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Wow. When I read the Ibiki/Raidou chapter and Genma came in I also thought you might be starting a threesome but then Genma left and I thought it was just me so I didn't mention it in my review. Ibiki is surely dominate enough to have 2 subs and Genma and Raidou are already very close to each other. About the only pairing that it would really bother me to have a third person introduced to is Gaara and Shika (I just love those 2 together and committed only to each other). But as a thought you could always have Genma be the dom for both Kotetsu and Izumo.

I may have mentioned this before but anyway I really wanted to thank you for the recommendations for ffpanda's Depravity and iron dog's lost cadre. I went and bought all the Gravitation manga and dvds available after reading Depravity and Depravity 1.0 and after reading iron dog's stories went on a search for ai no kusabe (sp?). If you have any more recommendations I'd love to hear them.

Like you, the only Bleach I've seen is that on cartoon network. I have read alot of the story info on Wikepedia but stopped because I wanted to be kept in suspense for the next episode on TV. And since I have an ancient computer and I only have dail up I haven't downloaded any of the fansub dubs. I think it would be neat for Gaara and Shika to go to a convention dressed as Bleach characters. But since they are my favorites in your story, anything they do is wonderful to me.

I forgot to mention that everytime I make spaghetti, chili or have ice cream I now think of your story. For that matter, many of my dreams are of your story lately (I kind of like that).

Ok, I think this is the longest review I've ever written. My reviews are usually short and not very helpful or interesting so on many stories I like I just rate. But your story is just so special I have to leave reviews (even if they are awful).

And take your time getting to next weekend in your story if you want. The longer it takes the more smut (and plot smut) we get to read. Thanks again for writing.

OMG! Please... it would be so cool. As for Genma being a Dom, it's okay Itachi's a Dom and he's subbed for Ibiki. Ibiki can be like the Dom's Dom XD, LOL. Ignore me I just think it would ridiculously Hott, but then everything you do is ridiculously hott so :D. You'll always be welcome and I accept glomps at any time XD. I'm a little sad about the no updates, but you have to get your work done, you have my dream job, so you need to keep it :D. Maybe though you could walk around with a little voice recorder and dictate it XD. I'd be happy to transcribe them for you if it's digital, you could just email it to me XD. LOL, again ignore me, concentrate on important stuff :D.

As for what bleach characters they could go as Arrancar LOL, maybe not those are the bad guys, but their outfits are Hott. Um, if tyou're going for characters they would pull off well, Shika would make an excellent Renji and Gaara a really good Ichigo. There's actually a large IchiRen fan base too, check this out when you have a minute:

http://bleach.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600010012

It's a slightly unorthodox pairing but it works. LOL there's even an embarrassing incident in the anime where they scandalise Ichigo's class XD.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dbnaoyn1IXQ&mode=related&search=

LOL, both the story and the vid clip have mild spoilers. And OMG, Bleach is soooo Much better in Japanese, you have NO idea. If you try it, you'll Never go back LOL, not to mention that they're light years ahead and have smexy characteres like Ulquiorra and Grimmjaw Jaggerjack XD. This one is just for fun XD

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9gMyXCMb0lE&mode=related&search=

Alright anymore Bleach info and I would completely spoil your fun, so I'll stop there. I know the clip isn't exactly what you were looking for but maybe it could help- XD.

hey great chapter!
i think shikamaru and gaara should go to the anime thing as renji and ichigo
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i like that pairing anyway
huhu
and gaara already has red hair
or he can be ichigo
whatever you think i mean its your story

could you start writing about sasuke and naruto more often
i believe it is my new favorite pairing [naruto as seme of course]

Ja ne!

Sweeeeeet!
I love it, I love it, I love it.
You don't know how much I crave each new chapter.
The waitings is horrible!!
But I shall wait for I love this fic to pieces!! <3

TC.
~dragon

You update so regularly I LOVE YOU! Btw this chapter was really really good. I like how each relationship developes differently and at it's own pace. Thanks for making all of them happy ^_^

Mistress, you have again brought happiness.

I would guess that Ibiki will not really be quiting. More like transferring to the sons of the family.

I really like you writing style...but the 'fetish' (is it a fetish, i don't really know...) angers me...i hate it when these things conflict! Oh, but so is my lot in life...

awwww! *wibbles in delight*
I love well-deserved sap, and I got three chapters of it! YAY~! Thank you so much, for vanilla ice cream, vanilla sex, and kinky cuddles. ^-^

I just made it to chapter 30 and i have to say...THIS IS THE BEST NARUTO FIC THAT I'VE EVER READ IN MY LIFE!!!!!!!!!!*bows before you* Everything is just so simple yet complex. I just LOVE the Gaara/Shika pairing. I think it's my fav...i love youuuuuuuuuuuuuu

Chapter 34 was just so brilliant that i have to give the chapter itself a whole review! The pairing...the pairing was bloody fantastic. I LOVED the way it played out and ended. It was hard to tell who was the dom and who was the sub. Just amazing. You are doing a really excellent job. I'm ignoring all of the other stories that i read in all the catogories that i read just because i can't tear my eye away. Great, excellent, fabulous story *worships you*