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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, Sasuke does know how to push Naruto’s buttons to make him feel totally uncomfortable and humiliated. I liked the way he did it; instead of putting him into the traditional bondage restraints, he emerged Naruto into different socially foreign and unconfortable settings, knowing that somewhere, Naruto was going to mess up. And then to call, of all people, Neji, in on the punishment session. Naruto did say he'd do anything to get Sasuke. But I see that we’ve got a new plot wrinkle regarding Naruto’s lineage. At least we can see from his reaction that, although Sasuke is into humiliation, he’s not into cruelty. Still, I can’t wait to see Naruto get some well-deserved payback!
Cookie ~
Cookie ~
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow you are continuneing to impress me whith your knowledge of the S&M scene. I like how you are working out there problems as I was worreid that Naruto might lose his Sasuke. Nice to see Ibiki, he is one of my favorites and I only wish they would do more with him in the managa. I hope you use Ibiki well in this story , and maybe we could see some of the Uchiha's parents on what they think about there sons new pet satus.
Thankyou for the quick updates.
Thankyou for the quick updates.
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO!!!!! This was just way too funny XD. I Love IT!! Everything was funny - Naruto's opinion on the restaurant, the clothes, the wine, the wine sommelier XD. Oh God him bumping into George was the Greatest!!! "I'm so happy to see you, George" LMAO!!! I can't wait for the next chappie, you are so fantastic, one minute it's all angsty the next it's just Great Freaking Fun XD. Oh and p.s. You and Paul could lime after that comment about parents :D LOL, he always said people should beat them instead of the children O.o XD. Oh LOL, I forgot - Lime = hang out.
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mistress you have atained new levels of evilness. How could you stop in such an inauspisious place?
I do however thank you for updating, I was starting to develop cravings. Please update soon.
I do however thank you for updating, I was starting to develop cravings. Please update soon.
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOO!!!
I go to sleep after reading 4 updates, and come online 21 hours later to find 4 more chapters! 4 more delicious chapters of the D/S goodness my mind craves. Its just not a good day without an update from you. I'm also 31 chapters into "A Virgin Kiss" and I swear that if I was a man, I'd be walking around with a hard-on all day because of these stories. XD! The Naruto yelling at Itachi with Sasuke in his shop moment was absolutly priceless... Then Ibiki's thoughts... Omfg. I couldn't breathe for 5 minutes from laughing so hard! Then the events leading up to Naruto's sub session with Sasuke. More not-breathing-from-laughter-and-drooling moments. You are quickly turning into one of my favorite Naruto fanfic authors.
*grovels for more*
Ougon
I go to sleep after reading 4 updates, and come online 21 hours later to find 4 more chapters! 4 more delicious chapters of the D/S goodness my mind craves. Its just not a good day without an update from you. I'm also 31 chapters into "A Virgin Kiss" and I swear that if I was a man, I'd be walking around with a hard-on all day because of these stories. XD! The Naruto yelling at Itachi with Sasuke in his shop moment was absolutly priceless... Then Ibiki's thoughts... Omfg. I couldn't breathe for 5 minutes from laughing so hard! Then the events leading up to Naruto's sub session with Sasuke. More not-breathing-from-laughter-and-drooling moments. You are quickly turning into one of my favorite Naruto fanfic authors.
*grovels for more*
Ougon
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*does happy dance* Yay their back together :D *boogies around the room while singing a mantra of Naruto and Sasuke* and OMG the mental image of Sai and Neji in the backroom going at it on Naruto's bed with Sai and the lock of hair around his neck.. talk about sexy.. damn you for writing this (but thank you too lol) and then making Kakashi teach Sasuke how to suck cock, such a nice touch, I'm already looking forward to Iruka punishing him for that little pleasure induced sin.. do you ever wonder where all of this comes from, it makes me wonder if you're into d/s yourself hmmm? but enough about that, 2 more awesome chapters, so detailed and sexy, it amazes me how much detail and information you give on the small things, it's like nothing goes by you in these story, the smallest thing is put into focus, every emotions displayed, that's what I love about this, it's like you can feel every shudder, every whimper heard.
All ready looking forward to more.
All ready looking forward to more.
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love those last two lines especially.
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Do you know why i love you? You update so fast! and to be able to do that and actually come up with something good, is a job incredibly well done! Another good chap!
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uwaa, that last chapter was undoubtedly wonderful! It was really cool to see Kakashi talking normally and stuff, hehe. He's do entertaining. And that Sasuke and Naruto session was pretty effin' hot. :)
Can't wait for the next chapters! Great job. ^^
Can't wait for the next chapters! Great job. ^^
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke is really whiney. I can see this as his personality taken to extreme but I look forward to him doming Naruto for real and growing some balls!
thanks for sharing your wonderful talent with us~!
thanks for sharing your wonderful talent with us~!