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by Hestia

person Allys
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaww!! Again you're just killing me with sweetness right now XD. Good I needed a little sweetness :D. You've just described my dream morning, LOL - Sex, Anime and cuddling XD, what more could you want from life? Except meaybe strawberries, LOL. Excellent, your Gaara and Shika never fail to amaze me, that was complete bliss.

LOL, It's like they're on holiday XD. I love it when everything's relaxing and stress free. Perfection. I'm ready to deal with angst again now, LOL - How did you read my mind love? Not to mention the description of Shino coming out of the pool XD, and how beauty is in the eye :D, soo True. Lovely. Just another to adore you XD.
person llyoung
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the Kankuro/Kiba chapter. It was fun and sexy. Thanks for the update.
person cynaga
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, my beautiful Gaara and Shika. Much thanks, my Lady!
person llyoung
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the Gaara/Shika chapter (they are my favorite pairing in your story). They are so sweet (and hot) together. Your writing continues to be amazing. Thanks for sharing your talent. Looking forward to the next chapter (and hopefully more Gaara/Shika soon). Thanks again.
person kotikiz
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WAW!!!! This is the most remarkable fic I have ever read!!!! Can't find any words to describe all filings that I have after reading it!!! It's f*ckig wanderful story!!! Hope you will update very soon! Can't wait to read continuation!!!

p.s. if I have mistakes, sorry... eglish is not my speaking language...
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mistress, Gaara sleeping is just the most potent portrail of how happy and content he is. You are kind not only to us, your followers but also to your characters. Thank you.
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say... I ALWAYS love your Gaara/Shika. Perfection. Yum.
person llyoung
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your author's note just made me verrrrrrrrrrrrry happy. I'm so glad you are going to write about Gaara/Shika's and Kankuro/Shino's Sunday. I loved this last chapter. The way you switched between the different pairings was nice. I enjoyed Ibiki and Raidou very much and anytime Iruka and Kakashi are featured is wonderful. Thanks again for the update and for writing my all time favorite story.
person LindyStar
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
In my last review, I messed up. I meant chappies 46 and 47 my bad!
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Honey.. you're making me crazy, I've found some typos but I see you've been busy correcting the errors and have some lovely people pointing them out to you, how I love this story, I already said this but everytime you update I get all happy and excited, I just adore your writing style and the whole story line of this story so much, the way you describe everything to the smallest detail makes me gasp and shudder ;) it makes me want to create something (I'm a 3D Poser artist) but I'm sure I wouldn't do any good as I make mostly female pieces ;)

I can't wait for the future chapters but I'm sure there will be a few new ones up pretty soon as I know how you update so extremely fast (which I am not complaining about at all!), so keep up the good work and make us fans wiggle and writ in our chairs.