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Wow, that was interesting, having a sub tell another sub to um, go down on him. But Kakashi did make me laugh with his, “What? Iruka beating Naruto? Hell, no, I like it,” "...so I can go home and take my punishment like the good slave that I am.” I must admit, those were some good lines! But Iruka also had me laughing as well. In fact he reminds me of...my mother! Nice and calm, supposedly sweet on the surface, then BLAM! Switch personality! Yep, I can see it, why Iruka is a dom. Afterall, nobody messes with an angry mom when they go on one of their tirades.

Oh, I’m so glad SOMEBODY finally sat down and clued Sasuke in. He’s definitely sub-material because he definitely needs lots of talking to, lots of attention and reassurance -- and lots of fucking. A LOT. He’s also just as quick to anger like Naruto. Getting fucked will help him with that, too. In fact, to paraphrase one of the many famous lines from “Gone with the Wind": Sasuke, you need fucking, badly. That's what's wrong with you. You should be fucked and often, and by someone who knows how. Of course one can say the same thing about Itachi! Creampies, indeed!

Although part of me still sympathizes with Sasuke because I’m sure that part of his anger and confusion has to do with his repressed memories and maybe even some lingering brain damage from being nearly beaten to death. Afterall, he still suffers occasionally from a collapsed lung. In fact, if I’m following the story correctly, after the incident and the beating, Sasuke has been somewhat repressed all this time until he met Naruto. So it will be interesting to see what happens to him, if anything that is, when he goes through his sessions with Naruto as a dom.

Cookie ~

Hey wait, won't Itachi's parents be mad that he's with a black guy?

Holy fucking god! That must have been the hottest fantasy I've ever heard about, ever! fuck! I'm feeling ridiciously hot right about now!

OMG... That's Horrible! Itachi was in high school so Sasuke must have been what 11/12?? Younger? ;_; I hate when people mess with children. That was just... the worst. Is anyone ever gonna tell Sasuke!? I'm not even sure if I want them to, OMG, but Itachi is completely forgiven for just about, everything, and poor Sasuke must be so bloody confused. That's all fucked up. I guess that could explain the perfect competence Uchiha's is run with. Itachi would try very hard to Never let that kind of thing happen again. Lady love you keep throwing in all these unexpected twists that make me sad. I'm really dying to see how you're going to handle this. Thank you so much for all the updates this weekend again. It made me so happy - and Happy Mother's day.

Wow. That was so very, truly tragic about Sasuke and Itachi. Man. I can see you’re preparing us for some serious future angst, especially between Sasuke and Naruto. That was a very good explanation of Itachi’s fears of becoming a sub and need to be in control in any relationship, even if subbing is truly what he wants deep down. But I am a little confused; since Itachi wanted to get away from Sasuke by spending the summer at camp, why did he allow Sasuke to handcuff and tie him down the night before, allowing Sasuke to think this is what he wanted, then suddenly fight against it, especially when he knew he was leaving the next day?

Man, Kisame’s a tough dom, but I have to hand it to him for his love, his patience, his understanding and compassion towards Itachi, especially when he found out “the story”. But Itachi, like Kakashi and even Sasuke, are subs that have a lot of self-pride who need the right type of dom. So now you really got me cheering for Kisame & Itachi here, as well as Naruto & Sasuke!

Oh by the way, I also agree with a couple of the other reviewers that a D/s Iruka & Kakashi “gaiden” story delving into the beginning of their relationship would be fun to read!

Cookie ~

gods Mistress, can one intelligent male be so stupid??? Wonder how Naruto is doing? Will he disobey and go to Iruka? Hmm, has Hinata woken up yet? And Ibiki is on his way, who-ever will he partner up with? I think only Choji is left, what an odd couple that would be.

Thank you for the quick updates Mistress, it is a very good weekend.

I think your plot is a psychological character study which happens to involve a lot of delicious sex. It's not a story that just reads sex, sex, sex. I think more about the characters and why they do what they do to each other; why they need pain. You show that so well. And the two scences describing Gaara's garden and large stone, again poetry. The other scences are a poetry too of their own kind.

I am so sorry I haven't reviewed untill now. this story is so awsome and intence that I really don't know what to say. its so much more then a bondage fic. its so detailed and well oviously hot but its got so many intence emotionas wraped up in it. I fell so sorry for itachi and the thing that went on with sasuke. its sad that his first introduction to that kind of life turned out that badly. I think its awsome that you made kisame a black man (^_^) I've never thought of it like that, cool I like them as a couple it really suits them. Iruka and kikashi are an awsome couple they really love each other, gaara and shika too, I'm glad he found someone to help him start getting over the whole blood craving thing. hehe naruto has got sasuke soo whiped (litaliry hehe...) he's iching just iching for naruto to make him suffer (where it be pain of pleasure of just both). his trying to stay away from him is just some major denile, he'll give in eventually and then he can fully submit to his kyuubi master ! (YOSH!) all the other couple are great too but I was kinda suprised by the sai and neji thing. I almost fell out my chair when you turned Lee's double lotus into an kind of intense blow job, then the pervert in me reared it's head and I was like (hehe whoa....) I fell so sorry for iachi-kun he can't cum for a week (the cruelty!). I was wondering for a while why Itachi had such a strange obsession with his brother but then again when I read about what happend its perfectly understandable if still not a bit desturbing but then again in this sort of thing that can be a good thing.can't wait to see naru-chan as a sub , I want to see how good a slave he can be, iruka said he was reckless as one but he must have some confidence in him if he let him be a dome after training under him as a sub. I sapose sasuke can be a good dome but I like him better as a sub, besides he needs the submission. well keep up the good work ! I love your fic and I shal continue to be a davoted reader!

Ja ne!

OMG i love how sasuke is a total sub for naruto, i mean naruto isn't even there and he fantasies about him. I just wish he would get over his fucking pride and allow naruto to be his master! Even though he is already in his mind

o____0 everytime i log in i see a new chapter. and i log in a lot. i have come to a conclusion that you are not human. one cannot possibly update SO fast, and have a story SO good. not possible. therefore you MUST be a goddess. damn, i need sleep. haha >_< bah, let me review as best as my sleep deprivity allows me to. i was reading over a previous chapter the one which shino and kankuro first meet, and i was like damn! like ino, last semester i took etomology on tues and thrus. so if you got a question about bugs/ insects/ creepy crawlies i might know an answer. even bug sex. haha. (not joking though) but my profesor wasn't hot. boo. initially, i think i missed the smex scene with kank/shino (agggghh though i'm not sure how i missed it >_<). god kankuro is hot. dirty talk is the best. ^^ i did not expect expect a sasu/ita chapter at all. i was pleasantly suprised, so angsty. just the way i like it. and kisame's claiming of itachi. craziness. @__@. HOT craziness. i was half expecting itachi to have some regrets when he sobered up, but he has some ambivalence nonetheless. and you say you're not so good at plot?? i beg to differ and i'm not just saying it to stroke your ego. the plot is thick and heavy, the sex complimenting it very well. however there are so many subsidities in the story, with each and every pairing and all, it *may* be hard to wrap up into a (hopefully not soon from now ;-) ending. but i'm sure you'll find a way to tie up all the winding roads, if you don't already have a vague plan of how to do it. OKAY, that was my review/ rant. back to homework i go!