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I just had to write and tell you that...I LOVE YOU!! You're writing just sucked me right in. I love all the different character pairs and how they interact with one another. I'm loving the NaruSasu/SasuNaru, but am totally loving the GaarShika too! There is just something about the whole BDSM theme that is so hot! This is only my second story based on such a theme (first being ffpanda's Depravity [Gravitation], unfinished) and I am just completely enamored with the whole story!! I can't wait to see what kinking things Gaara is going to do to Shika and how far they'll push each others limits (I'd like to see Shika fuck Gaara again though, onegaishimasu!)I also wonder about what other toys Kankurou has stashed away. I can't wait for Sasuke's piercing too, I'd also like to vote for the library scene too!! Oooh, I just can't wait to keep reading about all the characters!! I just can't stop reading and re-reading all you've written! I love you!! Thanks for all your hard work and dedication!

OMG! I absolutely LOVE this story. I've been reading this story for a while, but never got the chance to review because someone would always pull me away from my computer or have to beta a story for which I am SO SORRY! AH! I can't believe that I haven't had the chance to review until now! *cries in the corner* I'm such a terrible person. My reviews will hopefully be more frequent now that I finally have the chance to actually write them down because this has got to be one of my favorite stories of all time. *sighs* I worship this story. I truly do. Once again I am SO SORRY for not writing a review before! T_T

Yay, I've caught up. And at the rate you update I was worried I would never be able to catch up, not that that's a bad thing! I could continue to read this forever. How have you not ran out of ideas yet? And the sound. Oh, I love sound chapter, but I don't think I've seen anybody but hieisfiredemon write anything about it though. There should be more! Oh maybe Kank can teach Gaara how to do it to Shika. I love Gaara with just about anybody. Mmmmm. Metal inside cocks.

Okay, well enough obsessing about it. You're amazing, pure and simple. I bow to your knowledge of D/s and your ability to continually come up with inventive scenes, and definitely your ability to juggle all the different pairings. You deserve a comment for every chapter, but I hope this one long review will make up for it, or I'll be at the computer all night long typing my praise! Oh yeah, and can't wait for Sasuke to get his beanpole pierced!

Hello love, wow, I missed a lot. Life has become complicated, which really only means that I have a lot of work to do :). It was strange getting back into this after so long away, everything seemed so much. The irukaka was lovely, they're an adorable couple, and it's nice that their relationship isn't starting up but evolving, like Kisame and Itachi. Thank you so much for the NaruSasu chappies. I missed them so much. They seem to be getting along a lot better. It was a little strange really, LOL, all through the first two chapts I kept waiting for the other shoe to drop, but after the third one I think that both pairs of shoes must have been tossed out the whatever story window of Sasuke's condo. Shoe? What shoe? Who needs shoes? XD. I also liked the issue with the chain/necklace, Naruto has no idea does he? LOL if I remember correctly he wasn't really impressed with it at first. I can't wait to see his reaction when he finds out what it is and how much it's worth XD. But OMG woman, chapter 57, lady love, lady love. Suge na. That was fan-fucking-tastic. Sasuke. Sasuke baby, I doubted you, but I take it back. I take it all back. He is regal isn't he, such a commandingly, princely boy. Where Naruto is raw and rough, Sasuke is refined and graceful, but both beautiful and both deadly. Oh my, oh my. Then there were the lines I loved, 2 in particular that I picked out - "If I were some wacko in a Greek play, I’d blind myself since nothing, nothing could ever please my eyes so much. " LOL, that entire little conversation was wonderful. All the conversations in this chapter were. They were in fine form that morning XD. And then - "Sasuke slid into Naruto hard and deep, like this ass was his by right." I adore that. Like this ass was his by right. So true, so true. And omg, Sasuke squeezing out Naruto's cum over top of him O.O, be still my slutty little heart, LOL. The funny thing is I'm usually a germ-a-phobe, like in the last chapter, I was so with Sasuke about not wanting that anywhere near his mouth, but I'll be damned if it wasn't as hot as all hell when he did it in the bed. I was a little disappointed at first that they couldn't do the vanilla thing, but then you completely made it up in 57. That's proper vanilla - had in small increments and sandwiched between rocky road and triple chocolate fudge delight with mint chocolate chips, LOL now i want ice-cream. I could really go for some tiramisu gelato XD, whoever decided that I could have cake in my ice-cream and on a cone, deserves a medal, the Italians have the right idea XD. I see you're pushing up your timetable. Is there any particular reason for that? Not that I mind seeing the piercing sooner XD, I'm just curious. I completely adore you and I'm so glad you're back, I was missing you terribly and about to go into severe bouts of withdrawal, but miraculously I've been saved XD. I guess you've gotten through everything you needed to do, I'm glad. Thank you ever so much for the update love, I'm going to scurry off now, my bed is calling. Hugles, Allys.

I know should never right this but. That was so cute! you just want to run up and hug them. I am glad everything is back to normal for them, they have one of the best D/s relationships in the whole story.
-HallowsEve

p.s I think kakashi likes punishment to much.: )

Iruka and Kakashi are beautiful together. I wondered how you would continue with them and get them back to the master/slave relationship and you did a wonderful job. I love Iruka and Kakashi - they are my second favorite in the story (behind Gaara and Shika and hopefully we will see more of them soon). Thanks for another chapter.

I love the latest NaruSasu/SasuNaru. With Chapter 57, I can't help but think that Sasuke only being a slave and Naruto his Master would be limiting for them, since they're both well suited to, enjoy, and feel fulfilled by both roles. It seems that emotionally they would both lose something, a piece of themselves, if they stuck with one of them a slave and the other a Master permanently. I'm hoping that when Gaara and Shika come for their collars Sasuke and Naruto learn something from them, and take up that wonderful idea about the Master also wearing his slave's collar, to show that he not only possesses but is possessed. Whatever arrangement that they do decide on though, I hope Naruto and Sasuke can find peace within it, because neither seem the type to concede to what they wouldn't be happy living with permanently, and with Chapter 57 you've shown that Sasuke really can be a dom, and that maybe he, at least a small part of the time, needs that.

please put up thatchapter aboutt the cock peircing soon. thisstory is in my head all the time...even during my exams which makes it hard to concentrate....please please update. i love the way you write naruto sasuke and kakashi iruka so please continue and update that chapter.,....me on my knees!! i've been wiating since chap 54.....wow....this is better than anything i've read and even better than watching thw yaoi anime sensitive pronograph. i can't even read normal sex scenes without reading this story anymore....

I love it when you update! This is the one of the most unusual AU NaruSasuNaru story I think I've ever read, and I love it so much! Yeah author!

Ah so that's what it is called....sounding. I had read about the devices used on a webpage that I linked to from ffpanda's story but I didn't know what the name for it was called. I did wonder (and hope) that you would include it in the story but for some reason my fantasy had Gaara and Shika in it. I also seem to have fantasies involving Gaara/Shika and figging (which I also didn't know what that was until ffpanda's story). I seem to be getting quite an education from both her story and yours. Thank you.