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by Hestia

person Lances
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa... A great chapter! I love the transformed Neji and Sai is outright scary! Awesome!
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, for some reason I didn't think Hiashi would ever come into the story, thus never get raped and tortured. Thank the gods you don't think like me. Hate to see what Neji does when he finds out about this. (And by hate I of course mean love and am dying to see.)
person Mademoiselle_LaCroix
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
....o.ô...Neji is going to freak out if Sai fucks someone else than him.....but anyway I like this chappie..... looking forward to the next one..~hopes it will be Kisa/Ita~....^-^..
person qwerty
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
intense!
person llyoung
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. That was absolutely incredible. I've been wanting a Kankuro/Shino chapter
and you delivered more than I could have ever dreamed of. I'd been dreaming and
wondering when and if figging would be introduced in your story and not only did
we get figging but also sounding in one chapter. Thank you for this perfectly incredible
chapter.

Hope everything goes well for Tommie (the cat). My cat is definently the Master
at my house. He knows how to get what ever he wants with just a look. Please keep
giving us updates on Tommie. Thanks.
person Lances
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, 72 was a rough chapter indeed! But I loved it nonetheless! =) However, I'm still checking the story thrice a day just hoping to find more about Kisame & Itachi, as well as Naruto & Sasuke. I hope you can update soon again.
person Ashcat
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this story quite a bit. I admit, I was wondering when you were going to get to the figging since you'd done a lot of the other common things. I guess now we're on to electroplay, I can just see Kisame having a TENS unit >_> Gaara and Shika are my favorite <3 but I really like Sai and Nenji I hope you have more of both couples coming up :) maybe even Sai just getting to enjoy some cuddling and loving? :) he's been starved for that! Thanks for updating looking forward to more <3
person dragon
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A Kankoru/Shino!!
I worship you!!
They finally discover something for themselves. I was thinking that Kankoru was a little over board, but then I got thinking and I realize that they both are all about the limits, how much they can take, how to take a little bit more... pain, strain of the muscles, the power one exercisers over the other.
I am surprised at my own deduction, I feel that sometimes things... important things just flow by and I don't get them or I overlook them either on purpose or because I just simply don't think much on them.

Well I just wanted to let you know that I will look forward to the next chapter. This time I do wonder who will be next.
Take care.
`dragon
person fangirl
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I NEVER thought I would say this but...Go Sai! Protective and vengeful much? May not agree with the action, but damn is it gonna get the point across.
person llyoung
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the humor at the beginning of the chapter. Especially for some reason the
following - all Kouji could do was think of Neji with a penis inside his ass. He knew gay men had anal sex, but my god, why? Neji was seriously having trouble moving and sitting - Kouji and his thoughts were wonderful. Hopefully Neji gets promoted to a better office with a bathroom soon.
Hiashi got what he deserved and I hope it was horrible and that he doesn't try to
make any trouble for Neji or Sai (doubt he will or Sai will kill him).
Thanks for another chapter.