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I like how you've started editting in the time frame and the pairings, though it doesn't really matter to me anymore since I just always read the whole thing over again. But I guess it'll be handy for me when I'm looking for a particular chapter.

I still really love each chapter, it's so good, and I'm fond of every pairing, except not that interested in Iru/Kaka/Iru.

Please update soon!

Wow, you are reaching 1000 reviews. XD
I love your story and it's originality though i've never reviewed a chapter before. I'm a lazy ass..
So, i will help to reach 1000 now. ^^

Ah.. and i would LOVE to read much, much more. (especially kashi/ruka and gen/rai)

Keep it on. ^^

I'm glad you got to re-title the chaps. I'm totally rested now, so this is even better. Who woulda thunk? I really like Genma's POV, the struggle between the id and the superego. *sigh* So primal.
-Misia

Love the additions of the dates/times and the pairings for each chapter.
thanks

So sorry to hear about Tommie - Bear and I are thinking of him.

You are wonderful

Im madly in love with you.

and I would not care if you did not write anymore, because youre are that wonderful.

dont get me wrong, more is great.

thank you.

you make pathetic lil me happy.

:)

I absolutely adore you for adding the pairings into the chapter headings. Now when I want to go re-read a specific chapter I can go straight to it ^.^ you may be the coolest thing since sliced bread.

Three cheers for threesomes! Yea! Yea! Yea! I really enjoyed Genma's slowly mentally giving into the idea of being a sub, and his reminiscing of how much fun he had in his wild teenage years helped in part. And Ibiki sounds like he's gonna be a real fun dom! So I had to laugh at the shaving sequence and Ibiki's list of do's and don'ts, especially the second collar for Genma. You know Ibiki knows how to dom! He knew Genma would be his sub long before Genma even knew it! I could almost feel his presence, his influence in Genma's breakdown to the "darkside".

That cake! I've got to get me something similar! That Choji is really showing his talents as a culinary artiste! I don't know if Choji likes Gaara or Shikimaru but I would put them up for nomination, especially to acknowledge the change in Gaara now that he's found love. Naruto and Sasuke still have more work on their relationship; Naruto, and for all practical purposes, Sasuke, still doesn't know what happened between Sasuke and Itachi.

Cookie~

Can you fix Chapter 80 or 81, whichever, it's too long. It's wierd. I mean, i have to scroll to the side to read all of a line. Can you fix it please?

Absolutely wonderful!! I can never wait for a new chapter!!

I wasn't too sure about the whole Kimimaro and Hiashi combination but you've written it so well that I'm really looking forward to what's next for them. I was surprised that you added another couple to the mix with all that's going on in the story but I'm so glad that you did!! I did have small problem following along for a second in Chapter 81 with Raidou and Genma. Is it customary for subs that are going to Uchiha's, or any such place, without their dom accompanying them to bow and beg the staff to be seated/fed? Because we were going along and then it seemed that all of sudden we had to go beg Sasori. And the contract and schedule that Raidou suddenly had to go get that was the one he'd been working on at work, right? Nice collar! Enough to make Ganma doubt he could go through with subbing but not enough for him to back out on Raidou. Cutesy enough to be humiliating for him, I loved it!! I'm eagerly awaiting Genma's submission!!

As for the ass cake, I think if Choji saw how in love Shika is with Gaara, and vise verse, they would get a cake but I'm not sure Gaara would want Shika to fuck it in front of the guests since we've been talking about no public sex, but I'm not too sure that they'd accept the cake either. I'm not seeing Gaara getting his ass molded (if that's how it's done) and I don't think Shika would like that part of it either. I don't think Neji and Sai would give a shit if they got a cake or not. I think Kisame would rather Itachi be covered in cake so he could eat it off. Not too sure about Kankuro and Shino. Hiashi and Kimimaro, it's just too soon and I think they're more the type to stay at home than go to Uchiha's other than for a special night out. They'd probably just have a small ceremony in the back yard. I'd love for Naruto and Sasuke to get a cake and you know there'd be issues with whose ass the cake will be of but definitely Naruto's. Sasuke will be embarrassed about it but will take it out on Naruto by rimming it and sucking out the cream, or whatever you deem fit, just like the "ass" slut he his, reminding Naruto how he did that to Sasuke a couple of chapters back (maybe fill it with ice cream so when Shika and Gaara attend it will remind Gaara of his "ice cream bowl"). It will get Naruto so hot he won't be able to keep himself from fucking Sasuke right there (but acting as a total dom as we don't want Iruka mad about our lack of discipline). But Sasuke, knowing this, will have gotten the guests to sign the waiver and then maybe Gaara and Shika will toe into public sex since everybody will be fucking by that point. All I know is that I'd like to see a group covered in cake and cream.

But that's just my opinion.

This is the best fic ever!! I can't wait till you hit the "400" mark!! Keep up the excellent work!!

Oakie