rate_review Reviews

Deidara knows how to get his Master's mind off his problems. Loved the scene
in the breakfast room (and appropriate comments about Deidara's art, art that
wouldn't last). Loved the rods, loved the dp, loved everything. And Baki's
recitation of what had happened recently “Kisame has collared Itachi with his platinum chain and giant shark’s tooth, Sasuke has collared Naruto with Shiva’s tear, Kakashi overpowered Iruka who was punching and fighting him for real, gagging and binding him, driving off with him in the back of their car, and Ibiki had a sub session with Raidou.”
and Sasori choking on an ice cube was wonderful. Sasori has such a problem
with things beyond his control - he will just have to learn that he doesn't control
everything :) Thanks for another chapter.

I was so excited to see another Hiashi/Kimimaru chapter! Yea! It was very good. Sasori was interesting, but he seems a little stuck up--which ultimately I like because it adds another flavor to the story. I want another Ibiki/Raidou chapter though. yes, yes. And some Genma on the side. mmm.

You're awesomeness has reduced me to a toddler's state of mind. It seems all I can do is say "me like!" and "gimme!" (lol)

Keep on writing. Still love this fic!

Oh joy, I was hoping you'd do a scene with Deidara! And I'm so glad Kimimaro is getting taken care of. Hooray!

Well it's me again.
I distracted myself from this fic for a while. When I discovered the new chapter with Sai and Hiashi I couldn't bring myself to read it. Took me this long to read it and the rest. I like you fic a-plenty and I like how you got Hiashi and Kimimaru together. Is just that I'm really uncomfortable with threesomes. Of any kind. The first one I read was bad, so it's kinda difficult for me to read. But I did read you chapters. I was trying to see the whole picture, but I don't know... I guess I should've seen it coming, but I just thought that everything will only be them thinking about it... maybe plan yet not doing it and not actually reading it. Sigh. Sorry if this isn't one of my regular reviews with appreciation toward your fic, is just that I'm really uncomfortable right now.
Take care.
`dragon

Damn that was hot. Poor Sasori, I wonder how much more weirdness he can take. I wonder if he's fearing that family dinner thing now.

WHY did you word it like that?!?! You know it's really Sasuke the brat that is collared! You give that snotty sub a brilliant expensive collar right now, so Naruto can show the world who is REALLY the master!!!

Oh wow. Absolutely loved Genma's fantasy at the end. I had hoped since the
chapter with Ibiki and Raidou with Genma coming in at the end (and eating with
them) that maybe Genma would join in with them and now it looks like he will.
Ibiki is dom enough for two subs and Genma will do anything for Raidou and Raidou
isn't entirely happy unless he has them both in his life. I love it. Thanks for
the update.

chpt 74: heheh looks like Ibiki is going to get 2 for the price of 1 >_> quite a bargain! :D YAY for Update thank you so much!

I love the newest chapter!!! If you have Ibiki with both Genma and Raidou, I will worship the very ground you walk on (metaphorically, since I don't know where your ground is). Seriously now...<3.

I was wondering what you had planned for Genma. Now I'm dying to see what happens next with these three. Oh but I would just love to see Genma become Ibki's sub with Raidou, but maybe that's too much.

Found another typo for you. Halfway down: 'He had that look, that blissful, dreamy look that subs got—and then he was handing Raidou the note' looks like you mixed up names.