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May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just, wow. I like that you are taking characters and putting them in the non-usual pairings (i.e. Genma and Raidou) and chapter 39 and 40 definitely gave me the KisaIta I had been wanting. Great job.
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May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 30 - Utterly hilarious. Which is perfect, since Chapter 28 was full of emo Sasuke (but then again, when is he not?). I loved this chapter ^_^ Not much else to say except for a few grammatical errors that have popped up several times. Discreet/discretion. Discrete is separate parts, or something like that. I hope I haven't repeated myself though... O__o I have terrible memory.
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May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oops. Forgot one. Prostate (gland)/Prostrate (to lie flat on the ground). I honestly wouldn't mind if this fic went on forever. XD And... there IS a plot, it's just interspersed with lots and lots of yummy smut. Did I already say there can never be too much of IruKaka? I've forgotten again. Seriously. ^^;
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May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yippee! love this story so much. just wanted to say that. and hell yeah i get to be the 500th review for this story. can't wait for the update! well, i can i guess, i will.
loooove it.
loooove it.
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May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, the only obvious mistake to pick up on is that the name is actually spelled *Raidou* ... unless you've chosen to Americanize the name, I guess.
As much as I love Sasuke and Naruto ... I may be unable to leave my computer for fear of missing a chapter if you're going to bring in Genma, Raidou and Ibiki.
And you've got Raidou as a submissive? That's actually a first I think... I've seen him written as the 'fuckee,' but never actually mentally submissive to his partner.
And oh the things we want to know about Ibiki ... I won't even presume to suggest or wonder out loud. I'm sure you'll be able to blow our minds. hehe.
And, from the bottom of my heart and on my knees ... Genma. Fandom needs more Genma. And I feverishly await the name of a potential partner for him (just, no Aoba, 'cause Genma's smarter than to sleep with a co-worker and a stupid drunk).
As much as I love Sasuke and Naruto ... I may be unable to leave my computer for fear of missing a chapter if you're going to bring in Genma, Raidou and Ibiki.
And you've got Raidou as a submissive? That's actually a first I think... I've seen him written as the 'fuckee,' but never actually mentally submissive to his partner.
And oh the things we want to know about Ibiki ... I won't even presume to suggest or wonder out loud. I'm sure you'll be able to blow our minds. hehe.
And, from the bottom of my heart and on my knees ... Genma. Fandom needs more Genma. And I feverishly await the name of a potential partner for him (just, no Aoba, 'cause Genma's smarter than to sleep with a co-worker and a stupid drunk).
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May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay now... Ibiki and Raido? How do you come up with these pairings and how
the heck do you make then work? Because let me tell you, I ended loving these
pairings that I never saw coming and never even considered. You are amazing!
the heck do you make then work? Because let me tell you, I ended loving these
pairings that I never saw coming and never even considered. You are amazing!
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May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Raido, Mistress? Did not see that one coming, again you surprise me.
Poor, lucky Itachi, hee-hee-hee, he is soooo gonna get it.
Poor, lucky Itachi, hee-hee-hee, he is soooo gonna get it.
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May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! I'm so glad you updated XD. Was going into withdrawal syndrome LOL. Thanks for the beginning part, you cleared that up for me, I was wondering how Sasuke just got away like that. Ibiki grabbing Naruto would definitely do it though. And LOL, their semi aborted interview, XD. I guess after that little scene Ibiki knew everythhing he needed to know. And I'm also noticing that they're not actually banned, just that they need to draw up a contract, so that they know what they can and cannot do with each other - Good Plan! Especially after what happened at Neji's house.
As for Itachi, well he's a different kind of sub isn't he? I love the insight that being a dom for so long gives him XD, and I especially love that he won't be out subbed by Sasuke, LOL. Kisame, singing Barry White!!! XD XD XD. Oh man how I love it when people sing. Talent, of any kind really, is seriously one of my greatest weaknesses, LOL. It's such a turn on XD.
Raido and Ibiki... O.o, :nosebleed: LOL, I can't wait to see that one. And ZOMG life topic, one of my favourite professors in College, him being Talented, cool, sweet and sexy O.o was a glass blower!!! You've just corrupted my mind! Oh God, I'll never be able to think of him with a straight face again, God knows it was already hard enough, LOL. He's married though, happily, you can google him - his name is Angus Powers, LOL nice name right XD. He's very young, very Scottish, very blond XD, and I've never seen a photo do him justice, I guess he's one of those personality type sexy's, LOL. Okay end deviation. Raido and Ibiki, I really like that match, they're both sort of grizzly looking, tough and sexy, manly men, I can't wait to see how you go about it, your Ibiki is so fucking SEXY!!
And LOL, okay typos?? I never think about that when I'm reading your stuff, but there was one I picked up probably cause it was right on top of your note - cinnamon not cinammen, just think of it this way XD, emphasis on cinn XD.
Thank you so much for the update, I've been jonesin' and I sent you the P's version of the fight, Huggles, Allys.
As for Itachi, well he's a different kind of sub isn't he? I love the insight that being a dom for so long gives him XD, and I especially love that he won't be out subbed by Sasuke, LOL. Kisame, singing Barry White!!! XD XD XD. Oh man how I love it when people sing. Talent, of any kind really, is seriously one of my greatest weaknesses, LOL. It's such a turn on XD.
Raido and Ibiki... O.o, :nosebleed: LOL, I can't wait to see that one. And ZOMG life topic, one of my favourite professors in College, him being Talented, cool, sweet and sexy O.o was a glass blower!!! You've just corrupted my mind! Oh God, I'll never be able to think of him with a straight face again, God knows it was already hard enough, LOL. He's married though, happily, you can google him - his name is Angus Powers, LOL nice name right XD. He's very young, very Scottish, very blond XD, and I've never seen a photo do him justice, I guess he's one of those personality type sexy's, LOL. Okay end deviation. Raido and Ibiki, I really like that match, they're both sort of grizzly looking, tough and sexy, manly men, I can't wait to see how you go about it, your Ibiki is so fucking SEXY!!
And LOL, okay typos?? I never think about that when I'm reading your stuff, but there was one I picked up probably cause it was right on top of your note - cinnamon not cinammen, just think of it this way XD, emphasis on cinn XD.
Thank you so much for the update, I've been jonesin' and I sent you the P's version of the fight, Huggles, Allys.
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May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Always starting somethin' new and fun - Raidou and Ibiki, aye? Yum Yum
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May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the interactions between Itachi and Kisame. Also love the new pairing of Ibiki and Raidou. Another wonderful chapter. Thank you. Would love to see what the other couples were up to as well for the rest of Sunday.