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*Has just become a puddle of drool on the floor and is sure you're out to kill her with these chapters* Sasuke.. masturbating.. licking up his own cum... O GOD!! the mental image of that... is just.. wow... *becomes a puddle again* you my dear are making me all stick :p

OMG, that was so freaking Hott, lover needs to pick up the phone... Oh God the phone O.o with Naruto's cock on it... he's just gonna die isn't he? I'd be dying. He needs to call Naruto and Beg. Beg for forgiveness, beg for him to come. God , LOL, I have no kinda self control when it comes to shit like that. That was awesome, I'm really excited about your plot too XD. Yay!! You're on a roll, please please, update soon. With nothing but love and adoration, Allys.

Everything is relative. I'm afraid you have corrupted me Mistress. A month ago I would never have believed that reading about Itatchi walking into a store to buy a cockring from Naruto would have me nearly apoplectic with laughter. Thank you this whole chappie was just sooooo enjoyable. And Ibiki is perfect.

Holy SHIT!!! NOOOOOO!!! Sasuke... oh god.... Oh God, NO. Damn IT!!!!!!!! Holy shit, this sucks butt :( The big, fat, hairy, Ugly kind :(. OMG... These guys just won't get a break will they. My heart hurts. I need to rub it. Holy SHIT, Oh God that chapter started out soo Hott. I love that Naruto designed the homosexual line of Icha Icha sex toys, LOL. And Sai's collar - that's just Fantastic, I Love it. That was the best idea ever. Ibiki - Hello Love XD. And Itachi, god still so smexy. Not to mention that Naruto seems to be on the fast track, but Damn it!! Everything sort of God waylaid by Sasuke at the end . Still I have to say Thank you so MUCH, that was excellent XD, I haven't done that in a while, leave a review only to click back to the lastest page and found that you've updated. I love you - Thank you. That was an awesome chapter, even if it is threatening to give me palpitations.

omfg... no Sasuke you got the wrong idea... omg what is going on back there... Itachi... Naruto.. someone say something @_@ Omg Ibiki is so weird and I love Naruto's ability to give nicknames... my favorite by far is him calling Lee 'Fuzzy-brows' Well enjoying this story so far and update when you can.

“Pussies” -- ha-ha! I’m liking “Scareface” Ibiki already! Between him, Kisame, and Kakashi, they sound like they right up there with the “Last of the Ass-kickers” and they’re looking to initiate Naruto in their membership. In fact, I liked that Naruto wasn’t easily intimidated, another good sign that he would be a good dom for Sasuke. Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke, somebody please talk to this boy and set him, um, right? I wanted to say “set him straight”, but that doesn’t seem applicable in this story (Ha-ha, made a funny – *choke*! *cough* *cough*! Ah-hem!)

I’m loving this “variation” on switching that would allow Itachi to be both dom and sub which does sounds do-able. When he’s privately with Kisame, he’s a sub, but when he’s publicly running the club, that can be considered a separate scene in which he’s the Dom of the City. See? He can bring home the bacon, fry it up in a pan, and never, ever let Kisame forget he’s a man! Once again, leave it to good ol’ Ibiki (who’s family is more fucked up than the Uchihas – I love that!) to have the clarity to point that out!

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Loved Sasuke's fantasy. It was very hot.
The interactions at Naruto's shop were fun. Wonderful humor. And poor Sasuke and Naruto that just can't seem to get a break. Ah well, I'm sure things will work out eventually.
Thanks for the updates.

Fianally, we get to see what the heck happened with Naruto and Sasuke. Too bad Sasuke's so ridiculous that he had to walk in at that very moment. I mean it is a piercing parlor! Eh, but I don't blame the poor guy. That previous scene with Sasuke masturbating. Damn. Who knew all that could be so hot, just him getting off? But the way all he could do was think about Naruto. And how all those rings and clamps and a piercing would always make him think of Naruto.

It was interesting to see all those people interacting at Naruto's shop though. It did seem like it became the after-club hangout on a Sunday morning. And I like how everyone's sort of drawn to Naruto. Ha, and he designs sex toys. That's flippin' hysterical. But I guess I would like to know more about Naruto's past. What he did in Seattle and all that? I hope Sasuke doesn't do anything stupid. And what was he doing going to Naruto's? He seemed too proud to do that. LOL and I like how Naruto sums it up that Sasuke's main problem is just that he's used to being top dog when in reality he's meant to be a sub. I'm sure that's only part of the problem really. I wonder if Sasuke's memories would come back if he was up on stage with Itachi... but I just don't foresee that ItachixSasuxNaru scene happening. The way that Itachi has been outed as a sub. And just the way Itachi and Naruto interact. They seem to get along really. And now that Itachi has Kisame, there's no reason for him to be jealous. But holy shit, if Sasuke doesn't figure out how Naruto feels he's gonna take a hella lot of shit out on Naruto. I wonder if Naruto would even be able to walk the day after. I still don't know if Sasuke is going to be completely rough or just rough but gentle because I bet Naruto will be a completely devoted sub. But a sub that needs someone with a lot of dominance. Which isn't something Sasuke has displayed lately. And poor Itachi needs to gain back that respect if he's gonna be a sub. Gah, what a hard position Kisame has asked him to be in, really. And Neji's such a bitch. I can't believe he can get away with acting like that to the club owner. Sheesh. How was he supposed to know Neji moved so fast or that Sai had quit? Neji is probably the most annoying guy. I anticipate the next few chapters. Seems like there's gonna be some drama. And I hope Sasuke doesn't wuss out and still shows up at the dojo, but he'll probably kick the shit out of Naruto. Or it'll be a draw. I don't see Naruto going soft just cuz it's Sasuke. But if Sasuke doesn't beat him, it'd set up a bad precedent for Saturday. But then again, it would only complicate the issue that Sasuke thinks he's the dom. I guess I'll just have to wait to find out.

WOW! You're amazing!! I can't believe it's already 43 chapters!!! I really love this story, especially the Sasuke and Naruto parts! I'm a sucker for this pairing -_-; I hope you keep the great work up. Tons of cookies for you!!!! :DD

That was fantastic. Sasuke and Naruto straightened out some of their misunderstandings and Naruto's fantasy was so hot that I flushed (and not with embarassment either). Thanks for another great chapter.