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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHOAZ omg i can't find the words to describe how much i love your story.. but i have to admit the only downside of it is the fact there's less and less of Naruto & Sasuke ><"!!! But keep up the good work =]*gives cookies* <----- i made it for you =]
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I'm dying from suspense!
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Forgot to mention earlier but I did go visit your blog on 5/30 and enjoyed the preview for chapter 55. Thanks.
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOw long time no see stuck w/ out computer and reviewing on sidekick (that isn't mine). man ibiki hads some crazy inuendo and i never thought blowing glasswas erotic.... that changed.
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May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading your story for awhile and i must say i do love it to bits.
I have been working in the BDSM industry for nearly 1 year as a Mistress, I am only 20 years old which does not work in my favor. I came across your story when i was about to say "i give up". I started reading and laughing at what happens to your charters and thought to myself if someone can write it why can't i do it. Went back to work and showed them when i could do. I would just like to thank you for writing it helped my get back up and do my job.
I must say that you writing is very intense and brutal but and the same time soft and gentle. I like what you cover of the BDSM scene and gives people i look in the window not a lot of people will ever see.
thank you for writing this for all the people that wish they could or want to know a little about such things.
-Mistress Tallulah
p.s another author on AFF is Scribe this is a very good bdsm m/m story http://original.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=249.
I have been working in the BDSM industry for nearly 1 year as a Mistress, I am only 20 years old which does not work in my favor. I came across your story when i was about to say "i give up". I started reading and laughing at what happens to your charters and thought to myself if someone can write it why can't i do it. Went back to work and showed them when i could do. I would just like to thank you for writing it helped my get back up and do my job.
I must say that you writing is very intense and brutal but and the same time soft and gentle. I like what you cover of the BDSM scene and gives people i look in the window not a lot of people will ever see.
thank you for writing this for all the people that wish they could or want to know a little about such things.
-Mistress Tallulah
p.s another author on AFF is Scribe this is a very good bdsm m/m story http://original.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=249.
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have been thinking long and hard what to say in this review. I think I will settle now with this:
Your story is disturbingly fascinating. Please don't take that as an offence, I don't mean 'disturbing' in a bad way, it's just that I read your first three or four chapters and thought, 'Okay, that's so not what Nayru wants to read', and stopped. And then I kept thinking about it, and about why I didn't read further and such, and I started all over again.
The story disturbs my definition of a relationship, but still it's so utterly fascinating, so completely new to me that I can't say 'disturbing' in a bad way (and don't want to). It's more like opening a door to a whole new perspective which I will (most probably) never experience myself but is so intriguing at the same time that I just have to read further. (That might sound weird now, but I can't think of a better way to explain myself, sorry.)
But to the storyline.
I have to admit that I skipped every sex-scene with Naruto and Sasuke. I don't know why, but the thought of them having sex with anybody completely creeps me out. So I can't say anything to that.
I absolutely love your Iruka and Kakashi. First of all, I'm happy that you took Iruka as the Dom, it's so fitting and a really nice change from what's usually written. And I was so close to tears when they had their crisis, and then once again when they made up. (One thing, though, you let Iruka be completely outrageous about Orochimaru's club in one chapter, and then let him send Kakashi there for his punishment in another. That really surprised me because I saw your Iruka not as the kind of person going back at his word. But that's just a little detail.)
I like Ibiki and Raidou, too, the way they have a D/s-relationship with so much tenderness. I don't think I've read that pairing yet and I'm myself a fan of GenRai, but they're fitting very well.
Kankuro and Shino, well, I've always see both of them rather asexually, but the pairing fits, too, in my opinion.
Gaara/Shikamaru are again completely different, with so much more devotion, but I can see lazy Shikamaru searching for somebody to tell him how things are going.
Kisama/Itachi isn't a pairing I particularly like, but they're really authentic in your fic, I think, especially the inner conflict in Itachi about being the Dom of the house and still wanting to submit to his partner.
Neji and Sai are very tragic together, I'm not really sure what to say about them, but I absolutely loved Hinata walking in on them and fainting.
I guess I forgot some pairings since there are so many in your fic, but I think I said what I wanted to tell you. Sorry for the rather long review, hope you read it all the way though. ;-) I know I don't review often (bad me), but I at least made it up in length then.
Please keep writing your fic and fascinating me. (Preferably with more KakaIruKaka, but that's just a suggestion.)
Nayru
Your story is disturbingly fascinating. Please don't take that as an offence, I don't mean 'disturbing' in a bad way, it's just that I read your first three or four chapters and thought, 'Okay, that's so not what Nayru wants to read', and stopped. And then I kept thinking about it, and about why I didn't read further and such, and I started all over again.
The story disturbs my definition of a relationship, but still it's so utterly fascinating, so completely new to me that I can't say 'disturbing' in a bad way (and don't want to). It's more like opening a door to a whole new perspective which I will (most probably) never experience myself but is so intriguing at the same time that I just have to read further. (That might sound weird now, but I can't think of a better way to explain myself, sorry.)
But to the storyline.
I have to admit that I skipped every sex-scene with Naruto and Sasuke. I don't know why, but the thought of them having sex with anybody completely creeps me out. So I can't say anything to that.
I absolutely love your Iruka and Kakashi. First of all, I'm happy that you took Iruka as the Dom, it's so fitting and a really nice change from what's usually written. And I was so close to tears when they had their crisis, and then once again when they made up. (One thing, though, you let Iruka be completely outrageous about Orochimaru's club in one chapter, and then let him send Kakashi there for his punishment in another. That really surprised me because I saw your Iruka not as the kind of person going back at his word. But that's just a little detail.)
I like Ibiki and Raidou, too, the way they have a D/s-relationship with so much tenderness. I don't think I've read that pairing yet and I'm myself a fan of GenRai, but they're fitting very well.
Kankuro and Shino, well, I've always see both of them rather asexually, but the pairing fits, too, in my opinion.
Gaara/Shikamaru are again completely different, with so much more devotion, but I can see lazy Shikamaru searching for somebody to tell him how things are going.
Kisama/Itachi isn't a pairing I particularly like, but they're really authentic in your fic, I think, especially the inner conflict in Itachi about being the Dom of the house and still wanting to submit to his partner.
Neji and Sai are very tragic together, I'm not really sure what to say about them, but I absolutely loved Hinata walking in on them and fainting.
I guess I forgot some pairings since there are so many in your fic, but I think I said what I wanted to tell you. Sorry for the rather long review, hope you read it all the way though. ;-) I know I don't review often (bad me), but I at least made it up in length then.
Please keep writing your fic and fascinating me. (Preferably with more KakaIruKaka, but that's just a suggestion.)
Nayru
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha. You should make them go as Renji and Ichigo... Just because. Or! Byakuya/Ichigo or Byakuya/Renji. There are so many pairings I could list off. Lets see... theres also Yumichika/Ikaku, Gin/Kira, Gin/Aizen, also, (in my opinion one of the best ones) Shunsui Kyoraku/Jûshirô Ukitake! GO PRETTY BOYS! haha. Just a few suggestions.
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NICE CHAPTER!!!!!!!
I like Ibiki/Raidou. I want far more NaruSasu!! (I love those two together. But they don't get enough space in your story in my opinion :D ) Though I am also looking forward to the meeting of KanShino und GaaShika (Never thought about those two but it works!!! And very well too.). NejiSai were a surprise and very interesting.
I don't like Itachi AT ALL. But I like what you made of Kisame though I can't recognize him (OC).
What will happen to IruKakaIru? I liked Kaka as the powerfull sub and I didn't like seeing Iruka breaking down like that but I think I'll like your developement. It had a good start.
Thanks for sharing this story. Please update!
I like Ibiki/Raidou. I want far more NaruSasu!! (I love those two together. But they don't get enough space in your story in my opinion :D ) Though I am also looking forward to the meeting of KanShino und GaaShika (Never thought about those two but it works!!! And very well too.). NejiSai were a surprise and very interesting.
I don't like Itachi AT ALL. But I like what you made of Kisame though I can't recognize him (OC).
What will happen to IruKakaIru? I liked Kaka as the powerfull sub and I didn't like seeing Iruka breaking down like that but I think I'll like your developement. It had a good start.
Thanks for sharing this story. Please update!
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waaah!! Chapter 51... Kakashi + Iruka + ANGST = OMG. This chapter made me so happy with Kakashi being all back-off-Genma-Iruka-is-MINE! XD <3
I'm also super happy about Chapter 52, too... I've been wondering if they'd ever break from the "lifestyle" and just be regular Iruka and Kakashi... ^_____^
I'm also super happy about Chapter 52, too... I've been wondering if they'd ever break from the "lifestyle" and just be regular Iruka and Kakashi... ^_____^
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm not really picky or anything... Okay okay so I am, but thats not the point no is it? I wanted to know when Naruto and sasuke came back into the picture. I've been waiting and waiting but My little sexs feinds haven't appeared again. Other then that I love your story- er stories?