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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Did I tell you that you can be my Master any time?
~sigh~
I grovel at your feet in submission at your latest chapters and on going story!!
Thank you for your wonderful updates, Master! They are the wonderfully written!!
I'll be waiting here, by the computer for your next update!!!
Did I mention Thank you?
Oh well.....
.......Thank you!!!!
~sigh~
I grovel at your feet in submission at your latest chapters and on going story!!
Thank you for your wonderful updates, Master! They are the wonderfully written!!
I'll be waiting here, by the computer for your next update!!!
Did I mention Thank you?
Oh well.....
.......Thank you!!!!
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gods Mistress, that was...
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Allys--I accidentally deleted your review--I went to my back browser and copied and am readding it. I was just trying to scroll and somehow deleted it, which is so annoying. Anyway, I love your reviews so I'm readding it (bizarre of me).
LOL, you just put a whole new spin on Vanilla XD. How could Shika not leave a note? Had lost his mind. LOL, I love what he told the children, and how Kankurou screamed and screamed and then just told him what he wanted to know. This was another awesome chapter. Gaara always has the greatest toys XD. There much more that I could wrote but I'm really tired, I had a long day. Thank you so much for the update love.
LOL, you just put a whole new spin on Vanilla XD. How could Shika not leave a note? Had lost his mind. LOL, I love what he told the children, and how Kankurou screamed and screamed and then just told him what he wanted to know. This was another awesome chapter. Gaara always has the greatest toys XD. There much more that I could wrote but I'm really tired, I had a long day. Thank you so much for the update love.
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First off, I have to say, I LOVE this story. And I will be using that word throughout this review so be warned. :D I've been following it quite avidly for a while now, silently. ::blush:: Yeah, bad on my part because I'm always afraid of what to say in a review even though I LOVE THE STORY (I hit the rating button like mad), but in one of your recent chapters (were Naruto and Sasuke were eating dinner at the posh restaurant :D)it was as if you were calling me so I had to respond. :D Anyway, moving on to the babbling. :D
I've always been intrigued by the BDSM community and have tried to read up on it and that is one of the many reasons why I love this fic! You show how, in the community, you are supposed to properly act and interact, be it Master or slave. Awesome. I see this fic as a type of learning material. Wicked. ^_^b
Let's talk about the pairings. You sold me on ALL OF THEM. I love how Naruto is the Dom (most of the time XD) and that Iruka is too (Eee!!). Kakashi is one sexy sub and Sasuke is quickly catching up. He just needs to realize his true place. :D Gaara/Shika? I have no words to describe the feeling I have for this pair. They are so perfect for each other it hurts! (in a good way :D) You gave Shika curls eee hot hot hot and Gaara likes ANIME and I want Gaara's backyard dear God. I love this pair to bits. Neji/Sai are so 'past-trauma healing themselves with each other' which is awesome. Sai should paint Neji at the club. And wow I wonder what Hinata's whole reaction to Neji's relationship is(which will probably be all love). Kiba and Akamaru are just too adorable for words! And Kisame/Itachi is simply amazing. Can't wait to see what Itachi will go through for the rest of the week. And Saturday!! Excitement! :D I want to mention every single pairing because they are all so perfect but I would just end up squeeing at everyone even more but yes once again LOVE THEM ALL please can we have some more? :D (Was curious would Obito make an appearance you never mentioned if he had died? And will Tobi be seen? :D)
And you have BODY MODIFIATIONS. GUH. Probably my top weakness for guys. First! Piercings! LOVE. That corset piercing on Sasuke? HOT. Would like more of that please. :D Have you ever considered giving one of your boys a frenulum (right under the glans) or a lorum piercing? Piercings in general are a VERY AWESOME THING. :D Second! Tattoos! Naruto with the Nine Tails and the flexing and the tattoo moving and yes. Nice. :D :D :D Will anyone else have any tats to show off? :D
Nitpicks? There are a few mispelling and syntax issues but, oh so very slight in number. Oh and in the last chapter with Gaara and Shika? (Awesome chapter like all the rest) How was Shika able to straddle Gaara if there was a chain connecting his ankles together I don't know why that stuck out to me but yeah, was just curious because my brain was going 'bwuh?' over that. >_<
All in all: <3 <3 <3 times a MILLION BILLION. :D Good luck with the future chapters! Can't wait for the next update! :D
I've always been intrigued by the BDSM community and have tried to read up on it and that is one of the many reasons why I love this fic! You show how, in the community, you are supposed to properly act and interact, be it Master or slave. Awesome. I see this fic as a type of learning material. Wicked. ^_^b
Let's talk about the pairings. You sold me on ALL OF THEM. I love how Naruto is the Dom (most of the time XD) and that Iruka is too (Eee!!). Kakashi is one sexy sub and Sasuke is quickly catching up. He just needs to realize his true place. :D Gaara/Shika? I have no words to describe the feeling I have for this pair. They are so perfect for each other it hurts! (in a good way :D) You gave Shika curls eee hot hot hot and Gaara likes ANIME and I want Gaara's backyard dear God. I love this pair to bits. Neji/Sai are so 'past-trauma healing themselves with each other' which is awesome. Sai should paint Neji at the club. And wow I wonder what Hinata's whole reaction to Neji's relationship is(which will probably be all love). Kiba and Akamaru are just too adorable for words! And Kisame/Itachi is simply amazing. Can't wait to see what Itachi will go through for the rest of the week. And Saturday!! Excitement! :D I want to mention every single pairing because they are all so perfect but I would just end up squeeing at everyone even more but yes once again LOVE THEM ALL please can we have some more? :D (Was curious would Obito make an appearance you never mentioned if he had died? And will Tobi be seen? :D)
And you have BODY MODIFIATIONS. GUH. Probably my top weakness for guys. First! Piercings! LOVE. That corset piercing on Sasuke? HOT. Would like more of that please. :D Have you ever considered giving one of your boys a frenulum (right under the glans) or a lorum piercing? Piercings in general are a VERY AWESOME THING. :D Second! Tattoos! Naruto with the Nine Tails and the flexing and the tattoo moving and yes. Nice. :D :D :D Will anyone else have any tats to show off? :D
Nitpicks? There are a few mispelling and syntax issues but, oh so very slight in number. Oh and in the last chapter with Gaara and Shika? (Awesome chapter like all the rest) How was Shika able to straddle Gaara if there was a chain connecting his ankles together I don't know why that stuck out to me but yeah, was just curious because my brain was going 'bwuh?' over that. >_<
All in all: <3 <3 <3 times a MILLION BILLION. :D Good luck with the future chapters! Can't wait for the next update! :D
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...and html or coding or whathaveyou hates me apparently. D: It cut off the end my review. ._.
Wanted to end by saying that I heart your fic by a million billion. A+++ all around!! Good luck with all your future chapters! Can't wait for your next update! :D :D :D
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Wanted to end by saying that I heart your fic by a million billion. A+++ all around!! Good luck with all your future chapters! Can't wait for your next update! :D :D :D
&hearts
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the story, but I think I found couple of typos and errors:
chapter 27: "and revealing his staining." staining ->straining?
chapter 27: "the stonewear fall from his" ->stoneware?
chapter 50: "He like tomato" -> he likes tomato?
chapter 50: "He set the ice cream container down and pushed Gaara's cock into the cold dessert so that Shikamaru was pressing the ice cream into his own erection" Is that really Gaara's not Shikamaru's?
You honestly have spoiled us rotten with your fast updates! ^_^
chapter 27: "and revealing his staining." staining ->straining?
chapter 27: "the stonewear fall from his" ->stoneware?
chapter 50: "He like tomato" -> he likes tomato?
chapter 50: "He set the ice cream container down and pushed Gaara's cock into the cold dessert so that Shikamaru was pressing the ice cream into his own erection" Is that really Gaara's not Shikamaru's?
You honestly have spoiled us rotten with your fast updates! ^_^
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 48: *wibbles* Awww. Everyone is ending in cuddles and fluffy feelings.
Chapter 49: The beginning was fun, the ending was FUCKING HOT. *_* Akamaru is really cute. X3 And I'm sure the hamburgers cooked better after being defrosted. :3
Chapter 50: HEE. Kankurou thinking Gaara has to be dead in a ditch somewhere for this phone call... "he's home sleeping" must've been something he NEVER expected to hear.
...oh. Oh, sweetheart. Na, Shikamaru deserves it, leaving without a note and making his Master worry like that. Christ, I'd've killed him- it's like waking up to find your five-year-old child gone, mixed with the hurt of your lover REALLY leaving you.
...whoa. *glazed. Like a ham*
Gaara spooned several balls of ice cream into the center of his hands. He set the ice cream container down and pushed Gaara’s cock into the cold dessert so that Shikamaru was pressing the ice cream into his own erection.
uh... de? *confused*
.... o_o *resumes glazing*
...GUH. *slack jawed, vacant-eyed, and very very happy* Maybe later I'll rub enough braincells together to be able to laugh at Gaara's parting volley.
Chapter 49: The beginning was fun, the ending was FUCKING HOT. *_* Akamaru is really cute. X3 And I'm sure the hamburgers cooked better after being defrosted. :3
Chapter 50: HEE. Kankurou thinking Gaara has to be dead in a ditch somewhere for this phone call... "he's home sleeping" must've been something he NEVER expected to hear.
...oh. Oh, sweetheart. Na, Shikamaru deserves it, leaving without a note and making his Master worry like that. Christ, I'd've killed him- it's like waking up to find your five-year-old child gone, mixed with the hurt of your lover REALLY leaving you.
...whoa. *glazed. Like a ham*
Gaara spooned several balls of ice cream into the center of his hands. He set the ice cream container down and pushed Gaara’s cock into the cold dessert so that Shikamaru was pressing the ice cream into his own erection.
uh... de? *confused*
.... o_o *resumes glazing*
...GUH. *slack jawed, vacant-eyed, and very very happy* Maybe later I'll rub enough braincells together to be able to laugh at Gaara's parting volley.
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay, higher brain functions are slowly resuming. Apologies if this is posted twice, I managed to catch aff.net's daily moment of downtime.
...that my computer is playing slow bellydance music... HEEEEEE. You just SELL your stuff so well... and you have a lot of my tiny little loves. Men built well enough to have those little bits of flesh over their hipbones... they LOOK like love handles, almost, but only men in the best of physical condition have them, and I love them. GOOD tats, the kind that's art, that has meaning and was... ART, that fits with the wearer in symbiosis, not something just gotten for fashion and that looks cool. I like tribal art, but tribal tattoos are being so overdone and... mass produced. XP
WET. MEN.
CURLS. hee!
Deep Inner Feelings (tm). Crying and cuddling and anger and jealousy and MAKE UP SEX and caring and taking care. <3
Corsets and corset piercings. :D
Art double-entendres (thank you, Ibiki. XD). A friend of my family is a glass artist... now I will have a special little smile in her workshop for inappropriate reasons. XD!
Trust, surrender, good friends, and silly little details that are adorable... Naruto in the clothing shop, the various gardens, Akamaru having to roll in things. X3
Obscenely flexible men. Heeeeee. None of your boys do this (yet), but since I converted someone else to this fetish already tonight... might as well see if I can keep up my batting average. :D Think of it as a thank-you.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8ME6qVbzMIQ Modern interpretation of dance, and a very good dancer. Pity he's got a shirt on...
And of course... bondage, submission, torture, pain, worship. Mmmm.
...that my computer is playing slow bellydance music... HEEEEEE. You just SELL your stuff so well... and you have a lot of my tiny little loves. Men built well enough to have those little bits of flesh over their hipbones... they LOOK like love handles, almost, but only men in the best of physical condition have them, and I love them. GOOD tats, the kind that's art, that has meaning and was... ART, that fits with the wearer in symbiosis, not something just gotten for fashion and that looks cool. I like tribal art, but tribal tattoos are being so overdone and... mass produced. XP
WET. MEN.
CURLS. hee!
Deep Inner Feelings (tm). Crying and cuddling and anger and jealousy and MAKE UP SEX and caring and taking care. <3
Corsets and corset piercings. :D
Art double-entendres (thank you, Ibiki. XD). A friend of my family is a glass artist... now I will have a special little smile in her workshop for inappropriate reasons. XD!
Trust, surrender, good friends, and silly little details that are adorable... Naruto in the clothing shop, the various gardens, Akamaru having to roll in things. X3
Obscenely flexible men. Heeeeee. None of your boys do this (yet), but since I converted someone else to this fetish already tonight... might as well see if I can keep up my batting average. :D Think of it as a thank-you.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8ME6qVbzMIQ Modern interpretation of dance, and a very good dancer. Pity he's got a shirt on...
And of course... bondage, submission, torture, pain, worship. Mmmm.
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(Note to self, hearts cut off comments. Good to know.)
Corsets and corset piercings. :D
Art double-entendres (thank you, Ibiki. XD). A friend of my family is a glass artist... now I will have a special little smile in her workshop for inappropriate reasons. XD!
Trust, surrender, good friends, and silly little details that are adorable... Naruto in the clothing shop, the various gardens, Akamaru having to roll in things. X3
Obscenely flexible men. Heeeeee. None of your boys do this (yet), but since I converted someone else to this fetish already tonight... might as well see if I can keep up my batting average. :D Think of it as a thank-you.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8ME6qVbzMIQ Modern interpretation of dance, and a very good dancer. Pity he's got a shirt on...
And of course... bondage, submission, torture, pain, worship. Mmmm.
Corsets and corset piercings. :D
Art double-entendres (thank you, Ibiki. XD). A friend of my family is a glass artist... now I will have a special little smile in her workshop for inappropriate reasons. XD!
Trust, surrender, good friends, and silly little details that are adorable... Naruto in the clothing shop, the various gardens, Akamaru having to roll in things. X3
Obscenely flexible men. Heeeeee. None of your boys do this (yet), but since I converted someone else to this fetish already tonight... might as well see if I can keep up my batting average. :D Think of it as a thank-you.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8ME6qVbzMIQ Modern interpretation of dance, and a very good dancer. Pity he's got a shirt on...
And of course... bondage, submission, torture, pain, worship. Mmmm.
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I didn't feel like I knew Kaka/Iru that well until this last chapter. Wow. What a character study. Talk about 'show don't tell' - you're writing is wonderful. And the way Kakashi tries to regain Iruka's trust; magnificient. Again, I am loving the idea of switching. It just seems to make sense. I mean after, what, 10 years of subbing, why wouldn't Kakashi want to dom once in a while. Of course, you told us why with the Rin incident but how cool was it that Iruka's distress helped him get past that.
I am sooo addicted to your work. I've even researched D/s. It's fascinating.
THANK YOU!!!
I am sooo addicted to your work. I've even researched D/s. It's fascinating.
THANK YOU!!!