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by Hestia

schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOT!
person dragon
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapters.
I love the chapter with Sasuke and Naruto. Lovely.
I can't wait for a Gaara/Shika or another Kankoru/Shino.
Take care.
person Hen
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a great new chapter! I am SO glad to see things going well for both Uchiha brothers! I was starting to worry that Itachi might not ever get over Sasuke.

I'm really looking forward to Naruto and Sasuke's dinner with Iruka and Kakashi, because I am really curious to hear about Naruto's father.

You have almost every guy from Naruto in here. The only one I can't recall seeing is Ebisu! Will he ever make an appearance?
person Allys
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh God Oh God Hestia!! You are on a roll again. Itachi getting all excited about being
allowed to show himself as a slave in public. Then oh God oh God!! Naruto licking his
own cum out of Sasuke's ass O.O :swoons and Dies!!: (The sweet little death) Holy crap
that was Hott!!! And LOL, he was all appalled when it squirted out and was wasted! "Hey,"
LOL, "I wanted that!!" XD. And the shirt and the punishments!! And Oh God Sasuke's still hard!!
And Naruto getting up on the table to sing silly sexy songs o.o;;; LMAO!!! He so killed it XD!!
In the greatest way!! God I love silly boys!! That in itself is just so sexy, but the embarrassing
kind where you just have to run and hide, LOL. Sasuke and I were so in the same boat,
I was all "Oh no..." LMAO! "Stop that shit right NOW!!" XD. And Oh God, LOL,
punishments for lack of Ramen XD. WTF!! XD, Nobody but Naruto :huggles him to death:
"I'm working on our contract"!! LOL. And then seeing Itachi, and Itachi and Kisame seeing Shiva's tear.
Somebody has GOT to tell that boy!! Jeez, poor fella is so clueless. And I agree with Kisame
"And why, why was Sasuke’s neck bare?"!! Somebody has got to tell Naruto. I'm so proud of all
of them though, and so immensely Proud of you. I love the idea of a foundation, it's fantastic!
And the laughter. It's so great that where ever Naruto goes he brings laughter. And a resolution
to the Uchiha boy's worries. Oh God! You know I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter!! I love that
you're all speedy again!! I can't wait for the next one :Glomps u: Thanks again love, ♥♥♥.


schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*SNORKS*
Oh.... I do not feel at ALL bad for Sasori, but I kind of want to. All that was weird enough for the people who were THERE, but to get it dumped in one load is pretty freaking spectacular. XD

Good show, lady.

Also, and I never thought I'd say this.... Hiashi and Kimimaro are so sweet. X3
person ohwowywow
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am completely utterly totally unhealthily enamoured with Hiashi and Kimimaro... what did you DO to my BRAIN!?!?!!!
(don't stop doing it, either!)
ps... I think I saw a 'chocking' somewhere... should be 'choking'
<3 <3 <3
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you mistress
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just have to tell you how much I Love the idea of Hiashi/Kimimaro. I can't say I ever would've thought up that pairing but I really like it. The way this story is going is just great. A lot of times in stories where there is a main pairing, NaruSasuNaru for example, the parts where the author focuses on another couple kinda drives me batty but you do it wonderfully.

I also really like Ibiki/Raidou. Hmmm...is Ibiki going to find himself another pretty toy in Genma? That could be interesting.
person llyoung
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naruto wiggling and singing on the coffee table was very funny. Loved Naruto's
list of Sasuke's offenses and the punishments he decided that they merited. Loved
Naruto's reply to Kisame over which of them was dom “Sasuke’s agreed to be my
sub for a month, but I let him dom a little bit each day cause he’s sexy when
he’s all snotty,” Loved Sasuke and Itachi both laughing. Loved Naruto's speech about
never touching Itachi's cock for the rest of his life (heck, I loved everything). I also was very glad that Kisame told Itachi that he loved him. And Kisame wondering
why Sasuke's neck was still bare (it's because Naruto still hasn't a clue that he has actually been collared - Naruto is clueless sometimes, but we love him that way - plus Naruto wants to get Sasuke a very expensive collar). Thanks for another chapter.
person Allys
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh!!! ;_; Oh man Hestia, chpt 75 has me drowning in sweetness XD.
i love it. I can't even begin to explain, but god it's so lovely when the broken get mended.
Poor Kimimaro, he's going to go into culture shock, but it will do him so much good.
I feel so bad for him about his past, but hey he's definitely being rewarded for it now.
Fantastic!! Belissima!! It was all gorgeous. I love when Hiashi told Kimimaro
"When you tell me you love me, call me Hiashi." :holda heart: And OMG O.o -
"He broken my arm, beat the crap out of my back and ass, and raped me. It’s ok, though."
LMAO it's okay though??? That is the funniest thing I've heard in a while XD.
LOL, I mean I know it is ok now, it's just how he said it O.o, LOL.
And Ohhhhhh... Kimimaro's reaction!!! :HUGGLES HIM:

Oh and on a technical note - I think you meant adjoin and not adjourn.

Chpt 76 - OMG Sasori's such a prat! I kinda think I hate him, judgmental Bastard!!
And the icing - He has NO FUCKING IDEA What he's talking about!!! What a little bitch!
But LOL it's so canon!! He is, you have him down pat! And ZOMG!!! The Scene was HAWT!!!
I mean DAMNBBB!! Wow!! The food and the rods and the DP :nosebleed:
Holy shit sweetheart, you have once again - Outdone yourself!! This is incredible!!!
And Baki was hott as all hell too! Still wanna smack the damn little red-head bitch of a bishie, but Damn!!!
LOL, :showers u with love and appreciation:

And LOL, I'm still dying here to see Naruto's reaction when they tell him what he's got around his neck.
LOL, and the by calls himself a jeweller XD. He's going to be reeling, soooo excited XD!!