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Woo-hoo! Figging! I've been kind of curious if you'd write some figging... and you did! Yay!

It was quite hot, the way Shino made Kanky almost lose control... I loved Kanurou's commands - how he wanted Shino to tell him everything. And I really enjoyed the stream-of-consciousness thing you had going while Shino was 'suffering' under Kanky's attentions. Very effective.

Kanky's use of 'yellow' and 'red' made me wonder if there will be a scene where they pick more meaningful safe-words, instead of the standard ones, and I liked how it emphasized that they are just now getting into their Dom/sub relationship.

Great chapter! This is still, even after 70-odd chapters, one of the most unique and enjoyable Naruto fics out there.

ah! I finally got through all these chapters! ((I found this story rather late I suppose)) I started it on y-gallery and then remembered it was here as well, so I came here because there were more chapters. This is absolutely addicting. I love the way you write all of them, even knowing the characters in the series, you make this so vivid and believable. I can now see any of them playing the roles they play here. Please continue, I'll be waiting for updates!

*_* omg. This story....is awesome. True I skipped by some parts but you cant help what you like and don't like. Honestly, You've done awesome research for this. really.

Though I'd LOVE to see some ZabuHaku or KakuHidan. I mean, especially on the KakuHidan front, you hint to so much potential and then don't write it! its disappointing D:

As the love is realized between my 2 fav charaters i fall even more in love with this story. It has HAS!!!! to be the best story that i've ever read. I love it soooo much. I hope it never ends ^_^

cute chapter
when is Sasuke and Naruto going to head over to Kisame's and Itachi's? I really want to see what happens then. The dinner with Iruka and Kakashi, too. I can already see Naruto breaking the wine bottles in that provate room.
update!

LOL, OMG I would have paid money to see that game XD. Oh wait it's under water. Damn LOL. I felt kinda bad for Kanky and Shino, just for a second, but they'll figure it out, that kind of love is not as far away as they think ;D. God I'm all excited about the fitting and piercing session planned with Naruto too. Oh and p.s. Cock torture ROCKS, LOL, only when they stay hard for it and beg for it again XD. Shika and Sasuke have uke sexiness down pat, Oh GOD and ice cubes, that would be like torture in itself but exquisite not quite torture, I'm so jealous, LOL, boy's can do so much more things than girls, LOL that's why Yaoi is so much fun. And ohh, the sweetness at the end. This is so why I adore your stories, LOL (yes still thinking about it) I love that they have everything I could ever want from a story, the angst, the love, the sweetest and hottest moments ever XD. :Huggles you: Thanks so much for the update love.

To discover that you had posted not one but two chapter and not being able to read them was painful! I had visits and I just couldn't simply read!!
I just woke up really early today just to read them in peace.
You are very welcome from the corrections. I honestly thought someone had told you.
On Sasuke and Naruto I was drooling, and I just love how you go from kinky to hilarious in a minute.
I feel kinda sad for Naruto and I honestly I don't think I could explain why.
As for the newest chapter I was just floating on air! It was a beautiful chapter!!
I specially like this : "Public sex was common in the D/s world, but this sort of intimacy that seemed to shimmer between his brother and his pretty coffee-colored slave was something rare and extraordinary."
Oh my! Then the last part of the chapter! So emotional!! I love it!!!
Please keep writing!!
Take care.
`dragon

I forgot to mention that I would really like to see some progress in Kankoru and Shino. I know they enjoy being with each other, and I'm not just talking about sex but company. But I can't get a feeling of where they are going and where they stand.

Once again take care.

`dragon

Ahhh....AFF ate my comments! O__O Rewritten: T__T


OMG....3 extra chappies here to read! What absolute heaven! Thank you thank you thank you! <3333 You Gaara/Shika scene was HAWT! Please...more Kankurou/ Shino! They are another hot HOT couple I'm so in love with. You seriously converted me. Thanks so much for saring! :D

YAY!!! That was marvelous!!! All this love =( makes me so teary eyed =( I love it all so much T_T I love you too Hestia-sama!!! <3<3 Its crazy how many things you got going on in just a matter of a few days C_C I get lost and then i remember, lol its quite fun. I <3 U!!! Hope everything is going well for you and yours =)