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by Hestia

person snowren
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Several comments I want to make about the recent chapters:
1. Sasuke's piercings are hot! Any fan art for what they look like?
2. Correct me if I'm wrong. If Sasuke has collared Naruto, that would make them close to a marriage couple. It's amazing Naruto's still clueless.
3. Sex between Gaara and Shikamaru always looks so painful! But extremely erotic!!!Maybe there are other things that Gaara can put in Shika. Hmmm......

Lastly, just want to say that you are so great. Your updates definitely make my days!
person Wihtls
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naruto & Sasuke's my favorite character in you fic.
Thanks.
person hisoka
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hotter than hot but i hate needles. oh well, keep it up and update real soon ne
person Mademoiselle_LaCroix
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...need moooooreeeee....seriously, I am looking every day for a new chapter...twice...I am so in love with this story...
person Lances
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm looking eagerly forward to Kisame/Itachi! I love you for updating so soon.
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG.... THIS. IS. SO. FUCKING. HOT.
Pairings are great. Rather like Itachi all bothered and loved up. Although sibling sex would be a great scene to see...

Detail is amazing.. Talking about sexual education *cough* This is simple gorgeous!
person Anon
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! the first one was hot the next three! you cant just do that to me girly its dangerous to my health. but i enjoyed it :)
person dragon
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*drools*
Oh God!
I just love those two!
I can't believe that I hadn't thought Naruto collared, I never imagined Sasuke even thinking about it.
When will he tell Naruto though?
I don't know if it was mentioned before but there's two little details that I want to tell you.
One. The first time you mentioned Shikamaru's nipple piercing, you said it was on the left one, then in later chapters you said the opposite. I guess you initial intention was to say the right, for supposedly Gaara is left handed.
And two. When you first mentioned Shino's dog, you said he had lost it a year earlier, then talking to Kankoru you said it was around 3/4 and a half years. I guess I go (too) on the latter on this one.

Well that's all I gotta say for now, well except that I will wait however long for the next chapter.

Take care.

Ps. I really like the idea for a foundation! Makes for more time together in their future.
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O' wise one plz put me out of my misery. I love your stories to the point where i space out at work, thinking about what's gonna happen next and the uber hot things that happened already. I love you!
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god Sasuke has it so bad! Lol just wanted to let you know lots of your art links don't work, the ones through LJ don't allow access and the yaoigallery ones are blank. DA are okay though. Favourite pairing?? Most def NaruSasu but GaaraShika is damn close. I'm loving all the pairings though. Especiall how usualy they'd all be ukes or opposite. Iruka as one hella mean dom. Can see it O_O Loved seeing the safe word in action! Naruto is the sweetest! And stopping it right there!! My heart totally squee-d! I mean i'm reading this mostly for the hottness and well getting off but the romance totally touches the inner sap in me too.