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by Hestia

person snowren
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow~
I never thought that Shikamaru can be that horny!
But it's a good thing for us readers~

More Naruto&Sasuke to come? They are my favourite pair.
Are they moving in together? Please make that happen!
person llyoung
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just wondering. Since Gaara's grandparents insist on believing Deidara is a woman, I wonder how often they pressure Sasori and Deidara to have children :)
Sorry, that was just a stupid little thing that keep running thru my head.
Thanks again for the double dose of my favorite couple and for including Kankuro and Shino. Hope to see these 4 again soon and I also am looking forward to the next Ibiki and Raidou.
person cynaga
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shika and Gaara are the BEST~!
person llyoung
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I got another chapter with Gaara and Shika (my favorites) and it included Kankuro and Shino (who are now my second favorite couple in your story). I just love Gaara and Shika together and the way they talk and interact with each other. Really enjoyed the beginning with Gaara concerned about Shika. Can hardly wait to read more of these four characters. Thank so much for writing this wonderful story.
person Kerrisa
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I adore Hestia-sama's work. I want to read those books you said you used for research! Buuuuut i haven't the foggiest idea where i'd find them, so i think i'll just stick with Hestia-sama's yaoi bdsm genius ^__^ Thanks for this marvelous work of fiction! =D
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant!!!!!!!!! Gaara/Shika pairing is my fav of the story ^_^ Thanks for giving me a double helping
person dragon
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the beginning. A lot!
Wow!
I just didn't quite get the jealousy part when Gaara was looking at Shino.
I'm amazed at Shikamaru, he is soo wanton!
Btw! I also like how, even though it was unintentionally, Shikamaru gave Gaara confidence to be the Master that we know he is.

More please.
~dragon
person Allys
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, I've already checked out all your oneshots, Damn!! XD. The only typo I saw was Zabuka, which made me smile, cause that's our local word for Avocado :D. LOL, Zabuza as a soft and creamy fruit is hilarious XD. Another wonderful chapter, you know how I love your GaaShikaGaa XD, Damn there's the porn music going off in my head again O.o, LOL. And after care has always been one of my favourite things, although Naruto is still my favourite adminster-er of it XD. LOL, sibling rivalry/jealousy, parental absentia and delusional grandparents :D, sounds like a normal family to me XD.
OMG this is so my favourite part:
“Your cock says lying,” said Gaara.

“It’s saying I love you.”

“Nope,” said Gaara leaning over and touching the tip with one finger, “it says I want be abused, I want to be whored, I want to Master to use me in ways that terrify me.”

Why am I picturing Gaara making Shika's little opening slit talk like a puppet, XD. LOL, Oh yeah, that would be because one of my craziest friend telling me the story of when she made her boyfriend's cock sing "Build me up, Buttercup". LMAO!! She couldn't get over how the little slit looked like a little mouth XD. You know I had to try it, ;) and I completely agree XD.

And Zomg! Shika begging all through the chapter was wonderful and heartwarming! Not to mention hott as all hell ;). I love the transformation that took over Gaara, how could he possibly get any sexier, but then he DID! LOL, and "The Red Whip" is perfect in all it's connotations. It can so be used to describe both his skills and his body, :drools at the thought of naked and Smexy Gaara: I would pay money to see that game XD. LOL, a yaoi fangirls voyeuristic dream!

Thank you so much for the update my Goddess. I feel the need to restate, how it thrills me that this story is still going strong!
person phoenixfirekitsune
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I absolutely love how Gaara's and Shikamaru's relationship is portrayed. Updaate soon please!
person Shosruo
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!
Thank you for the update!!!
Thank you for the story!!
Thank you giving us the books that you read.
I quickly went online and ordered all three books and I got them on Friday.
Just to let you know I am finished with the first two books and I am just in the middle of the third one!!!
They are wonderful inspiration!
I am happy that you let us know about them.
Thank you again!!!