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Awe. That was so sweat. Which is kind of funny to say after all the corpings and piercings but there you have it. :D Nice work. Keep it up, I love reading this and clearly so do a lot of other people. :D

EH!?!?! How could you just leave me hanging? I love this story. It helps me form better ideas for my new story *Crys* Its not fair. *Sniffs*

(There not the same ideas ether by the way sorry for worrying you about that)

*Sigh* oh well I'll find another story you got my attintion though and you got to keep updatting to keep it. Its sad really but with my multiple personalatys and my A.D.D (attintion disorder or somthing like that) plus my overly hiper additude AND peranoince(sp?) its hard to focus on anything mor then a few secs or mins at a time.

I hope your cat'll be okay hun. It's a sad thing to lose a pet.

Now, onto the story! I loved the update. It's nice to see Sasuke finally starting to accept what Naruto feels for him as the truth. I just wish he'd hurry up and acknowledge what he feels for Naruto. It'd make him a helluva lot happier I think. I can't wait to see what happens when the four have dinner together. Sounds promising.

Yay! Sasuke finally admitted his love and his beanpole is pierced. All is right with him and his master. For now anyways. I wonder if Itachi will ever tell Sasuke what happened the night his parents beat him? (btw, you had a typo about halfway through this chapter. In the line 'For now Naruto’s cock was sliding in and out of the back of Naruto’s throat, like Sasuke had been deep-throating dicks for years, not days.')


Sorry to hear about your cat. I send you both my best wishes.

Please, please, please send up an update!! ^^ I need more!!!!! hahaha... they story is awesome! You have done such a great job! Please continue it!

OMG....you don't know how much I love you right now!! Ever since I discovered this fic, I wanted to scream with joy. It's so rare to find a super long fic filled with the characters and pairings you love. *worships* I enjoyed and drooled on every single chapter and I wish it will never end! You have a huge talent in writing, especially D/s. SO HAWT! Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful and wonderful fic. I seriously can't wait to read more from you. My fav pairing that got me so hot and bothered was Kankurou/Shino and Gaara/Shikamaru, and Kisame/Itachi, but NaruSasu will always be on the top of my list. You are considered one of my very favorite fic writer out there. There's no other words to describe how much I love this fic. Thank you once again!!

Gwyllion

when are neji and sai going to appear?
i love so much that pairing! ^^

F**k.
I got to this chapter, and was all like "Yay!'
And then I noticed there was only one more chapter posted.
And it made me sad.
T.T
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This is so amazing I can't even think up enough curse words for it. XD

Alright.. coret peircing.. AAAH.
The images in my brain are SOOO SEXY!!!!!
<3

I was unable to come and check for updates like I previously was able to BUT this just let me have a whole bunch of chapters to read all at once. :D (I was using your chapters as incentive? I read them all in one sitting. :D)

And what awesome chapters they all are! Eeee!!! ^_^

First! Thank you for the links you use and reference. More learning material yay! :D And yay about the book series you are planning out! Good luck with that! It sounds like it will be an amazing read! :D :D :D

...I-I don't know where to start. D: I'll try pairing-wise?

Iruka and Kakashi. Oh My God. I was in SHOCK when Iruka had his breakdown at Uchiha's. When they had gone to Manda's I was at a loss for wrods but Iruka's despair shook me. D: I started chanting 'no Iruka you blind idiot!' at the screen which really wouldn't have done anything but yes. But then Kakashi saved the day and DAMN I know he's a hot man but BLOODY HELL does he know how to STRETCH. Very nice indead. Iruka is one lucky lucky man. And the proposal! YAY! :D :D :D I love how you showed that through adversity they were able to pull through and become an even closer couple! I saw this piece of IruKaka fanart where Kakashi was tied up in rope Japanese bondage style and in Iruka's lap. I thought of you. :D And if I find the source I'll point you to it. :D Have you ever considered giving Iruka a piercing? (I have an extremely strong piercing fetish thing. They are just wicked accents on a person's body. But I digress.)

Naruto and Sasuke. They both are so made for each other. Sasuke just needs to realize that deep down inside. Why won't you let Naruto make love to you silly? :D But wow. I Love the mild conflict between the two over dominance. SO IC. AWESOME. I love how Naruto wants to shave Sasuke and show him off. The Prince Albert piercing date was moved up! ROCK. And Naruto contemplating extra piercings on Sasuke (lorum and frenulum wow SO HOT! please ma'am may I have some more?)? I squealed, so hard. :D LOVE LOVE LOVE. Yay they have a month contract! :D Naruto will be able to convince Sasuke to stay for much more. ^_^ I can't wait for the piercing and whatever additions Naruto will add. Sasuke will look AMAZING dripping in diamonds and sapphire and other things. :D

But damn, these four got banned. Will this be permanent? Just curious. ^_^ And more news on Naruto's Dad! Why was Kakashi hiding the truth? ::jumps up in down in chair in anticipation::

Gaara and Shikamaru. I will admit. This is my absolutely favorite pairing, even though everyone else is 0.05 below them and all TIED. :D I SIMPLY ADORE the way they fit so PERFECTLY TOGETHER. I never considered them as a paring but, like I said before, you converted me. ::bows:: They are just so beautiful together. I love how Gaara is so protective and possessive and how he wants his slave to have the best and Shika deserves all this and eee!! I just end up incoherent in my fangirlines over them. Gaara has a tattoo!! Yay! Will you be giving Shika one? maybe a small one around him belly button? ::shrugs:: Maybe a corset piercing for him? I like where your idea of piercing his cock. HEH. Anything you plan will be amazing I know it. :D (And they should so both cosplay. :D)

Kankuro and Shino. *_* Wow. Just. Wow. I just LOVE this pairing, just like I LOVE all the others. How in the world do you do this? You have TALENT. :D :D :D I have to say, I didn't know I had a thing for urethral play until you wrote about it there. That scene was so bloody HOT and AMAZING. So Awesome. I do want to see how they play out. :D Looking forward to the pool game and the family dinner!

Kisame and Itachi. GUH. I would just read their chapters in wonder. I love Itachi as a sub. He is in him element! And Kisame can finally show all the love and dominance he has for Itachi. :D Their scenes are so INTENSE! Heh, and Itachi got pierced! AMESOMENESS. :D :D :D And oh dear Kisame, what will you do about this new kink? :O

Ibiki and Raidou. Did I forget to mention that scars are also a bit of a weak point for me on guys? Body modifications in general! :O But oh my wow like always you have converted me to another pairing! Ibiki is perfect to help Raidou get past his previous trauma (stupid past ex-boyfriedn jerk type person grr) And they are just so HOT together. And the slight hint of Genma joining in? BLOODY HELL that would be BLISTERING. :D

I was curious about whether you were going to write about Sasori and Deidara? And about Zabuza and Haku. And looking forward to more chapters with Neji and Sai. :D :D :D

I just can't stop smiling after reading these chapters. They were all AMAZING AND THEN SOME. HEARTS FOR YOU. Good luck with the next chapters and again with your other works! :D :D :D