoir with a mixture of food coloring and water or alcohol (if the frosting would melt with water), and use patience, and away you go.

Hooray for thinking of the ass cake! The idea of whipping a cake seems ridiculous to me (strangely enough, FUCKING a cake doesn’t!)… the crop would just DESTROY it if you put any effort into the swing at all. Maybe a candy crop, of marzipan or Red Vines? XD

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Shino and Kankurou... there's this little raw patch about Kankurou. Like he's been wanting love as badly as his brother, but instead of not knowing how to get it, like Gaara, he went through the good old American way of trying to find it- DATING! And the D/s equivalent. I think they'd get a cake, but not until Shino let go of the last of his grief about his dog. Not that the loss of his dog isn't ever going to hurt, because yeah, that sort of loss ALWAYS hurts, forever... but you're done grieving when you're not lonely any more, and when thinking about the person when they were happy makes you happy, instead of sad. When Shino gets to that point, THEN there will be cake in the shape of ass. ^_^

...the mechanics of an ass cake, whatever you're thinking of, are certainly doable and not really that hard. I saw someone make Discworld, turtle, Disc, elephants, mountains and all, in cake form. Compared to a quartet of asteroid-pocked elephants made out of marzipan, an ASS should be pretty easy. XD

To just have an ass in the middle of a platter, like someone was bending over and sticking their butt through a hole in the table, you just make layer cakes, stack ‘em to the right height (or even a single layer: it’s hard to get cake to bake evenly in a layer thicker than three inches, but I figure Chouji could do it) and carve them to the right shape. Carve a tube out where the asshole would be, fill it, and put a layer of marzipan over it to close it off. Ice them, glaze them (like a donut, it’s a sturdier cover than fluffy icing), drape it in marzipan, enrobe it in chocolate. There are even more substances you can coat a cake with, and some of them you can sculpt, but I don’t know what they are or what they’re called. You could even make the asshole puckered and lifelike, with some marzipan and an airbrush. Airbrushing frosting or marzipan is easy! You just load the airbrush reservoir with a mixture of food coloring and water or alcohol (if the frosting would melt with water), and use patience, and away you go.

Hooray for thinking of the ass cake! The idea of whipping a cake seems ridiculous to me (strangely enough, FUCKING a cake doesn’t!)… the crop would just DESTROY it if you put any effort into the swing at all. Maybe a candy crop, of marzipan or Red Vines? XD

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