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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to tell you in the previous review how much I enjoyed the Kankuro/Shino chapter. It was very intense and even thought I over use the word it was very hot. As always your imagination and writing ability remains outstanding. I find myself uninterested in reading sex scenes that don't have some BDSM, D/s or at the very least some "toys" in them (you have really spoiled me and I like it). Thanks again for writing.
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Clapping for Kanky and Shino!
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm at a loss. This story is just...gah!...can't even find the words for it. I could kick myself for not reviewing earlier. I think I started reading it when it was on chapter 30 something. No excuses, none at all.
I think my favorite part of the whole thing is how you write in the emotions that come with each action. How, even when they're being punished, they're feeling love or pleasure or some other thing along with it. I can finally understand the bdsm stuff. I've been interested in it for a while but was much to sheltered/scared to go out and find more about it. You've all of a sudden become my teacher and window into that world.
But back to your glorious story.
I LOVE Kisame. Period. If Itachi hadn't snatched him up I would have. I don't know what made you have him to be a black man but I could kiss the muse that did. It's a stroke of genius.
And speaking of genius....Shikamaru and Gaara. Holy shit. Gaara's backyard is fucking awesome! Both of their personalities are so cohesive to the other. I'm alternately sighing and fanning myself.
Lee and Gai made me laugh my ass off.
Neji and Sai are a match made in heaven. The way they met was priceless. I mean, of course, the first time they were scening together and Sai wrote that he wanted to rape him. Kinda felt bad for Neji but it was good for the long run.
Kankuro and Shino. Dear Lord, I'm in love. The latest developments of these two are pure gold. I'm glad Kankuro was able to help Shino and I'm glad Shino is able to like/love Kankuro despite him not being totally handsome.
Iruka and Kakashi have issues. But they're good issues. You go so in depth with Kakashi's character that it's good to see you picking up on Iruka's now. I was so shocked when Iruka took Kakashi to Manda's for his punishment that my jaw dropped. Orochimaru creeped me out muchly btw. That was a good way of showing just how much Kakashi letting Sasuke suck him pissed off his master. The scene back at the club where Iruka was crying and Kakashi was oblivious under the table nearly had ME in tears. I'm ecstatic that things are better with them now.
Ibiki and Kotetsu. I'm drowning in the overpowering love and hotness of that relationship. It fuels my inner romantic in so many ways.
Naruto and Sasuke. HOLYSHITOMFGKILLMENOW! Can I bow at your feet now oh Mistress? Words fail me. They're just so them. I don't know how you do it. Everything they do is different then what they've done in the past. The way they go back and forth between dom and sub, love and hate, is inspiring. It gives a depth to their relationship that most authors don't go into. I sit and read in wonder, wondering what they're going to go through next. Will something scare Sasuke off for good? Will Naruto get sick of Sasuke's flip flopping? Is Itachi going to be a problem for the love/lust birds? *sigh* Marvelous.
Kisame and Itachi. If you change anything about them I will hunt you down and whip you with a wet noodle! *glare* Itachi is perfect for Kisame and Kisame is perfect for Itachi. That you didn't have Itachi immediately fall over at the chance to be Kisame's sub gave you a dozen brownie points in my book. Having him think it through and then come to the realization that he really and truly loved him took some damn good writing. When he opened up that safe and saw all the tapes and the necklace I gasped and got teary eyed. When Kisame opened the door and picked Itachi up while singing to him, I really did start crying.
Hestia-sensei, for you really are my teacher now, I'm truly enjoying this story. You've done a wonderful job in the writing of it and by writing I mean the grammar and technicalities as well as the content. It does my English major heart good. I think this is the longest review I've ever written but you're well worth it.
Allys too I want to thank for being an excellent beta and artist.
*smooch* Luv ya both!
Continue to teach me sensei and I'll be forever grateful.
I think my favorite part of the whole thing is how you write in the emotions that come with each action. How, even when they're being punished, they're feeling love or pleasure or some other thing along with it. I can finally understand the bdsm stuff. I've been interested in it for a while but was much to sheltered/scared to go out and find more about it. You've all of a sudden become my teacher and window into that world.
But back to your glorious story.
I LOVE Kisame. Period. If Itachi hadn't snatched him up I would have. I don't know what made you have him to be a black man but I could kiss the muse that did. It's a stroke of genius.
And speaking of genius....Shikamaru and Gaara. Holy shit. Gaara's backyard is fucking awesome! Both of their personalities are so cohesive to the other. I'm alternately sighing and fanning myself.
Lee and Gai made me laugh my ass off.
Neji and Sai are a match made in heaven. The way they met was priceless. I mean, of course, the first time they were scening together and Sai wrote that he wanted to rape him. Kinda felt bad for Neji but it was good for the long run.
Kankuro and Shino. Dear Lord, I'm in love. The latest developments of these two are pure gold. I'm glad Kankuro was able to help Shino and I'm glad Shino is able to like/love Kankuro despite him not being totally handsome.
Iruka and Kakashi have issues. But they're good issues. You go so in depth with Kakashi's character that it's good to see you picking up on Iruka's now. I was so shocked when Iruka took Kakashi to Manda's for his punishment that my jaw dropped. Orochimaru creeped me out muchly btw. That was a good way of showing just how much Kakashi letting Sasuke suck him pissed off his master. The scene back at the club where Iruka was crying and Kakashi was oblivious under the table nearly had ME in tears. I'm ecstatic that things are better with them now.
Ibiki and Kotetsu. I'm drowning in the overpowering love and hotness of that relationship. It fuels my inner romantic in so many ways.
Naruto and Sasuke. HOLYSHITOMFGKILLMENOW! Can I bow at your feet now oh Mistress? Words fail me. They're just so them. I don't know how you do it. Everything they do is different then what they've done in the past. The way they go back and forth between dom and sub, love and hate, is inspiring. It gives a depth to their relationship that most authors don't go into. I sit and read in wonder, wondering what they're going to go through next. Will something scare Sasuke off for good? Will Naruto get sick of Sasuke's flip flopping? Is Itachi going to be a problem for the love/lust birds? *sigh* Marvelous.
Kisame and Itachi. If you change anything about them I will hunt you down and whip you with a wet noodle! *glare* Itachi is perfect for Kisame and Kisame is perfect for Itachi. That you didn't have Itachi immediately fall over at the chance to be Kisame's sub gave you a dozen brownie points in my book. Having him think it through and then come to the realization that he really and truly loved him took some damn good writing. When he opened up that safe and saw all the tapes and the necklace I gasped and got teary eyed. When Kisame opened the door and picked Itachi up while singing to him, I really did start crying.
Hestia-sensei, for you really are my teacher now, I'm truly enjoying this story. You've done a wonderful job in the writing of it and by writing I mean the grammar and technicalities as well as the content. It does my English major heart good. I think this is the longest review I've ever written but you're well worth it.
Allys too I want to thank for being an excellent beta and artist.
*smooch* Luv ya both!
Continue to teach me sensei and I'll be forever grateful.
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I agree Mistress. Simply indescribable.
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*bows down* I'm not worthy.. Thank you for another chapter, so amazing and GOD now i can't wait (really can't) till you post the next chapter when Naruto pierces Sasuke's cock.. omg.. the mental image *faints*, i'll build you a shrine.. no wait.. a temple? didn't Hestia have a temple already? this one will be even better, yes it will me marked, TEMPLE OF HESTIA, GODDESS OF FANFICTION.
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another one!!
I've been missing this fic!
I loves it soo much!
Please do continue!!
I've been missing this fic!
I loves it soo much!
Please do continue!!
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke and Naruto are very sweet (and hot) together. Thanks for another amazing chapter.
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
Impressive really sexy beginning and such a tender ending (of the chapter!).
Can we have a little more Kankoru/Shino?\
Please!!
Impressive really sexy beginning and such a tender ending (of the chapter!).
Can we have a little more Kankoru/Shino?\
Please!!
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh goodness, the dark, Dom side of Sasuke emerged. I loved it! Please continue again soon!
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well... ummm *wiggles in sit* That was the fucking best post i have read (58) i use to think sasuke couldn't
dom to save his life. Know i would roll over and beg. Thanks for the chapter was worried that you have not been posting but like most you must have a life can't wait to see what will happen.Also can't wait to see how Itachi gets though his punishment.
-HallowsEve
dom to save his life. Know i would roll over and beg. Thanks for the chapter was worried that you have not been posting but like most you must have a life can't wait to see what will happen.Also can't wait to see how Itachi gets though his punishment.
-HallowsEve