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by Hestia

person S_R
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FABULOUS story! I can't wait until it continues. I love all the couples mentioned, well, maybe besides Iruka/Kakashi, just seems a bit weird but it's good anyway. It's so hot. I can't believe it's only been, like, 4 days of story. I've read through the story twice now and I've seen a number of typos on the way. If you want me to alert them to you then let me know, then I'll read it again and take note. Hope you update soon. Oh, and I loved Depravity in the Gravi section too, shame the author stopped.
person dragon
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You don't know how much torture this is!!
To wait for each new chapter!!
But I have to say that, they are sooo worth it! *tear*
I love it!
Gaara/Shika!! I just gotta love those two in this fic!
I can't wait for the collar to arrive and the cosplay and maybe a collar or something for Gaara.
Please don't stop writing!!

Great work so far!
TC!
~dragon
person Allys
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really do enjoy how you write Gaara and Shika. How they seem so in love and so content. The drama is well contained in the moment and doesn't carry over into their private time. They're just happy to be together. That really is the dream, that gold standard, to be represented by a beautiful gold doubloon. Stolen moments of absolute perfection. True beauty :).
person Shinoga
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Score I love it when there is a chapter about Gaara and Shika. I don't know why but you writing them makes them seem like a great couple not to mention how hot their scenes are. Can't wait to see what the next chapter brings.
person llyoung
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was such a wonderful chapter to wake up to this morning. Not only was it my favorite couple (Gaara and Shika) it was also a very long detailed chapter. Gaara is definently a Master no matter how much he actually loves Shika. The interactions between the two are beautiful. I love Shika's temporary collar and the permanent one that he is going to be getting is very appropriate. Gaara spending his motorcycle money on it was also very sweet. I hope that we get to read a Kankuro/Shino chapter soon (and that it includes Gaara/Shika's visit). Thanks for another wonderful chapter and now I need to go read it again (and again and again and again etc).
person phoenixfirekitsune
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'd never thought of Gaara and Shikamaru being a pair before this story, but you make it work so well. This was a good chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next.
person Pho
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what a pretty chapter. The romance between Shika and Gaara is so sweet, and yet the sex is still hard and hot. You're just awesome.
person Kimikiumi
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Gawd! ** Kisame and Itachi are just made for each other!! Update soon!! I can't wait for the next part with Shika and Gaara!! ** I completely am in love with you!
person JaeFire
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOooOoOOoOOOH, I can't wait until the next chapter of Gaara/Shika!!! ::jumps up and down excitedly, falls, and gurgles with intense fic-withdrawal::
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Delicious as usual! Excellent excellent excellent job ^_^