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Oh, forgot to mention that I thought it was great that Sasuke figured out that the way to get Naruto to break emotionally as a sub was not thru embarassment or beating but by letting someone else touch him (Sasuke) sexually.

ZOMG!! LMAO XD, YOU NEARLY GAVE ME A FREAKING HEART ATTACK!!!! ROFL, I don't even really know what to say, but PHEW!!!!!!! hehehehe Oh my God, Oh my God... wuuuuuu... okokokok.... Ok... O.O I don't know whether to laugh, cry, scream... but I'm so bloody Relieved. Lots and lots of deep breaths and I'm holding my heart here, actually more like banging on it, LOL. Oh my God. Don't ever do that again XD, I don't know if I could take it - Oh My GOD!! hehehehe I have to come back later.

*can't stop laughing* O god.. this had to be the cutest, funniest chapter your wrote sofar, the idea of Naruto dressed up like a business man and Sasuke being all dom towards him, he has no clue what's in store and then him calling Neji.. Ooooo that will be hot :D but knowing Naruto he will probably turn the tables on Sasuke and have him beg to be fucked in minutes.

Great chapter hon, you brighten up my morning with your writing :)

Rofl. "I'm so happy to see you."

That was aboslutely hilarious! :F

Hey, I'd like to send you something I wrote as a sort of extra KisaIta scene- I wanted something more dramatic, and so I actually wrote something. It is really bad with punctuation, but I just wanted to share. My email is montanawildhack@2die4.com

I'm so glad Naruto and Sasuke are getting their shit together. And I really love Sai's collar... And Kisame collared his bitch!!! Yay... I'm really digging the plot you've got going on. And, oh-- thank you thank you thank you for the unexpected dash of KakaSasu. *drools* It was really interesting to see Kakashi in his own world, at the dojo, behaving normally... and then slipping so quickly into his slave persona when Iruka blew his top.

Once again, I loooove this fic!!

I really really like your fanfiction.
One of my favorits and some of the best D/s I' ve ever read. Normally I'm total in NaruKaka and even I don't like some of the pairings (like Kakashi and Iruka normally I can't see them together), you made it work quite nice in my mind.^^

By your form of writing and describing it's possible for me to imagine the characters in all situations/suroundings/emotional states. (It's like a little film is playing in front of my mental eyes) And it seems their way of behaving and acting together is so natural and inartifical (I allways thought that kakashi ist a born sub, but I never thougth about Sasuke or Itachi! in that line. But it so fits^x^). Even it's not possible for Konoha at least not in this extend (They would get killed caused by decreased walking abillity^^ But therefore it's an AU *grin*.)

I'm so looking forward to Kakashis punishment. He deserves it *yup*
I really would like to see him together (one session, maybe punishment for misbehaving/mistreating another sub (meant is sasuke and that cock sucking action *smile*)with Naruto.
Actually in your fic it's the first time I see Naruto as a real dom (love Narudom suits him), but sometimes I can't get rid of the feeling, that Iruka is right. He needs some retraining *drop* But Iruka could also use some. His panic about Narutos whereabouts even made me nervous. Poor Kashi. He needs a strong hand. *grins*


ah I nearly forget: your fast and regular updates are a real brownie point.

So I hope I didn't made too many mistakes (mother tongue is not english)and you understand what I mean (expressing myself is much more difficult than reading and understanding^^°)

I would be as uncomfortable as Naruto at that restuarant myself. Liked the humor and the angst and love how you keep bringing elements from "Naruto" into your story.

I adore your story, it's my favorite Naruto fanfic. I especially love your NaruSasu and GaaShika, and I have to say you are amazing because you're turning me on to KankuShino, a pairing that never entered my mind. But man, Chapter 44 -- Sasuke really does do his best as an uke. His domming makes me cringe, especially for poor Naruto. All the things he's coming up with--there's almost no sexual edge, just embarrassment. I can't wait until Naruto doms again. Again, your work is absolutely delicious.

naruto, naruto, naruto. he is some kind of sub he is. he's hilarious. but i think sasuke is awesome for forcing neji to punish naruto. how humiliating would that be. even i'm cringing at the thought of that. yikes. i wonder how naruto will take it. and now we have history on his dad, i wonder what that's about. lovely chapter. and i agree with naruto... is that all sasuke can do as a dom or did he do it so that naruto would feel humiliated and insecure? because i think that's a good idea really, getting naruto out of his element. otherwise he'd feel too comfortable.