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by Hestia

person Kerrisa
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! All is well in Iruka-Kakashi Land!!! I never thought of the Garra Shika pairing before until you wrote it... its super hot now o.O Hestia-sama you quite a talent and extravagant imagination! No sex scene has been the same nor has any not been highly satisfying, and then you have multiple couples, all with very different personalities, and they work out perfectly. Every new chapter its like "whose life do i get to peek in on today?' Its so awesome! *spins*
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG its so sweet and hot all at the same time! I'm so glad you updated! I was panicing when Iruka freaked out, but i'm glad that they worked it out and are closer then ever! (yay!) Gaara and shika are sooo good together I'm adding that to my list of fav pairings. the shino/kank pairing kinda suprised me but it works out. Hope to read more soon. keep up the good work YOSH!

Ja ne!
person dragon
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!
I'm in heaven!
Gaara/Shika!! My God! I just love them in this fic!
I've re-read their chapters who-knows how many times!!
I'm oficially obsessed with this fic and I frantically await the next chapters to come!!
MORE!! PLEASE!!
TC.
~dragon
person Allys
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, I love the idea of your own website with just summaries XD. I've told you already, you're starting a movement. I wanted to open a D/s Naruto club on Y Gall. If I do would you post your story so you can get crazy fans over there too? LOL. Oh and this was yet another fantastic chapter. I lve how these guys have gotten playful. And I adore the thought of them both wearing collars, it's much better when you belong to each other :D. Although I do have an issue with the pearls O.o, I know what kind of girl am I right? LOL, a very superstitious one. It has to do with growing up in the islands, we're very superstitious people as a whole. One of the thing I've always heard is that pearls bring tears to a relationship. Although in this relationship tears seem to be a big part XD. LOL, but you know what I mean. There's a long list of those silly things - Knives can cut a relationship; if you buy a woman shoes she'll walk out of your life. Down to simple ones like, sneezing or biting your tongue when somebody's talking about you. LOL. yeah I know it's weird. I also love the idea of Shika and the doubloon. Your collar ideas are fabulous. I love that they're always meaningful. I also love how everything in this story interconnects, yet doesn't. It always amazes me how this turned out. I mean it's so much more than just a regular story. Sighs. So good. Oh and Pablo asked yesterday how much you quarreled when he said Gaara couldn't win. Silly boy, I'm pretty sure he wants to debate it with you or me, cause of course five seconds later he said that Sasuke could never beat Neji in a fight - After I initially blew up at him, was when I realised he was just picking fights - the big grin on him helped too :rolls eyes: the boge. XD. You just have to ignore him when he's behaving like that I do it all the time. LOL, Thanks for another chapter XD, Allys.
person cynaga
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was wanting a table of contents - thanks for that! Gaara/Shika get smoother, sweeter and sexier by the chapter. I'm lovin' it and your writing! Thanks! :D
person tovah
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You never cease to amaze me I love this fic so much! I think it's hot and your writting makes me want to read chapters over and over. I can't help but get excited every time a new chapter comes out. Keep up the good work!
person llyoung
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the link to your web page and for the summary chapters for your story. I do like to go back and reread certain chapters/passages and as the story grew it was getting harder and harder to find the chapter/passage I was looking for.
person Epi
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks Hestia the new chapters are awesome as always and a table of contents is definitely useful! I reread some chapters of your fic almost everyday, it is so addictive *grin* everytime I discover something new.
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy for Kakashi and Iruka. *sigh* Beautiful chapter. And the next one, too... Gaara and Shikamaru are so much in love, and it's so *right*. I am still totally in love/lust with this story!
person llyoung
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another sweet but hot Gaara/Shika chapter. Thank you. Your writing leaves me with a goofy smile on my face and unable to think of anything else but your story. Your amazing - I don't know how you do it. And you also have so much humor in your stories.
I loved the line about the Bleach anime name - I've always wondered were the name came from too. And Shika doesn't seem to be concentrating much on work yet either. I also love the idea of Gaara also having a collar (that was great). Thanks again for writing.