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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chpt 75 & 76: Oh god so lovely <3 I am sitting in the lobby of my hotel at the beach enjoying your naughty story hehehe Such a great read :D I loved getting more info about Hirigay(sp?) and then it was neat to see a double penetration <3 hehe the sum up of where the story is there at the end was priceless! You're spoiling us with all these updates it's fantastic :D Please continue spoiling us <3!!! I don't know what to beg for anymore - more Sai, more Gaara, more Genma so we can figure out if he gets picked up by Ibiku? :D gah it's all so good! :D Thank you so much!
Saw some typos this chapter:
He been coddling Deidara since he’d taken that kick to the balls, (((He _had_ been))
and the food would be bad for a day or too. ((two not too))
Deidara sucked hard and making Sasori’s leg kick out and topple some artistically piled flowers. ((nix the first and after hard))
Saw some typos this chapter:
He been coddling Deidara since he’d taken that kick to the balls, (((He _had_ been))
and the food would be bad for a day or too. ((two not too))
Deidara sucked hard and making Sasori’s leg kick out and topple some artistically piled flowers. ((nix the first and after hard))
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kimimaro and Sai...yeah...doing a driving lesson. That could either be really fucking hot, or really fucking funny.
God...Sasori. Geesh. That dude. Why is he all crying like a little bitch? I hope Naruto gets fucked hard on Saturday so he can shut the hell up. What day is it in D/s world anyway...
Like Allys said, Naruto...our lovable, clueless blond, is a jewler and has no clue what he has on his neck. That is so fucking funny.
I just loved how you mention Eliza from "My FAir Lady". I just suddenly pictured Kimimaro singing "I could have Danced all night" when he is in his own room, fucking dancing on the beds with a dreamy look in his eyes, while all of the servants are trying to fix him up with clothes and shit...
Yeah...you know what I'm talking about...
WOW...you are almost at 1000 reviews. CONGRATS. You really deserve it. You pump these chappies out and they are so amazing.
The chapters are great and looking forward to next time!
--onobaby--
God...Sasori. Geesh. That dude. Why is he all crying like a little bitch? I hope Naruto gets fucked hard on Saturday so he can shut the hell up. What day is it in D/s world anyway...
Like Allys said, Naruto...our lovable, clueless blond, is a jewler and has no clue what he has on his neck. That is so fucking funny.
I just loved how you mention Eliza from "My FAir Lady". I just suddenly pictured Kimimaro singing "I could have Danced all night" when he is in his own room, fucking dancing on the beds with a dreamy look in his eyes, while all of the servants are trying to fix him up with clothes and shit...
Yeah...you know what I'm talking about...
WOW...you are almost at 1000 reviews. CONGRATS. You really deserve it. You pump these chappies out and they are so amazing.
The chapters are great and looking forward to next time!
--onobaby--
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kimimaro is like Cinderella! That was a great chapter!
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A lot going on in this chapter but I do love to see things move forward like this. I was amazed at how much Peter knew about Hiashi's past. i wasn't expecting anyone to be that close to the family. But I can't decide who I want to see more of now, Hiashi and Kimimaro or Raidou, Genma, and Ibiki. (And then there's all the other couples as well.) I really just love them all so much!
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I could feel the tackle glomp coming from the very beginning of this chapter :Tackle glomps you knocking u over and showering you with kisses:
LOL, not very sub-like XD. I'll behave I pwomise XD. *Squee* :runs around like an idiot in my head: (cause it would be hard to type if I did it for real)
LOL, I was all into having lovely juicy thoughts too before you slammed with sweetness and made me tear up, so Kawaii. And then dropped me into hotness again
:swoons and dies: ZOMG SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO EXCITED!!!!!! :clapping and squeeing like an idiot: See what you've reduced me to :Huggles u:
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LOL, not very sub-like XD. I'll behave I pwomise XD. *Squee* :runs around like an idiot in my head: (cause it would be hard to type if I did it for real)
LOL, I was all into having lovely juicy thoughts too before you slammed with sweetness and made me tear up, so Kawaii. And then dropped me into hotness again
:swoons and dies: ZOMG SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO EXCITED!!!!!! :clapping and squeeing like an idiot: See what you've reduced me to :Huggles u:
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What an interesting turn of events -- it looks like Genma's contemplating being a sub so he can continue being with Raidou. Of course that would mean Ibiki would be dom to two subs (hmm). I'm sure he could handle it; in fact, I KNOW Ibiki can handle it ^^!
But this Hiashi/Kimimaro thing -- I just love Hiashi's euphemisms. Of course never "offficially" becoming part of the scene, I can see how his words would reflect this. And I love Kimimaro's reaction to Hiashi's "setting up house", almost in disbelief. But I can see his reactions because apparently there has been very little in Kimimaro's life that he really could believe and trust. That's why I like the "cock didn't lie" comment, the one thing that he can depend on. And for some perverse reason, I keep thinking about that scene in Conan the Barbarian, where young Conan is listening to the "words of wisdom" about steel from his father: "For no one - no one in this world can you trust. Not men, not women, not beasts." Then Daddy Conan points to his sword and states: "This you can trust". I can just see Hiashi in dom-mode, seriously staring at Kimimaro while pointing at his cock -- "THIS you can trust". Sorry, but that really put me into one of my weird moments, still you got to admit, swords do carry a lot of phallic imagery ^_^.
And I couldn't help but think -- wow, this is Kimimaro's first real kiss -- maybe, in a strange way, Hiashi's as well. And I love the way he refers to Sai as Neji's "fiancee" (with 2e's -- hmmm).
“Neji told Sai about when I abused him. He broken my arm, beat the crap out of my back and ass, and raped me. It’s ok, though. We came to an understanding. I deserved it all for what I did.” Kimimaro dropped his paper cup, trying to process that." You and me both Kimimaro -- my brain nearly turn on itself over that one! I got ass-raped but its okay, everything's "Kool and the Gang" - LOL!
In short - I'm really looking forward to some very interesting "scenes" between Hiashi and Kimimaro!
Cookie~
But this Hiashi/Kimimaro thing -- I just love Hiashi's euphemisms. Of course never "offficially" becoming part of the scene, I can see how his words would reflect this. And I love Kimimaro's reaction to Hiashi's "setting up house", almost in disbelief. But I can see his reactions because apparently there has been very little in Kimimaro's life that he really could believe and trust. That's why I like the "cock didn't lie" comment, the one thing that he can depend on. And for some perverse reason, I keep thinking about that scene in Conan the Barbarian, where young Conan is listening to the "words of wisdom" about steel from his father: "For no one - no one in this world can you trust. Not men, not women, not beasts." Then Daddy Conan points to his sword and states: "This you can trust". I can just see Hiashi in dom-mode, seriously staring at Kimimaro while pointing at his cock -- "THIS you can trust". Sorry, but that really put me into one of my weird moments, still you got to admit, swords do carry a lot of phallic imagery ^_^.
And I couldn't help but think -- wow, this is Kimimaro's first real kiss -- maybe, in a strange way, Hiashi's as well. And I love the way he refers to Sai as Neji's "fiancee" (with 2e's -- hmmm).
“Neji told Sai about when I abused him. He broken my arm, beat the crap out of my back and ass, and raped me. It’s ok, though. We came to an understanding. I deserved it all for what I did.” Kimimaro dropped his paper cup, trying to process that." You and me both Kimimaro -- my brain nearly turn on itself over that one! I got ass-raped but its okay, everything's "Kool and the Gang" - LOL!
In short - I'm really looking forward to some very interesting "scenes" between Hiashi and Kimimaro!
Cookie~
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You spoil us!
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really glad that Kimimaru and Hiashi are together and happy with each
other. They both have had rough lives and deserve some happiness. I'm
also glad that Hiashi is protecting Sai from any retribution and that he
made it clear that no one tells Neji what happened except Sai and only if
Sai wants to.
I forgot to mention in my last review of the previous chapter how sexy the
underwear sounded - thanks for the link that shows the picture. I also liked
the way you included Hayate in the last chapter - you are very good at bringing
elements of the Naruto storyline into your story.
other. They both have had rough lives and deserve some happiness. I'm
also glad that Hiashi is protecting Sai from any retribution and that he
made it clear that no one tells Neji what happened except Sai and only if
Sai wants to.
I forgot to mention in my last review of the previous chapter how sexy the
underwear sounded - thanks for the link that shows the picture. I also liked
the way you included Hayate in the last chapter - you are very good at bringing
elements of the Naruto storyline into your story.
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think Hiashi/Kimimaro is an awesome pair. I really love the changes Hiashi has made. Wonder what's going happen when Neji finds out (or is he going to find out at all) that Sai raped him. That'll be interesting.
I hope next chapter is going to be dedicated to Naruto & Sasuke. I've been waiting for those two to make an entrance again.
Thanks for the great story.
I hope next chapter is going to be dedicated to Naruto & Sasuke. I've been waiting for those two to make an entrance again.
Thanks for the great story.
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You took two characters that I would have never in a million years put together and BamB! So hot so sexy so loving. I'm bowing to you right now:) That was fab u lous!