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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oH, YES! a THREESOME...
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AH! I totally forgot about this couple. I can NOT WAIT to see Ibiki expression when he see's those two.
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating! You have no idea how happy your updates make me... after a stressful 5-hour class every day, reading a new chapter is my favorite way to procrastinate. XD I hope to see more of Naruto/Sasuke and Kakashi/Iruka in future chapters! *hint* :P
Oh, by the way... it's "Genma," not "Gemna." ( In Japanese there is only one consonant-syllable, and that's the nasalized 'n' ^^; )
Oh, by the way... it's "Genma," not "Gemna." ( In Japanese there is only one consonant-syllable, and that's the nasalized 'n' ^^; )
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're last few chapters have been truly inspired. Neji, Hizashi, then Raidou and Genma--wow! It's all very fantastic. I love it!
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice
make Genma Ibiki's sub too!
make Genma Ibiki's sub too!
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you are a smut goddess. i loved every second of the recent updates :)
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD XD XD You make me love your Sai so much! XD XD XD
What's the pantameter to that cute little rhyme, eh? I can't make the syllables match.
What's the pantameter to that cute little rhyme, eh? I can't make the syllables match.
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chpt 73: That was an interesting way to deal with the Sai and Neji uncle issue. Once I read where you were going with it I was intrigued to see how you'd pull out of it since it was sort of a negative spiral. I feel sorry for Sai but that was a valuable lesson to him, and I think it shows how much he's grown since he's met Neji, he does have a sense of morality and his own internal compass -- it's not all shattered beyond repair!
I admit I'm a little dubious at adding another couple heh, this is a pretty crowded story but it's nice to see you working notes from previous chapters back into the present and trying to make sure everyone gets a happy ending. I hope we are still far from the end - there's so much more story I'd love to read. I'm torn on who to beg for next, I mean I *love* Sai but I am missing Gaara and Shika... maybe Gaara and Shika but don't forget Sai? :) thanks for updating so quickly!
I admit I'm a little dubious at adding another couple heh, this is a pretty crowded story but it's nice to see you working notes from previous chapters back into the present and trying to make sure everyone gets a happy ending. I hope we are still far from the end - there's so much more story I'd love to read. I'm torn on who to beg for next, I mean I *love* Sai but I am missing Gaara and Shika... maybe Gaara and Shika but don't forget Sai? :) thanks for updating so quickly!
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I haven't reviews in a while, but I always keep looking for new chapters. I love seeing the development of the characters as this goes along. Hiashi and Sai, and then Hiashi and Kimimaro, was powerful and bitter and sweet... I find myself going to your site and rereading various chapters in sequence by pairing- and nearly ALL of what you've written is like that. This is a sexy, salacious, drool-worthy, moving romance, for multiple couples, and it illustrates how lives intertwine and affect each other as it goes.
Write whatever you like, you'll do it beautifully, but I would not be averse to seeing more of ANY couple! Hee, I even want to see more of Anko (because she makes me laugh unattractively XD) and Hinata (because she's sweet, and you often need to watch out for the quiet ones), even as background characters in other chapters, without any chapters, scenes, or "scenes" dedicated to them.
I also really enjoy that you have recommendations up at your site. Thank you, very much and always, for sharing your dirty little fantasies with the rest of us gleeful perverts. <3 They give me a lot of very nice dreams.
Write whatever you like, you'll do it beautifully, but I would not be averse to seeing more of ANY couple! Hee, I even want to see more of Anko (because she makes me laugh unattractively XD) and Hinata (because she's sweet, and you often need to watch out for the quiet ones), even as background characters in other chapters, without any chapters, scenes, or "scenes" dedicated to them.
I also really enjoy that you have recommendations up at your site. Thank you, very much and always, for sharing your dirty little fantasies with the rest of us gleeful perverts. <3 They give me a lot of very nice dreams.
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwww!!!!! LOL :Glomps you: *Squee* That was so SwEEt, XD. Zomg I loved this, (I should stop saying that and just let you take it for granted, lol XD) This was a particular stroke of genius on your part. To say I NEVER saw that coming would be more than an understatement. But it's so perfect it seems like divine providence, ne Hestia goddess?
The bit about Hiashi being abused was sadly fitting. And Sai's panicking. LOL, I love that he was more concerned with the ffact that Neji would think he'd cum, than about him finding out he'd fucked his uncle, LOL, well at least visibly more concerned with the former. I also like that Hiashi understood and admitted to enjoying the pain, and that Sai didn't get off scott free for it. Your sense of justice and 'right' has always makes me feel all warm, sometimes I read some of the stories floating about and I find myself amazed at what what people think is acceptable and forgivable. But I never have to worry about that with you, I applaud your values and morals. I also love that Sai had the prescience of mind and the kindness to think of others, to think of both Hiashi and Kimimaro and realise that they would be perfect for each other. And I love that Hiashi went for him immediately, LOL, he didn't even wait on the doctor XD. I really love how you wrote Hiashi, dominant, but unsure and so smitten XD. But Zomg, my Favourite - "Cocksucking was a reward? Oh, god, my poor Kimimaro, and lucky, lucky me." LMAO!! So Kawaii XD. LOL, he really was a joy to watch interact with Kimimaro. And Oh God! Kimimaro blushing - KAWAII!!! LOL, I also have to say something about the ending - "Interesting—Hiashi rolled his eyes at his own understatement. If things got much more interesting, he might just die of a heart attack. God, he needed the doctor. He wanted to live a long, long time." Purr-fect, :huggles you: Thank you sooo much ♥♥♥.
The bit about Hiashi being abused was sadly fitting. And Sai's panicking. LOL, I love that he was more concerned with the ffact that Neji would think he'd cum, than about him finding out he'd fucked his uncle, LOL, well at least visibly more concerned with the former. I also like that Hiashi understood and admitted to enjoying the pain, and that Sai didn't get off scott free for it. Your sense of justice and 'right' has always makes me feel all warm, sometimes I read some of the stories floating about and I find myself amazed at what what people think is acceptable and forgivable. But I never have to worry about that with you, I applaud your values and morals. I also love that Sai had the prescience of mind and the kindness to think of others, to think of both Hiashi and Kimimaro and realise that they would be perfect for each other. And I love that Hiashi went for him immediately, LOL, he didn't even wait on the doctor XD. I really love how you wrote Hiashi, dominant, but unsure and so smitten XD. But Zomg, my Favourite - "Cocksucking was a reward? Oh, god, my poor Kimimaro, and lucky, lucky me." LMAO!! So Kawaii XD. LOL, he really was a joy to watch interact with Kimimaro. And Oh God! Kimimaro blushing - KAWAII!!! LOL, I also have to say something about the ending - "Interesting—Hiashi rolled his eyes at his own understatement. If things got much more interesting, he might just die of a heart attack. God, he needed the doctor. He wanted to live a long, long time." Purr-fect, :huggles you: Thank you sooo much ♥♥♥.