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Oh! An Ass cake!! What fun!! If you look around on the web there are some bakeries that make them and ship them. You could get ideas from there.I think that if you had it have a front and a back, It would have to be made like a portion of Michaelangelo's David. You know, like the person was standing up. Otherwise, in a cake form it would not work, from a real life perspective. It is easy to make an ass cake, or even a penis cake(even hard is easy. it just takes support underneath the cake layer) but to put both together gets a little complicated. You could have Chouji make two, one ass and one cock!! That would be fun! And it opens up many other possibilities. I love this story!!!!! I love the image of the two of them with Ibiki!!!

gyahhh *panting tongue-out*

So.
Fucking.
Hot.

I love Gaara's internal monologue, how introspective he is, understanding something without comprehending others, but KNOWING there is something he's missing. And I love Shikamaru, FLOORED by Gaara and what he wants to do and what he's done... and Shika the jealous little slut makes me giggle. He gets all riled and pissy like a drenched kitten. XD

OMG!!
That was absolutely hot, kinky, and lovely at the same time! O.O;;
Wonderful!
I really like the red everything for Gaara, rather than the black titanium.
Do please keep writing. I can't wait to read about the collaring ceremony.
Take care.
`dragon

Best couple ever - Gaara/Shika. Can't get enough - thanks for your time and talent~!

chpt 80: LOL I love Shikamaru! I love how he's a snoopy little bitch but then worries about the money and wants to do something nice for Gaara and get him all those lovely things. Shika has a good head on his shoulders and a decent heart :) I wonder if Gaara really appreciates Shika's abilities. I can't wait to see the conclusion of where this one left off O_O Gah can Shika's slutty ways really be sated? I guess we'll all find out!

I can't wait to read more of their contract, it is so fitting that poor Shika is about to cum just reading it :) lol he might be the biggest slut of this story :) but gah he's so cool <3 and his curls!!

Thank you for another speedy update!

You are really too good to me - you gave us another long Gaara/Shika
chapter immediately after another one. Loved the contract and Shika's
reactions to it.

Shika's plans for Gaara's collar, whip, arm bands, ring etc were
fantastic (red leather, meteorites and bloodstones wonderful).
Bloodstone is one of my favorite stones - I have several rings,
necklace and numerous loose stones- I almost mentioned it but then forgot.

I had wondered about a double collaring ceremony but wasn't sure if that was
done in the D/s world either. Liked Shika's reactions and thoughts on Gaara using the
whip at the collaring ceremony.

Wonder how much (if any) trouble Shika will get into for using Gaara's
computer and reading Gaara's e-mail and finding out what his collar
would look like. But then Shika seems to like punishment.

Forgot to mention in the previous review how nice it would be if Gaara does
have a mirror installed above the bed (and maybe in the living room to above the
table/futon).

Loved the catheter and Shika's jealousy and how Gaara knew that he was
jealous and what it was about.

The paddling and the aftermath was great. And Gaara deciding that a fuck
slut was better than a pain slut and Gaara thinking that fucking Shika made
the whip, crop etc boring was wonderful.

Well this review is getting ridicously long because basically
I loved everything in the chapter so I'll just say thanks for another chapter
and that I look forward to the next.

Mrow! I'm soooo sorry i havent reviewed in so long no excues but i did read! and i have to say i'm completely in love with garra/shika and itachi/kisame not only that but how you got hiashi together with kimimarou (sp?) was completely....KICKASS! The whole hiashi abuse favtor inspired me (i hear an angst fic calling my name).

Now i just have a few questions:
Will the sabaku dinner be coming soon?
Does anko and hinata know that hiashi knows about them? I ask this b/c when naruto was working at the shop anko had asked for something discrete so i thought hiashi didn't know.

Um well that all for now please keep up the great work i really enjoy reading this story.
Inigeshi

I deserve a medal; I read this fucker in one go.
I beg you, don't bring in story lines centering on Danzou, Orochimaru or the Uchihacest; let those be the dark shadows that must exist in life but can be ignored and tolerated.
I really (reallyreallyreally) like the idea of the shelter home thing I've completely forgotten what its nameless title was. I'm practically delerious and I swear to god I'm seeing things, but I promise, this so far was worth it. Neji/Sai is my favorite pairing in this after my OTP Naru/Sasu.
I only take issue with one thing: twice you called the prostate a bundle of nerves. It's a gland. I don't remember the pairing for the first time but I know you just wrote 'bundle of nerves' and the second time was somewhere during Kakashi fucking Iruka that first time saying 'bundle of nerves, Iruka's prostate.' I don't remember more specific than that.
Oo, and I don't know about chapter titles but you could just put the main pairing of each chapter.
I can't think of anything else I wanted to say...I'm gonna go pass out now.
-Misia

Hmmn, LOL, Yummy XD, Are you trying to make me want ice-cream now XD, LOL.
Hooray Cosplay talk XD. Well that's just a different kind of yummy now isn't it XD.
I love the idea of Shika tattooing the Ai on his ass.

Holy Shit Hes... Gods an hour and change of just continuous fucking. Damn... dreams really do come true.
Gods this entire chapter was so freaking hott. I loved all the speculation about collars and blood stone, whips and ceremonies.
LOL and Damn I begging for a public fucking!! :kneels and kisses Hestia-Goddesses' feet: Please... Please... Please...
And the jealousy, and the absolute control, working in this relationship, not to mention the completely wanton desire.
Everything, with Shika he had everything, lol, I'm so jealous. I want your Gaara. Pack him up and send him along, please...
I'm begging for so many things today. That was just perfect ♥♥♥

LOL, Nice one Shika XD. So very Naughty XD. Temptation incarnate. I love this couple, they always have such interesting apparatus ;). And OH God a collaring ceremony in front of everyone where Gaara get 's to whip and fuck Shika. LOL, There'll either be a LOT of sex in that building or a helluva lot of running off at the end XD. Either way I can't wait XD. I'm also really curious as to Choji's Ass cake? hmmmn XD. I also adore the idea of the mirror!! And LOL, God you made me want Chinese food XD. LOL, I kinda want cake too O.o XD. Gods, now I can't concentrate :Goes off in search of food: Loves you ♥