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by Hestia

schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It is so hard to pick a fave chapter from 31 & 32!
Sasuke bursting in and freaking out has got to be one of the best moments ever!! An outright brawl... OMG! Best!!! And then the next chapter with Gaara just going on and listing all those things.. OMG If anyone ever said stuff like that about me... I'd marry him on the spot! Your WAFF rocks!! This fic has got to be one of the best things on this whole website!!
person Kerrisa
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! Naruto found his friend =) Lol funny, i've mostly heard the name 'ice princess/prince' to describe Sasuke, but it works for Haku for coompletely different reason =D Shweeeeee! *spins* marvelous update, update soon, yeah? =D
person llyoung
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto. What a terrible punishment to have a whole new wardrobe bought for him. Only Naruto would consider that punishment. That was so funny. I'm still laughing.
Loved Naruto's line about the 3 wisemen too - that was great. Not sure poor Baki actually got anything from his interview but then if Itachi wants Naruto and Sasuke to be able to be at the club then I don't think Baki could do anything about it. (Forgot to mention that the sex was really hot too - I really loved the humor in this chapter).
Thanks for the quick update. Your story really made my day.
person Allys
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, XD, Naruto's so stupid :GLOMPS YOU:!! I love that he thinks Sasuke buying him clothes is punishment XD. That was HOTT and LOL, I guess Baki was mollified by the level of commitment that Sasuke sowed with the necklace. God I hopw someone tells Naruto eventually XD. Silly, clueless, beautiful boy!!! Thank you so much for the update love. And zomg, Sasuke getting to Dom and the rimming XD. Hmmn, so Baki's going to report the collaring XD, God now I'm really anxious for the next chappie XD. Have I told you how much I adore you lately?? God “You want a tossed salad for lunch, boy?” XD. And oh God I can't wait for Sasuke to be healed enough to fuck Naruto either XD. LOL I just realised, chapter 69 XD. hmmmnnn, yumm. LOL Congratulations!!!! Loves on you ♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
“You want a tossed salad for lunch, boy? Oh Baby! That’s what I like! I found myself saying, “yes, please!” These last 2-3 chapters with Naruto/Sasuke/Naruto were a hoot!

Real highlights: Sasuke’s Prince Albert session – we know how much Naruto wanted one for Sasuke, but I liked the way you wrote Sasuke’s feelings of what it meant to him and how amazed he was that Naruto loved someone that was “unloveable” (I really wanted to cry at that). Ice-Princess Haku – that was full of emotion, both Naruto’s happiness that Haku was alive, but also the possible insecure reaction that Sasuke would have if he doubted Naruto’s feelings (once again, love and trust issues). And I still love that switching between Naruto and Sasuke!

Cookie~
person llyoung
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Would love it if someone did a drawing of Sasuke's piercings. Like the idea of the foundation and Naruto's connection with Haku - hopefully Zabuza will not react to badly to Haku talking to Naruto (and if he does then Haku should leave him). Thanks for another chapter.
person fangirl
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story rocks. I can't get enough of it and it looks like you've got enough plot going to continue for a few hundred more chapters if you keep all the other arcs with the other pairings going. Though I have to admit that I mostly just gloss over the pairings that aren't Naruto and Sasuke. Please keep those updates coming cause this is a truly nifty story.
person Allys
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD Another update :loves you: And more Naruto and Sasuke :complete fangirl squeal: More cock piercings, yum! So beautifful. I love the idea of the black suit!! And the foundation, so sweet. Hooray maybe Naruto will finally be told what it is he's got around his neck XD. Or maybe he'll have to figure it out for himself after Itachi and Kisame's eyes bug right of their heads XD. I love how Naruto and Haku knew each other way back when. I'm really surprised and very proud of Sasuke for not wigging out about Naruto and Haku's relationship. It means he's growing more accustomed and secure, good. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!! Meetings with Itachi and Kisame, or possibly just hot elevator smex XD. Evil little cliffy there :hugs: I also want to see what Baki has up his sleeve and then the dinner with Kakashi and iruka XD. :Sighs: So much to look forward to XD. Thank you sooo much for the update love. I've been missing you.
person hisoka
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
is he saying he loves him less?ive read that part over about six times and i still dont get what it means,could you explain it to me please im a bit slow.
updates?
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As delightful as usual! You truly are the master of the naruto fanfics. Love you!