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by Hestia

person dragon
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! You are back!!
*Cries in happiness*
I missed you and your wonderful fic!!
I was torture I tell ya. But life gets in the way and we can't do much but to follow.
For now I'm really happy, because now we have some kind of ground to Naruto and Sasuke's feelings.
At first the last two of Sasuke's line confused me, but them I read them without the narrative and I was like, "Oh? Oh... OH!! Right!" They love each other! Will it be only a month for them? I really hope not!!
I wish to ask for a Kankoru/Shino again, if not for the collar for Shikamaru, which he doesn't know what it looks like right?? That's what impression gave me, Gaara didn't say anything. As far as I know.

Well better leave for now so I don't ramble anymore.
Please do keep writing!
I'm a slave to your fic!
Take care.
`dragon
person Anon
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so your post pretty much made my day i love it! ive never been so turned on by a decription of a piercing!!!! amazing. i love this and you
person Kerrisa
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a sentimental ending =( So sweet and just.. 'aweeeee' =( I loved it, love is a beautiful thing. I hope your kitty gets better <_> We had to remove a mass from my kitty's abdomen a few months ago, her fur is still growing back in from where she was shaved =] Hope all is well for you and yours =)
person Lances
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the hottest story I've ever read in my life! I had to review (although I usually don't) just to thank you for giving us Sasuke in red velvet ribbons. So damnably, excruciatingly hot. Thank you.
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i offer you good juju for your cat, mine is on his last legs now too, and it makes me sad. i hope your does well *luffs*

and the chapter, well, the long awaited piercing was pretty much perfect, it made me cry...

thank you 0.0
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. Sasuke is in love! Oh, its too good to be true.

I hope your kitty is okay.
person Hen
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Best wishes for your cat! He should be fine. My cat had a mass in his stomach and everything turned out just fine with him, and he was 19 years old at the time! Vets today are amazing. The story rocks!
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh.. OMG.
Amazing, dying.
XD
But also, I can't WAIT for the conversation at the restaurant!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE??? XD
I wonder what Yondaime would think of his 'son' now. ;D
^.^
person Travellyr
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa.

....o.o That.. just reading that was intense.
person Anon
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG dear, that was AMAZING. that made my week! oh wow. i was just coming back to reread some other chapters and saw you updated. and i was just blown away. i mean at first it was just sexy, but then it got so deep and i teared up at the end. that was such a beautiful scene between naruto and sasuke. i just adored that. i could actually feel the love. oh it was so good. the whole piercing bit was interesting, too. oh i'm so happy for sasuke now that he feels like it's safe to love and be loved. i really hope they don't hurt each other a whole lot more. i think they have the potential for a really loving relationship that can last. or i'm biased. but oh wow... just... the kisses alone and when naruto buried his face into sasuke's neck and asked if sasuke loved him....... i can't take it... i feel emotional ;_;